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"The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother"
BronzeJet (I can FLY) replied to BronzeJet (I can FLY)'s topic in Off Topic Culture
Chapter Two As soon as we went outside the smell hit us it was as if all the cemeteries in the world had been dumped on us. There were so many walkers that i don’t know what gave us the willpower to keep running to the car. We got in the car as soon as we shut the doors and locked them we were swarmed. We crashed through the walkers down the road and made a stop at a department store. We decided to sleep in the car and in the morning we would gather some supplies and then get as far away as possible. In the morning after we got supplies I said that we should grab some hammers for weapons. We drove away but it took a while we had to start from one side of town to another but all of the roads out of the city seemed to be blocked. We found a small hotel cleared it out and then boarded it up. That night we grieved for our parents. None of us could sleep so we all stood watch. It seemed that there were more of them out there at night than day though. We heard gunshots also but they quickly stopped and I couldn’t help but wonder if they stopped because they were dead. The next day was full of grief. I didn’t think that i could handle it any more so i slept. That night we were able to have one person stand guard at a time. When it was Vincent Jr.’s turn I slept heavily but I was awoken by a terrible blood curdling scream. It wouldn’t of mattered that much if it hadn’t come from just a few feet away from me. I quickly grabbed my hammer and stood up. What I saw was worse than seeing my parents death. I saw Vincent Jr. standing over the dead body of Sarah. What I saw next was worse. I saw Sam get up out of the corner of my eye but I stared straight at Vincent and I saw a madness in his eyes sparkling and dancing like fire. Than Sam rushed forward at Vincent Raising his hammer and screaming. Vincent and Sam faught but by the time I finally came to my wits Vincent had just pulled the sharp end of his hammer out of Sam’s head. Than he looked at me and said “You're Next!” REVIEW TOPIC -
yes i agree i personally like bronze's backstory but i would like to know more about what happened to bronze and Araina before they got to the city
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alrighty i have set a goal to post a new chapter every saturday and if i get famous enough then i will post one on saturday and one on wednesday but for now it's every saturday
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you should probably read it before looking in here
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ok
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ya well i don't feel so hot about you either right now
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Hello this is my first epic on BZPower so if it does well than I will continue it if it doesn't do so well than i will just delete it. REVIEW TOPIC Chapter One Scott Williams was a man with a good life that is up until the day of the Outbreak. I had always gotten A’s in my classes I had never gotten in trouble and I had been top of my classes and the best Baseball player in every school I ever went to. Every weekend I would volunteer at the community centers to help homeless people that needed some clothes or food. Then one day I saw a commotion two guys had started fighting out of nowhere after helping break up the fight I called it a day and went home to my mom Sally, my dad Vincent, my younger brother Sam, my younger sister Sarah, and my older brother Vincent Jr. On my way home I was staring ahead thinking about how weird the fight was when suddenly a guy walked out into the road. I stopped before I could hit him and the guy turned his head slowly and stared straight through the windshield at me then he started walking towards me and i rolled down my window a bit to ask him if he needed a ride somewhere when he reached my door he started to hit and bite at the glass as if trying to get in to eat me then I noticed that this man looked as if he had been attacked and had started to rot. Then more people like him started coming out of the woods and attacked my car. I quickly decided to get out of there and back to my house and family as fast as possible. On my way I saw people being attacked by more of the rotting corpses. As soon as i got home I ran inside told my family to grab as much food and water that they could carry and then I rushed them off into our cellar. After a few days of complete and utter boredom we heard someone knocking on the cellar door tho it seemed more as if someone was pounding on it. Vincent Jr. went to the door and opened it thinking that it might be someone who had come to rescue us but as soon as he did one of the walking corpses (which from there on out i decided to call Walkers) ran into our cellar and attacked my parents we could only watch in horror as it slowly killed and devoured our parents almost to the bone. Then it noticed us and slowly it stood and started to walk towards us. So naturally we did the bravest thing we could. RUN!
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Alrighty folks this is the review topic for my 1st story "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" here is where you can ask any questions like when is the next chapter coming out or if you have any ideas for a character that you would like me to use then please give a bio.
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i know i just mean in the next chapter hey when is the next chapter coming out Edit: Double post merged. -Wind-
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i don't think that bronze will die because while everyone else only took down one person he took down 2 by kicking them in the shins
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ok
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I don't care which side i am on and i can't decide on a defense but i want my attack to be fire oh and i want my # to be 3
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he is correct about what i'm asking but i am not his sidekick
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witch one more tho
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how many of them hate me
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of course it's goofy i mean im in it so it hast to be goofy
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i think that everybody who read this likes it
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yes and we will be hearing bronze's backstory am i correct
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here here
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ok
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but u wuld b dun it intentionally
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always intentionally u meeen
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yes a living kakama that can fly
