BronzeJet (I can FLY)

Chapter Six But did I? I thought to myself. I knew I could easily leave here by myself using the fire escape on the back of the building. I know I can’t trust a stranger but can I really just leave her to die here. “No” I said out loud and then I grabbed a knife and cut away the duct tape. It is better to have a friend than a foe in this world. I decided to not tape her hands she was going to need them to climb down the ladder. I quickly grabbed a few duffle bags and stuffed them with food and weapons. I slung a few assault rifles around my shoulders and then grabbed a sword and a machete. I tossed a pistol and a sword to the girl. “Come on this way.” I said quickly. As we ran up the stairs from the second floor to the sixth I asked her. “Hey before we die in this building I would like to know your name.” She responded saying. “How would we die? Oh… and my name is Carole.” “Well Carole.” I said. “We are going to die from having to run up four flights of stairs.” “Oh” She said. Clearly not noticing the sarcasm. “I need to stop.” Said Carole. “We need to keep moving though.” Replied Scott. “we need. TO! STOP!” She yelled. “Okay okay just be a little quieter hm.” *Five minutes later* “uuuuggghh” “What was that?” Said Carole as she glanced down the corridor that led to the next flight of stairs. “Sounds like a walker” Said Scott. Looking in the same direction. As he was speaking they caught the smell of rotting meat. “Yep that's definitely the walker horde.” Said Scott. They quikly ran into a room and shut the door. “Wait do you hear that?” Asked Carole after a moment of silence. “Yeah is...is that a person?” Said Scott “I think so” Responded Carole. Then someone came over and knocked on our window. Then slammed the butt of a shotgun against it shattering it on impact. They then stuck their head through where the window had been previously. “Helloooooo” They called out then they spotted us and said. “Well come on don’t be shy there are enough of these stinking things for everyone. We walked over to the door and opened it. We looked around to see the corpses of what looked like almost all of the walkers that were by the doors earlier. “Who are you?” Asked Carole. “Why that is no way to thank someone for saving their behinds. Oh wait what's that?” They asked starting to jump up and down very quickly. “Ross has been cured!” They exclaimed excitedly. Turning around I leaned over and whispered something to Carole. “I don’t think this guy is right in his head.” REVIEW TOPIC

is it wrong that i am already planning to kill somebody in this story

eeeh i still think that would be cool just a shield formed from the power of optimism

for some reason i just feel that when they are fighting in the stadium when bronze is targeted he will be attacked but will be saved by an invisible wall of optimism

eh... freedom of speech and besides i bet you haven't even read it yet

just gonna say this in here cause this was on the main page and i want more people to read my story HEY ANYONE WHO HASN'T ALREADY GO READ MY STORY IT HAS A LINK IN MY SIG JUST CLICK ON THE BLODD TEXT!

yeah i'm surprised that i do this really quickly every saturday which is my deadline for posting them by the way and i never really have any motivation for them i just stop everything else that i'm doing and type.

this is a good chapter can't wait for the huge fight it seems like it is going to end soon which will be a shame and just as a recommendation you could put a link to the review topic into every chapter so people don't have to scroll back up but yeah really good chapter plenty of suspense to go around and I CAN NOT wait until the next chapter is out.

Okay next chapter is up. ---> http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/21737-the-tale-of-a-murderers-brother/

Chapter Five “Who are you?” I asked again in a hoarse voice. I waited there for 5 more minutes without a response. I turned around and walked towards a shelf to grab a flashlight. After finding one I walked back with duct tape and zip ties along with the flashlight. I reached down and duct taped their hands to the arm rails and their legs to the legs of the chair after that I took the zip ties and zip tied their hands and legs to the chair. I then took the flashlight and shined it in their face. I was expecting to see a wild eyed boy but instead I saw a girl with a triumphant look in her eyes. I had the thought of letting her go with a small amount of food and weapons but almost immediately erased it from my head. If i did that then she would just come back later and take more stuff. No, she wasn’t leaving this place unless it was as an ally or a corpse. “What’s your name little girl?” I asked in a gentle voice. When she didn’t answer me I decided to ask a different question. “How old are you?” Again not an answer. “Okay how long have you been stealing my supplies and how else have you been surviving this long?” She didn’t answer again, but she did look me in the eyes and then glance at my gun. “Would you be more comfortable if i put this away?” She nodded her head in a silent yes so I took off the silencer and placed them both on the counter. I then brought my own chair over and plopped down in it. “Can you tell me how old you are?” I asked not even expecting an answer at this point “whispers.” Wait did she just say something I asked myself. “Can you say that louder please?” “I said that it’s none of your business.” She said almost yelling. I responded quickly trying to keep her talking. “Wow you don’t need to yell you might attract a Walker.” “What does it matter.” She asked. “You obviously have enough artillery to defend this place” Nodding her chin to the weapons behind me. “Okay, now that you're talking can you tell me how long you have been stealing from me?” “Well.” She said think for a bit. “It was about a week and a half ago, I was…” She suddenly stopped talking and her eyes glazed over. If I had to guess I would guess that she was probably remembering something terrible. Then I heard a moan and jumped out of my chair, running to the window to look out a saw what looked like 20 walkers breaking through the fence of my safe house. I looked down at the opening to the building and saw maybe 20 or 30 walkers there. I knew then that I had no choice. I have an allie?! REVIEW TOPIC

cool can't wait for the next chapter emphasis on the word can't

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alright alright cool it you 2 I now arguing when I smell it

but do you have it written

hey has this died?

