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#1 Offline Tornado

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Posted Jun 11 2013 - 10:47 AM

this is merixle people please leave comments and criticizise

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#2 Offline Sheogorath

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Posted Jun 11 2013 - 10:57 AM

q: why would you need a close-up of the mask? xD the MOC is okay...nothing really jumps out as outstanding to me


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#3 Offline AdaptingChaos

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Posted Jun 11 2013 - 10:57 AM

This a pretty simple moc, although it looks like a slightly modified Toa Mahri Hahli. I do like the staff tho :)


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#4 Offline Phantomesque

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Posted Jun 11 2013 - 01:21 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(128,0,128);]Basic Toa build MoC. Personally, it just looks like a little revamp of Hahli Mahri.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(128,0,128);]To be more constructive, I will have to say the MoC as a whole is lacking.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(128,0,128);]The torso has a tiny bit of protection, which probably should be replaced with better armor.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(128,0,128);]The upper arms and legs are overall lacking in armor altogether.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(128,0,128);]I recommend you bulk up the MoC as the whole thing just looks like Hahli Mahri with minor adjustments.[/color][/font]


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#5 Offline The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 06:48 AM

Pretty neat concept bro! The armoring looks cool, along with the weapon. It does look simple though (I should know :P)My suggestion would be taking these steps for future success in MOCing:

 

1. Find inspiration

2. Form an idea

3. Create a rough draft

4. Build off of that

5. Edit it however you wish. (Wow, MOCing is like writing.)


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#6 Offline Chro

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 03:15 PM

1. Find inspiration

2. Form an idea

3. Create a rough draft

4. Build off of that

5. Edit it however you wish. (Wow, MOCing is like writing.)

To be quite honest, that can be reduced into two or three steps quite easily, although I tend to think of it as a flowing process of sorts, which varies and has no set designed order. But if I was breaking it down into steps:

1 - Begin with inspiration or designs (if you're building with complexity) that you want to use.

2 - Uh... build the MOC, basically. Yeah.


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