Nine Ball
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Love the feet, it makes him look like he could stride on water (which should be a job requirement of anyone who can call himself 'stealthy'). The raised shoulders look also adds to the intimidation factor. Overall, I think the MOC is well done. However, the color scheme feels very 'off', if anything. The blue pins stick out (I wish black friction pins were more widespread...), and that red piece in the middle clashes with the blue pins which clash with the black/grey and it just ends up looking messy. While I understand what you're trying to accomplish with the silver (and it's perfectly acceptable to have silver weapons for obvious reasons), the silver is poorly spread out among the rest of the MOC. I think you should replace those silver Bohrok teeth with black ones, so that it can relegate silver to weaponry only. Finally, I think there should be more grey incorporated into the color scheme. As it is now, it looks stuck between a sub color and a highlight color, so adding more grey to the MOC overall will stabilize the color scheme.Sorry about making the criticism part look more prominent than the compliment part...I think it is a good MOC, but the color scheme could use some work.
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That...that is easily the longest comment I have ever written for one single person's profile. It is extremely long. It is so long that I am having trouble describing how long it is. In fact, this might just be another long commen. I hope this one doesn't get cut off too. That would just be weird. Have I explained how long that last comment was?
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Well, I made the rifle. I couldn't find any of the barrel pieces you used, so I made my own version. I also included a foregrip and a scop on it too, just to make it look cooler. And, aside from two blue half-axle-half-pin things (that I put in the perfect spot so you can't even see them
) and two of the gray 3+ rods that have the stud on the end and the laser thing from the Nuparu set,
