Loving the music.

I suggest you do something with the Mata-Nui/Three Virtues symbol, though. It just looks... unrealistic. Give it a metal gloss and texture.

Still quite good though, so keep it up.

The words look suckish, IMHO.

Great Intro.

The text font is okay, but I think it will look better if the font style is consistent.

Btw, we should show credits during Takanuva's flying between dimensions part.

I'm doing a better one now, don't worry.

Well, it won't work in Windows Media player, so I can not watch it =/

New version has been posted.

-LK

I wish I had made that. Nice job.

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That music was incredible.

Yummy. I still think that we should have a nice shot of Metru Nui as the title is coming into view [as said here] but since I'm pretty sure it hasn't been modeled yet I'll let it pass. And something needs to be done about the text, it doesn't look very... professional. The light blue and the white make it a little hard to read - and the red on the title is... not what I would have picked.

What would you want me to do with the opening text?

I CAN'T SEE THE MOVIE! Could you make a non-Quicktime version? Oh, and here's my approval:

Yummy. I still think that we should have a nice shot of Metru Nui as the title is coming into view [as said here] but since I'm pretty sure it hasn't been modeled yet I'll let it pass. And something needs to be done about the text, it doesn't look very... professional. The light blue and the white make it a little hard to read - and the red on the title is... not what I would have picked.

What would you want me to do with the opening text?

I think that a different font would be good - something a little less cartoony. I think a rough grey would be a good color for it, or a dark red. And if you're going to have the glow, make it much paler and smaller. As it is it is somewhat eye-blinding (you don't want to go around blinding nice people do you)? The title should definitely be a grey, kind of a scratched metal color. This isn't the happiest movie out there - the bright red does not fit with that concept.

I think I had a different idea altogether of the text originally but I don't remember it now. Oh well.

Vimeo.