I really like her mask.

Everything else is gorgeous too, but I especially like her mask for some reason.

I agree the mask is excellent. The way you stylized the Rode fits perfectly.

I kidna feel like her legs are way too long, but it looks good for some reason.

Yeah, she does have really long legs. I'm not sure why they turned out like that, but when I tried drawing them shorter I couldn't get them to look right, so I just went "Oh what the heck I'll just have them long".

Oh, and thanks@ both of you about the Rode.

Nice, nice. The coloring job was well done, especially considering how similar some of the shades used are.

The detail and perspectives on this are quite good. To achieve more fluid poses, try using a line of action at the beginning of your drawing.

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I like it, but she seems a little too slender. Also, the mask kinda gives a "shark" feel, but it doesn't take away from the overall earthy design.

You mean she looks too thin, or she should be less sleek because she's a Toa of Earth?

You mean she looks too thin, or she should be less sleek because she's a Toa of Earth?

Somewhat the first. She just seems a little too small in the torso department, straying from what seems "natural" in my view.

Small and thin are different things. If her torso is too small (Which it kind of is as the legs are too long) that's different from it being too thin.

i didnt even realize it was a rode :U

but it looks great <3

Only complaint is that the pose is rather awkward.

I guess you could say all my poses are a bit awkward. I badly need to do some work on posture. Is there anything in particular that makes this one awkward?

hmm

it sort of looks as though her weight is all on her left leg, like she's leaning forward a bit.

and her hands could just be down at her sides instead of folded sort of weirdly in front.

I guess you could say all my poses are a bit awkward. I badly need to do some work on posture. Is there anything in particular that makes this one awkward?

Lines of action are the piece of the puzzle that you're missing I think. Try them!

This pose is static, there's no significant movement to it.

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There's no movement whatsoever. I am designing the characters here, so I need them still in order to figure their designs out. But I'll by all means do some pictures with motion.

I didn't realise it was a Rode, but I still thought it looked awesome.