That mask works SO well. Though from this angle, the proportions of the torso look really bad.

lol wut?

The mask should have been true but the body looks bad, and making it wider won't help, and I don't even really understand what you are doing anyway. :/ Are you making a MoC or a dream set?

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First of all, that's a really bad picture angle. I can barely make out the basic shape of the torso and such.

Mask works well for a Tahu moc, but I really don't like the arms or torso...they just seem awkward and out of place. The torso is a bit sloppy and definantly needs some work. The normal toa feet just don't work here, but then there's not really very many mata red feet to choose from.

And the grey in the back is unattractive and bleh. Replace it with some more red and such. Even if it is supposed to represent the gears, it just doesn't work.

EDIT-Mixed up Metru red with Mata red.

Overall, decent job.

.:Sora:.

*really wishes Lego made orange Rahkshi legs*

Don't we all?

Is that a McToran Body? If so, <3

*gag*

 

I'm sorry, I hate it. It's the worst thing you've ever made. Like a block... with... limbs... disproportionate limbs...

 

There IS no signoff!

The Mata were disproportionate. But it was pulled off right.

Wait, do you like the Mistake-a Newva?

Maybe it's the picture angle or the pose... but it doesn't look to good.

=/

The bleys, black, and Metru red need to go, and the body's a mess

If you're saying things like "not so bad" then you're obviously not that happy with them either. You shouldn't publish a MOC that you're not completely happy with, unless you absolutely have to. You still had like a week to improve them.

 

Overall, many of your MOCs feel rushed, and by the speed at which you're going, I'd say that they are. Quality should come before quantity, even if that means working on a single MOC for several months. If you have the potential to make things like this, then at the very least, your following MOCs should be that quality, if not better.

 

Hope you get some use out of this.

*gag*

 

I'm sorry, I hate it. It's the worst thing you've ever made. Like a block... with... limbs... disproportionate limbs...

 

There IS no signoff!

The Mata were disproportionate. But it was pulled off right.

 

Wait, do you like the Mistake-a Newva?

 

 

*really wishes Lego made orange Rahkshi legs*

 

Don't we all?

 

Is that a McToran Body? If so, <3

I want brown and white. Is that too much to ask?

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Interesting MOC. The body looks a little weird, and no chest ball like you wanted.

Arms are nice, except for the bley.

Needs more orange. Like put orange krana in the legs like another MOCist did once.

You should have built some legs or something since you wanted orange. (The rahaga had orange +O+ and those could help)

Considering the legs are the only dark red here, you should have not used them. As Shine has said, a little more time would have helped make this a little better.

Likes: Feet, sword.

The mask is interesting. I guess you can keep it, but I'd like to see him with his Hau on.

-CF