turtleman Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 Windblade , my selfmoc, lived in a village built on a huge tree. One day after exploring the forest and using his kanohi he came back and found his village burning and a massive Makuta of fire standing over the village's turaga. Windblade, a matoran at the time, charged at the Makuta. The Makuta grabbed Mindblade by the neck and started choking him. the turaga threw a toa stone at Windblade transformed and kicked the makuta who disappeared leaving wisps of shadow.Windblade has control over air and limited control over plantlife.back shothis wings can flip and become swords Quote "EXTERMINATE"-Dalek #1 to #3458271 If you have a self MOC you would like me to build just PM me and I'll make it as long as I have the pieces. 3DS Friend Code: 4699-6562-6279 Pokemon Y safari: Audino, Dunsparce and Chansey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tikaro Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 Hello and welcome to BZPower Forums! I hope you are finding things to your liking, I know I am! I love the story that goes along with this creation. I have to ask though, was the story aspect created before or after you built this? I appreciate any use of Lewa's mask, so right off the bat you have points. The colors stay to a relatively small pool of selections, too, which is good. However, I do feel that the hands are a tad too large for the rest of this build. Also, the plant pieces on the legs seem to be a little out of place. Keep working, you can only get better! Quote • Kavana Nui Chronicles (Dead) •• Custom Creations • Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Of Virtues Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 Very creative use of the Matoran feet as the torso, I built a similar moc but with Toa Nuva feet as the torso. The only cons I can see is that the neck is a tad too long, and the hip is skinny. Other than that, it's a very nice moc! I didn't have time to read the story, I'll read it later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turtleman Posted August 7, 2012 Author Share Posted August 7, 2012 Hello and welcome to BZPower Forums! I hope you are finding things to your liking, I know I am! I love the story that goes along with this creation. I have to ask though, was the story aspect created before or after you built this? I appreciate any use of Lewa's mask, so right off the bat you have points. The colors stay to a relatively small pool of selections, too, which is good. However, I do feel that the hands are a tad too large for the rest of this build. Also, the plant pieces on the legs seem to be a little out of place. Keep working, you can only get better!Very creative use of the Matoran feet as the torso, I built a similar moc but with Toa Nuva feet as the torso. The only cons I can see is that the neck is a tad too long, and the hip is skinny. Other than that, it's a very nice moc! I didn't have time to read the story, I'll read it later.I thought of the story after and I do agree about the hands I'm not completely satisfied with the lower arms. As for the leaves, I think they look good. Also if the neck was shorter he would not be able to move his head as much. Quote "EXTERMINATE"-Dalek #1 to #3458271 If you have a self MOC you would like me to build just PM me and I'll make it as long as I have the pieces. 3DS Friend Code: 4699-6562-6279 Pokemon Y safari: Audino, Dunsparce and Chansey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 I like the backstory of this. It sounds a bit sad. The torso and the wings are both nicely designed. My only complaint is that the neck looks a bit too long but still, nice job on this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tikaro Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 Actually, the more that I look at it, the more the legs grow on me (heh, pun, 'cause you know, they're leaves...). I think it just happens to be the angel of the picture that caused me to not originally appreciate the leg build. Quote • Kavana Nui Chronicles (Dead) •• Custom Creations • Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onewa7 Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 As everyone said the neck is a bit long. But the rest is okay, maybe add a little more green on the upper legs. I love the leafy lower legs, arms and wings. The backstory is pretty cool too. Quote Onewa7, Encountering Protodermis! I accept PBZP requests! If you want one, PM me the details...PBZPs in the Archives: A B C C F H K L N P P S T New Forums PBZPs: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T T U V W X Y ZIf a letter is already taken, I can always do a PZBP, I'll just add another to the list. Blue= done, Red= taken and in progress, Green= coming soon.------------Also check My Bshelf My comedy: Bionicle Adventures. Part 1 in the Archives. Part 2 here. I accept guest stars requests. Chapter 12 is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkslizer Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 I like the overall feeling of the MOC with the flipping swords and the plant life ankle armor. The neck is a little too long, though. didn't really read the story, I was trying to focus on the pictures. I will read it after finishing this very post.awesome overall!! Quote Comply. Create. Consume. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanu Toa of Earth Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 (edited) I like the idea of custom bodies, but this MOC doesn't look as good as a standard, boring Toa build (maybe utilizing the Antroz technique to implement the wings) with equivalent gear would would. Try to do proportions at least a BIT better when making custom bodies. As it is, his neck, limbs and body make his mask seem huge and some of the colors are a bit odd too. Edited August 18, 2012 by Tanu Toa of Earth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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