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Rainbow Dash Vector Complete


Eeko

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Yeah, I'm only doing the head. I don't feel like trying to vector the book cover. :P

 

I think I'm gonna try a Scootaloo pic next.

Anywho, all critiques are greatly appreciated!

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This is very good. Like seriously good. Not having any experience with vectors, I can't make an educated statement as far as the usual difficulty of making one, but the accuracy here is impressive.

 

Scootaloo is a yes.

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Are you trying to seduce me, Ms. Dash?

 

But really, this is really well done. The only thing I'm noticing is a slight wobbliness in the lines but if Inkscape is anything like Illustrator, then you should be able to quickly smooth them out as you begin perfecting your technique.

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Yeah, a lot of your lines are not quite as smooth as they should be, and you've got a real problem with your tangencies - you need to get down in there and work each individual line as an object, not just as a stroke. Look at the part where the yellow intersects with the dark blue line and the Orange - very unsettling transition. The ear to the head is another point that needs some work on it. Keep going at it, and if I can I'd suggest to you the book "Vector Basic Training", it's one of the best books in the industry and will give you the key to always having smooth lines and curves.

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Yeah, a lot of your lines are not quite as smooth as they should be, and you've got a real problem with your tangencies - you need to get down in there and work each individual line as an object, not just as a stroke. Look at the part where the yellow intersects with the dark blue line and the Orange - very unsettling transition. The ear to the head is another point that needs some work on it. Keep going at it, and if I can I'd suggest to you the book "Vector Basic Training", it's one of the best books in the industry and will give you the key to always having smooth lines and curves.

 

Yeah, I couldn't find a good way to end the line at those two points. Everything I tried looked too pointy, if that makes sense.

 

Thanks for the critique!

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