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  1. IC: Kairyn

     

    Kiaryn noticed the Teal Musician sitting down next to him and ordering a drink. Curious, he motioned to the bartender

     

    "I'll have what he's having." he said. Taking a sip of ale, he enjoyed the sweet taste, he thought it would be the right thing to be friendly to this stranger.

     

    So, paying the 2 widgets for his drink, the bartender asked the Teal Musician to pay for his, so I said, "Excuse me, sir, but I'll pay for your drink.", holding two more widgets. The Teal Musician smiled as he took the widgets and payed.

  2. Wow, great revamp. I enjoy how you added all the posability, but still had the old torso, sword, feet, hand, and mask, etc. that make Tahu Mata recognizable. I also agree that it would look better if the Vahki legs were orange, but I'm not sure it was even made in that color. I also think the hand looked a little too bulky with the Matoro Mahri armor piece attached to it. Other than that. good work!

  3. OOC: @Geardirector LOL you ninja'd me there XD

     

    IC: Kairyn:

     

    Entering the inn, the first thing Kairyn noticed was a bag lying on the floor. Making sure nobody was looking, he looked around in the bag. The contents: about 1000 widgets, and a map of the island.

     

    "This'll help", he though to himself, slinging the bag over his shoulder, he approached the bar table, dodging a few Bamboo Disks along the way. Kairyn sits down on one of the empty stools, and waits for service.

  4. IC: Kairyn

     

    Arriving in Le-Wahi, I see swamp all around me, but up ahead I see a strange chute. entering it, I am being taken somewhere, fast. Probably faster than the Kualsi.

     

    The chute takes me to a bustling village, full of music, shops, and the like.

     

    This must be Le-Koro.

     

    seeing a large place far away, I use another chute to get me there.

     

    A sign above the place says, "Bright-Star Inn". I enter the Inn.

  5. IC: Kairyn

     

    The guards at the gate tell me that I am in the village of Ta-Koro, on the island of Mata Nui and allow me to pass.

     

    Entering the great village of Fire, I don't know where to begin. I feel like exploring this strange island.

     

    "I'll come back here later" I think to myself. Up ahead, I see an entrance to a dark chamber. A sign above says, "Ta-Onu-Le-Koro Subtransect" A map to the right says that "Le-Koro" is north, then a turn to the left. I speed off toward Le-Koro using the Kualsi's power.

     

    OOC: Kairyn to Le-Wahi

  6. IC: Kairyn

     

    Thanks to the power of his Kanohi (the Kualsi, mask of Quick Travel), getting to the strange gate didn't take long.

     

    There were two Ta-Matoran guarding, so I asked them

     

    "Excuse me, but do you know where I am?"

     

     

    OOC: Sorry to anyone who read my first post about any problems about the Kanohi. It was origionally the Kiril, but I realized that the Kiril was not a permitted mask.

  7. I've stepped on Lego before, but what hurt the most for me isnt even BIONICLE or lego related.

    Any Pokemon fans know how the recent tins and boxes for the TCG have little figures in them? I stepped on a Zekrom figure once, the spike on his head facing UP, I bled pretty good.

  8. IC: Kairyn

     

    Toa Kairyn awakens on the shore of Ta-Wahi. He remembers nothing.

     

    "Where am I?"

     

    Standing up, Kairyn finds a sword and strange mask a few feet away.

     

    "Good thing I found these, I don't like to go to strange places unarmed."

     

    Seeing a gate lit with torches about a kio away, Kairyn approaches the gates of Ta-Koro..

  9. Name: Kairyn (K-eye-rin)

    Species: Toa of Fire

    Descripion: Black/Red Basic Inika Skeleton with Tahu Stars' feet, Nuva chest+shoulder armour, and Hordika Chest piece on back; his mask is a solid red Kualsi

    Gender: Male

    Powers: any powers Toa of Fire have and quick travel (due to mask)

    Weapons: Inferno Sword (looks like Ackar's sword with a Tahu Mata Sword on each side),

    Weaknesses: Water (of course), somewhat slow

    Alignment: Good

    Personality: Kind to others, Leadership qualities, impulsive (tends to do things without thinking it out thoroughly)

     

    (edited due to some things (weapons and mask) not being permitted)

  10. Set-wise: 2002. The Bohrok were small, but very cool in my opinion, only thing wrong with them is that they're EXACTLY the same thing, just different colors, shields, etc. And the Toa Nuva :drooling:

    Story-wise: Not quite sure, the whole Ignition Saga (2006-2008) was AMAZING, though.

  11. Well, some better quality pictures might be nice. As it is, it's kind of difficult to make out the details of the MOC, even with close-ups. From what I can see, looks like a neat HF frame. I'd recommend adding some color to spice up the black/gunmetal build and make it more unique.

    From a storyline perspective, how in heck does a Makuta kill Heroes? XD

    Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, an ipod isn't exactly the best thing to take pictures with XD

    Now that you do mention it, he does need some color, maybe some gold because he already has some gold on the hands?

    And he kills heroes because in my "alternate reality", he escaped to the HF world, so there's 3 Makuta left: Sardrox, Miserix, and Teridax from the Melding. And he gets bored once in a while, so he goes out every so often and kills heroes. That was kind-of my answer to why there's all the HF parts in a BIONICLE MOC.

  12. This is my Self-MOC, Makuta Sardrox!

     

    Notes:

    • His name means, "Light's bane"
    • He kills Hero Factory heroes and upgrades himself with the parts he acquires.
    • Weapon: Shadow Excalibur
    • Mask: Kanohi Skatten, Mask of Black Holes. It allows the user to create Black holes, but it takes quite a while to recharge between uses.

    1. Skatten is a corruption of Schatten, the German word for Shadow.
    2. I know he's mainly made of HF parts, but I'm kind of new to Bionicle, so I don't have many parts available.

    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0506.jpg

    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0507.jpg

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    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0509.jpg

    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0510.jpg

    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0511.jpg

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    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0514.jpg

    http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/MakutaSardrox123/Sardrox/img_0515.jpg

     

    Sorry about so many pictures. Enjoy!

  13. Wow, 10 years. I'm kind of a new guy to Bionicle, so I only saw it for the 1st time last year (bought the DVD at FYE), and i'll admit it was quite cheesy, but it was pretty cool. Anyone up for a Blu-Ray re-release for the 10th anniversary? I don't know if LEGO would go along with it, but maybe...

  14. I agree with the Avohkii being overused in MOCs. The Hau is another common one too. Set-wise, the Chronicler's Staff was used alot as well: Iruini, Garan, Brutaka, Photok, it was used so much that its not really a "rare piece" anymore.

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