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Voltex

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From the Prologue 2 of Bionicle Mafia Uprising, Book 2:

“Well, you are now!” TBK snapped back. “I don’t know what Luroka did to you, Voltex, and I’m not sure what has you so bloody riled up, and quite frankly, I don’t really care. All I want to do is get off of this godforsaken island and go home and have some peace and quiet! So grow up, deal with it, and go talk to the officer!”

 

Voltex was on his feet in a flash, stalking over to the Po-Matoran with his cloak fluttering behind him as he stopped right in front of TBK, staring the Po-Matoran down. TBK met his glare, holding it defiantly.

 

“I was one of the best fighters in Bionifight,” Voltex said quietly. “Do you really want to be on the receiving end of my abilities?”

 

“Go ahead,” TBK said vehemently. “Keep in mind that you’ve already committed murder on this island – one more will just give the law enough proof to pin it all on you.”

 

Clenching his fist as his throat tightened, Voltex shut his eyes and stepped back, turning away to face the sea again before slumping. “I didn’t want to – it was the only way for us to get out.”

 

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So I'm busy writing away at this thing - I know exactly what I want to do in order to fix the oneshot I'm working on and the prologue of Book 2 is nearly 5000 words (we'll see if that's what we can expect out of every chapter...). Alongside that, Side Project A is still in the works, and I've seen the outline for Side Project B - hopefully both will be ready for a full announcement soon! ;)

 

Until next time!

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I want a preview of the scene where Vox gets launched into space.

 

-MT

Isn't Vox dead? :P

 

5000 words just for a prologue? Snikies. Looks like it will be a good one. :)

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I want a preview of the scene where Vox gets launched into space.

 

-MT

Isn't Vox dead? :P

 

His corpse can be launched into space. He deserves it. /inuniverse

 

Or, if we can't get Voxumo's corpse, we'll launch someone else named Vox (but not Voxumo) into space!

 

It seems TBK really does not like Voltex.

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It seems TBK really does not like Voltex.

 

If Voltex is killing people...nobody likes a murderer. Now VTex sounds like he has reasons, in addition to being, y'know, more evil, but still.

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The murders being referred to at this point in time are Kayn (well, attempted), Unit and Zakaro, so Voltex definitely had reason to and all, but if you're killing... yeah, not exactly the most "moral" of choices in the book.

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It seems TBK really does not like Voltex.

 

If Voltex is killing people...nobody likes a murderer. Now VTex sounds like he has reasons, in addition to being, y'know, more evil, but still.

 

37% more evil

Whatever that means.

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50% evil + 37% more evil = 87% evil. That means Voltex is only 13% good.

 

Or perhaps .5 X .37 = .185 and .5 + .185 = .685, thereby Voltex is 68% evil. Either way, it's bad news for everyone else in the story.

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