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While surfing online, I found this picture. I have been looking for an image of this forever.

After the swarms were neutralized, the Matoran quickly found a way to harness the Bohrok's rolling locomotion to traverse Mata Nui with greater speed. Happy Febrovery 2024!

I'm working on something like that!

Not mine, but these were the masks:

I guess there's no proper review topic for this one? It's a decent start, and an interesting concept, but as others have said it feels a little unpolished at the moment. Personally, I'd recommend taking the time to write and edit most/all of the story before you start uploading, that way there aren't long waits between chapters, and people won't have to potentially go back and reread multiple times when you edit or change things.

Lesovikk using dirty tactics to get close to a Makuta is a cool idea for a story, but as is this chapter/introduction is pretty short, and the spelling/punctuation errors are noticeable. With another proofread, this would be an intriguing introduction.