Art Entry posted by Brickeens June 15, 2012 472 views Share More sharing options... Followers 0 Next in the Toa team project. She's a Toa of Earth.
Sumiki Posted June 15, 2012 I really like her mask. Everything else is gorgeous too, but I especially like her mask for some reason. Quote Link to comment
Chols Posted June 15, 2012 I agree the mask is excellent. The way you stylized the Rode fits perfectly. I kidna feel like her legs are way too long, but it looks good for some reason. Quote Link to comment
Brickeens Posted June 15, 2012 Yeah, she does have really long legs. I'm not sure why they turned out like that, but when I tried drawing them shorter I couldn't get them to look right, so I just went "Oh what the heck I'll just have them long". Oh, and thanks@ both of you about the Rode. Quote Link to comment
Toa of Dancing Posted June 15, 2012 Nice, nice. The coloring job was well done, especially considering how similar some of the shades used are. Quote Link to comment
55555 Posted June 16, 2012 The detail and perspectives on this are quite good. To achieve more fluid poses, try using a line of action at the beginning of your drawing. - 55555 Quote Link to comment
Paleo Posted June 16, 2012 I like it, but she seems a little too slender. Also, the mask kinda gives a "shark" feel, but it doesn't take away from the overall earthy design. Quote Link to comment
Brickeens Posted June 16, 2012 You mean she looks too thin, or she should be less sleek because she's a Toa of Earth? Quote Link to comment
Paleo Posted June 16, 2012 You mean she looks too thin, or she should be less sleek because she's a Toa of Earth?Somewhat the first. She just seems a little too small in the torso department, straying from what seems "natural" in my view. Quote Link to comment
Brickeens Posted June 16, 2012 Small and thin are different things. If her torso is too small (Which it kind of is as the legs are too long) that's different from it being too thin. Quote Link to comment
Cambion Posted June 17, 2012 i didnt even realize it was a rode :U but it looks great <3 Only complaint is that the pose is rather awkward. Quote Link to comment
Brickeens Posted June 17, 2012 I guess you could say all my poses are a bit awkward. I badly need to do some work on posture. Is there anything in particular that makes this one awkward? Quote Link to comment
Cambion Posted June 17, 2012 hmm it sort of looks as though her weight is all on her left leg, like she's leaning forward a bit. and her hands could just be down at her sides instead of folded sort of weirdly in front. Quote Link to comment
55555 Posted June 18, 2012 I guess you could say all my poses are a bit awkward. I badly need to do some work on posture. Is there anything in particular that makes this one awkward?Lines of action are the piece of the puzzle that you're missing I think. Try them! This pose is static, there's no significant movement to it. - 55555 Quote Link to comment
Brickeens Posted June 18, 2012 There's no movement whatsoever. I am designing the characters here, so I need them still in order to figure their designs out. But I'll by all means do some pictures with motion. Quote Link to comment
a goose Posted June 18, 2012 I didn't realise it was a Rode, but I still thought it looked awesome. Quote Link to comment
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