okay

Chapter Four: 3 Months Later In A Completely Different Town I looked over my supplies. Almost 90 packs of water bottles, to many MRE’s to count, enough weapons for a safe house (if those even existed), and keys to various different cars and building with almost the same amount of supplies. Again I am thinking that I have enough supplies for multiple armies. If I wasn’t the only person alive for MILES if at all. I could have shared this with my family if they weren’t brutally murdered by my brother. I have to stop thinking about that though. I have hardly talked since than and life has been like hades as the ancient greek called it. Funny how even after the apocalypse I refuse to swear. Just how like I even started clearing all of the churches of walkers and setting up fences. Oh well time to head out. Everyday is the same. I go out and scavenge the area for stuff I have already found. Check all of my temporary safe houses for leaks. Go over the supplies. And then when everything is checked and i’m sure that everything is in order I go… wait that can’t be right. My weapons are missing. I specifically remember have 52 guns and 97 machetes in this safe house but today there are only 48 guns ammo missing for each one and 74 machetes. Maybe someone else is alive and I just don’t know it. Or it’s just that I misplaced them or moved them I continue to check everything. Yet here again there is things missing. I’m missing about 8 water bottles and 9 canned peaches. Alright now the weapons I might have misplaced because of the amount that I have but I would never be careless enough to lose that much precious food and water. That's when I hear it. I don’t know if it is a squeak or if it was just them moving but I heard it none the less. Turning around and drawing my weapons I looked around expecting a Charlie (that's what I called babies that have been turned there much smarter and faster) I searched looking every where. I had to be cautious Charlies where way too smart for anything else. I turned after checking everywhere thinking that it might have been my imagination but then I heard shoes scraping on the floor and turned to see someone running towards the window. I quickly grabbed them and slammed them into a nearby metal chair. I sheathed my machetes and pulled the 44 magnum from it’s holster on my belt. Aiming at there head I carefully pulled out a silencer and attached it to the gun to have them know that I would shoot them at the slightest hint of danger. I cleared my throat that hadn’t been used in weeks and asked them a single question. “Who are you?” Review Topic

ok chapter 4 is up don't forget to post a character Bio

can't wait for the next chapter

ok so do you want to post a character bio or are you just telling me this cause i honesly already had those ready from a different site witch shal not be spoken of and i have no idea for what to do yet.

alrighty folks the next chapter is up and PLEASE post a character bio

Chapter Three The rest of that night seemed like a blur but I remember yelling at it that he had gone nuts and then he charged me I quickly sidestepped and ran. I knew then that i had no family left and that I was going to Kill Vincent Jr. but I still had to grief for the death of my family. To bad there was no time for that as soon as I stood I heard them a few walkers behind me I turned to face them. Since I had left my hammer at the hotel I had nothing to fight with. I quickly looked for something suitable but all there was is a bunch of glass and a fallen of lamp post from a car that had crashed into it. I decided to check the car. When I got there the walkers were close behind I had just reached the car when I heard them just a couple of feet away four at most then I saw it a screwdriver I know it doesn’t sound like much but I grabbed it and turned around. The closest walker was almost on me I grabbed it’s left shoulder and pulled it towards me. That's when I noticed that it was one of the girls that would volunteer at shelters sometimes. Then I remembered she’s dead and this was nothing except a walking corpse. I quickly and emotionlessly stabbed it in the eye maybe five times then shoved the limp body away from me I quickly killed the other one. Then I remembered that I had just killed two humans no those those things weren’t humans they were just corpses things that were already dead. I checked the car again. There were no corpses in the car but the keys were still in the ignition I decided to try them sure enough they worked and then I was on my way to become a survivor. I found a store took some food and water bottles and wooden planks. I raided some more shops with not a lot of walker trouble and wondered what I would be doing right now if this weren’t happening. Then I remembered that the girls corpse I had stabbed she had asked me out on a date before all of this and it was supposed to be tonight at her place. I decided that I shouldn’t linger on thoughts like that anymore. Then I went in search of some actual weapons. Don't Forget To Post A Character Bio In The Review Topic

interesting but no one died i mean except for the titan but no one on the team died like you said

Okay

happy leap year