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Toa Funkenstein

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  1. The Great Being Civil War epic without the death of the piraka.
  2. I hardly know where to start. This is a divine prime example of what a fanfic should be. The immersion is verbally unexpressable ( as is this whole chronicle), the story and events are epic and the deconstruction of the universe is mind-blowing and makes you understand the universe so well. This epic literally completes bionicle, filling all gaps, explaining everything and bringing the whole cycle of the Great Beings into a grand, satisfying conclusion. The level of dedication put into the immersion and understanding the universe and the characters is mind-blowing, and how you add to it by coming into these epic conclusions by combining existing elements (e.g the whole thing with dedtiny). There are no words to express what this means to G1 fans, this is the second missing half of BN that fills all gaps and holes. Plus it was awesome how you managed to fit Vezon into the story, a real fan service. This is probably one of the best epics (in the very sense of the word) written in entire human history. Every G1 fan should read this. There are though some complaints: Major complaints: 1. Toa Tuyet's death was a bit cheap. 2. Mata Nui's enabling of MU being reproduction was too mary sue. 3.The death of the piraka was a huge fan disservice, completely anticlimactic and not adding anything. Minor complaints: 1. A reunion with Vakama and Lhikan would've been nice. 2. A little bit more Vezon would've been nice.
  3. Cool dude, I have a proposal; I'm a terrible builder but I'm planning to make a Spherus Magna adventure map, so may I merge your Bara Magna map with mine? I'll give you half the credit to the whole project.
  4. Avak and his gun!!! (because seismic pickaxe sounds too non-Avak)
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