I've seen much worse. She looks slightly OOP.

I looks good to me. I kinda like how the face turned out

I've seen much worse. She looks slightly OOP.

...thanks?

Say, what does OOP mean?

I looks good to me. I kinda like how the face turned out

Thanks!

...IIIIAAAA! You know, Mangaia? Makuta's lair?

I was basically here to say that, but I'll also say that the proportions of the torso seem a little off. The arms may be a little too small.

It may not be your best work, speaking proportionally, but you have an immense sense of details (the gloves, the little skull, the bats). The face really is quite good, as well.

Something that puzzles me a bit, though, is how you suddenly jump elegantly across many of the techniques I´ve seen you using so often before, when they would more seemingly fit well here. The hair, for instance, looks two-dimensional, with it being parted by a single straight line, instead of curving it along the head, which would seem more appropriate, IMO. That, and it seems slightly - if only very slightly - disturbed by the line going up her waist, combined with a strangely straight back (which I would personally have expected more curving inwards).

~MOSM~

Mangaaaa

Nooooooo

I think it looks really good. Some proportions are a little off in some ares, but the detail and colors look great.

I kinda like the way the face ended up too, even if it was by accident.

It doesn't look completely anime, but it still turned out really well.

Anime isn't one of my favorite art styles anyway, I think it's a bit over rated.

Anyway, great to see some of your art again, T Nuvia!

-Jordboy1

Out of proportion.

I love everything about it!

Perfect cute comic material. B)

...IIIIAAAA! You know, Mangaia? Makuta's lair?

 

I was basically here to say that, but I'll also say that the proportions of the torso seem a little off. The arms may be a little too small.

lol, right...

Now that you say it, I see it, too.

It may not be your best work, speaking proportionally, but you have an immense sense of details (the gloves, the little skull, the bats). The face really is quite good, as well.

 

Something that puzzles me a bit, though, is how you suddenly jump elegantly across many of the techniques I´ve seen you using so often before, when they would more seemingly fit well here. The hair, for instance, looks two-dimensional, with it being parted by a single straight line, instead of curving it along the head, which would seem more appropriate, IMO. That, and it seems slightly - if only very slightly - disturbed by the line going up her waist, combined with a strangely straight back (which I would personally have expected more curving inwards).

 

~MOSM~

The "straight-back-look" was supposed to be a slightly baggy shirt - I didn't want it to be skin-tight... but I guess I gotta practise on.

Of course it is not my best work - as said, it was an experiment. ^^

Mangaaaa

Nooooooo

why noooooot

I think it looks really good. Some proportions are a little off in some ares, but the detail and colors look great.

I kinda like the way the face ended up too, even if it was by accident.

It doesn't look completely anime, but it still turned out really well.

 

Anime isn't one of my favorite art styles anyway, I think it's a bit over rated.

 

Anyway, great to see some of your art again, T Nuvia!

 

-Jordboy1

I never managed to do "real" manga or anime style... I'm just not able to do that - yet

Out of proportion.

Ah, I see. Thanks for explaining ^^

I love everything about it!

Perfect cute comic material. B)

Hee hee, thanks. :blush:

Mangaaaa

Nooooooo

why noooooot

'Cause they weeeeeeird