JPNML Posted May 21, 2012 Share Posted May 21, 2012 (edited) Hello once again,Here I show you my first presented MOC on BZPower, Raiden C&C appreciatedIf picture doesn't show up,tell me.If the link to bionicle wiki is forbidden please tell me.Edit: Image deeplinked - linking to the Bionicle Wiki is indeed forbidden.-Wind- Edited May 22, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBBBalta Posted May 21, 2012 Share Posted May 21, 2012 Well, there's definitely room for improvement. For starters, you used the Inika build - not that there's anything inherently wrong with that, per se, but custom is almost always better. Even a custom weapon or an extra bit of armor here and would have breathed life into the otherwise generic build. The color scheme could also use some work. You have four colors - dark green, lime, silver, and gunmetal, plus there's the trans-blue visor on the mask. MOCs tend to look best when they have two, maybe three colors. I'd recommend removing the gunmetal, as all the gunmetal parts on the MOC also come in one of the other three colors. In addition, both the forearms and hands are lime, making that region seem to run together. Dark green fist pieces would have been a better choice. The main problem with the MOC, though, is that there just isn't much to it. Giving him a weapon, maybe wings or a jetpack, some custom armor, or really anything you can think of to set him apart from the crowd will give this MOC a bit of personality, which is the main thing it's lacking. I'd love to see what you come up with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted May 21, 2012 Share Posted May 21, 2012 It's really plain. It looks like Lewa's head on an Inika body. By the way, does he have any tools or weapons? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPNML Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 yeah...room for improvement. I really like the inika build,and the lewa head is my favourite head. He does have weapons, but my camera died before i could take pics with his weapons. the hands and lower arms run together because i don't have dark green hands. for the custom build,we;ll,I'm running out of pieces,and my current custom build isn't working out as well as I thought.I ignored the blue head visor,mainly since it's part of the mask. I will post improved pictures soon. I have other toa MOCs,and they all have better builds,since i'm making a mini-story about it. He is the lowliest toa,with the simplest build.And so people don't ask, I have the metru upper arm pieces because I have a bigger MOC and I need the metru upper arm pieces to emphasize how big he is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBladivine Posted May 22, 2012 Share Posted May 22, 2012 I have 1 question, did you tried to assimilate this moc with the MK character Raiden? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPNML Posted May 22, 2012 Author Share Posted May 22, 2012 @TheBladivineNot in any way whatsoever. I just like the name Raiden. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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