ScytheCat

I read the whole story. It's a simple and neat beginning. And needs some grammar and correcting on quoting structures. I can help you with that! I can also help you figuring out your Toa teams, their personalities, and etc! I'm currently making mines too. PM me if you'd like! and we can discuss more about OCs and story plotting! :3

Omigosh! Kiina's so cute! ^^ She nearly looks a kawaii and chibi also. But like others has said, her feet looks amazing! Teach me how to draw them please! PM me, and we can discuss about female Bionicle characters anytime! I'm an artist and drawer myself!