Moar Wip MOCs Entry posted by Bundalings October 9, 2008 313 views Share More sharing options... Followers 0 *chikt* *chikt* BtB
Letagi Posted October 9, 2008 The head has fail. That's all I'm going to say. Actually it isn't. The head doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the MOC. Maybe it's because I imagined CS to be femaleish before you posted pictures. - Quote Link to comment
Guest kopakanuva13 Posted October 9, 2008 Lol ur a borok Clear Sky is looking awesome, but the back of the head is a bit awkward :/ ~CK Quote Link to comment
ChocolateFrogs Posted October 9, 2008 You layered the leg armor with Inika shoulder armor. You're amazing! I'm really excited that you are getting into system. Perhaps some work could be done to the chest (looks weird and blockish like that) and back (messy), but overall I like it. As for the head, those blue slopes on the side should be replaced with something smaller and doesn't stick forward as much, so as to be able to show the "eye" or whatever that can not be seen, but I really like those black things extending back. -CF Quote Link to comment
Bundalings Posted October 9, 2008 The head has fail. That's all I'm going to say. Actually it isn't. The head doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the MOC. Maybe it's because I imagined CS to be femaleish before you posted pictures. - *hssssssss* Clear Sky was always male. The only female out of the four KMR units is Tempest. Probably because Cera, their creator, thought females were too better... and she didn't want a revolt. You layered the leg armor with Inika shoulder armor. You're amazing! I'm really excited that you are getting into system. Perhaps some work could be done to the chest (looks weird and blockish like that) and back (messy), but overall I like it. As for the head, those blue slopes on the side should be replaced with something smaller and doesn't stick forward as much, so as to be able to show the "eye" or whatever that can not be seen, but I really like those black things extending back. -CF Yeah, the back needs some armor. I'm not sure what parts I should use yet. I'll see about the slopes. I kinda like the tusk look though... reminds me of the horn the original Clear Sky had... but I'll look into using something shorter or less obscuring. BtB Quote Link to comment
Shine Posted October 10, 2008 The head has fail.The head has win. So do the legs and arms. Mount the arms higher on the torso and do something about that enormous hole in its back. Nice job. Quote Link to comment
Neaku Posted October 10, 2008 The head has fail.The head has win. So do the legs and arms. Mount the arms higher on the torso and do something about that enormous hole in its back. Nice job. Also upper torso is hole-y and block-y. Quote Link to comment
Ghostie Posted October 10, 2008 Hate arms. Torso needs moar blue, less black. <3 legs. Head is just eeew. Quote Link to comment
Bitter Cold Posted October 10, 2008 Can you link to Flickr? It has unmonitored commentation... I left my opinions on Flickr. ^-^ Quote Link to comment
Bundalings Posted October 10, 2008 Can you link to Flickr? It has unmonitored commentation... I left my opinions on Flickr. ^-^ Tufi says: Yes! BtB Quote Link to comment
ToM Dracone Posted October 10, 2008 If you incorporate Hahli's blended Inika pieces into this I will be very happy. Not least because this MOC could do with a few bright accents, and the blue-white blends create that, with their intermediate light blue... Quote Link to comment
Bundalings Posted October 10, 2008 If you incorporate Hahli's blended Inika pieces into this I will be very happy. Not least because this MOC could do with a few bright accents, and the blue-white blends create that, with their intermediate light blue... I could, but I didn't really like the way the intermediate blue looked on it. It was like adding another color to the MOC... and only on a few parts. Maybe. BtB Quote Link to comment
Distorted Posted October 10, 2008 I'm really sorry, Bunda. I don't like it. The legs are great. Everything else is oddly shaped and cluttered. Remove the Carapar head, take off the airplane fin on the hand, redo the upper torso, redo the head (perhaps make it pointier) and spread out the blue more evenly. Quote Link to comment
Zipper Posted October 10, 2008 Goodness man, shorten that torso and give it some shoulder armour NAO! Legs are <3 though. Quote Link to comment
Pulsy Posted October 18, 2008 Goodness man, shorten that torso and give it some shoulder armour NAO! Legs are <3 though. And change the head. Kinda weird and blocky. Quote Link to comment
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