Hejo J. R. H. Mindscape

I read your post about making this Completely Off Topic, and that might not be a bad idea.

When will this be entered?

In my description of Azalon, i mentioned an assassinatoin of Lhikan by a mercenary organization called the Fouteenth Blinders. They also provide the doomsday devices that destroy part of Azalon. (they're kind of like the Dark Hunters of this multiverse.)

Also, my weaponry isn't in my bio, just to let you know. My descriptions of it are in the post that has the history of azalon and the keystone territory.

EDIT: In the azalon history, when we get to GF's brother it's listed as "GF can think up a name." He did after my lands and weapons post- it's Bronze Flame.

Should we have Blinder characters? That might be interesting- and necessary, as why would we introduce a mercenary faction without having people playing as them?

My stats:

AGILITY: 2/5

STRENGHTH: 9/10

INTELLIGENCE: 7/10

EDIT: I thought of something. Shoudn't all six of us have gates in our realms? Gates from point to point within a region (TRA-GATES, if you want a name), and gates connecting different regions (SPE-GATES). There should be some stricture as to which gates are where, and where they go.

Alright, here's a bio:

The being referred as "Mindscape" by his subjects possibly originated (according to him) as an Onu-Matoran transferred to Ga-Metru as a subject for an experiment: inter-dimensional travel. He was intended to be transfered to Bara Magna and back, but was inadvertantly sent to the farthest reaches of the multiverse, where he learned to manipulate existence at the atomic level. This new superbeing refined his skills, traveled back to the Matoran Universe, and slept in hibernation for many years, only awakening after the Cataclysm. He has shown to be a tolerant and wise ruler and peacetime, but an impulsive and illogical one in conflict. He has a sharp intellect, and a burning desire to learn the codes that make him all-powerful (which only the Great Beings have mastered.) He is an ambiguous character, who may or may not have engineered the Lhikan assasination, who frequently suffers from extreme bouts of paranoia.

Here's some history and weapons. Should I work on a bio?

AZALON: Primary homeland of the Rock Tribe. It was created by mindscape as an attempt to re-create his home world of Arturi, which may or may not have been destroyed in the cataclysm. Mindscape successfully gained control of the Skrall after the death of the last Tuma in the cataclysm, and also welcomed in members of Golden Flame’s Fire Tribe when his mad brother (GF can think up a name) seized control of his throne, in a period known as the Interregnum. The two rulers combined their powers to retake GF’s lands. Their alliance ended when a prominent Fire General named Lhikan was assassinated by a member of the mercenary organization the Fourteenth Blinders, and GF blamed the murder on Mindscape, as the Rock leader had used the assassins to kill GF’s brother. A massive civil war sprang up called the Scattering which resulted in genocide of both Fire and Rock tribes. It ended with the exodus of Fire tribe members, who destroyed most of Azalon’s environment using FB doomsday devices.

Most of the southern regions of Azalon are a wasteland called the Graveyard where nothing is capable of surviving. The only remaining habitable regions of the world are the northern mountain regions, consisting of some small villages and the capital city, Haven. Mindscape rules as a god-king here with his commander/prime minister, The Skrall (who has refused a name, as all the Tuma are dead). The city is dominated by an enourmous pool of energized protodermis used by Mindscape to create new forms and dreate new breeds of Skrall. The most notable feature of Azalon is its transportation system- it uses “gates”- portals that can bridge amazing distances of this and other worlds. Haven has many portals to other worlds shut down due to wartime restrictions, but other portals leading to other areas outside this world are scattered all over the region…

KEYSTONE TERRITORY: Secondary world of the Rock Tribe. Settled after the Scattering, it is primarily a farming region, filling the purposes of the area destroyed in the Scattering. Its population is spread across the huge land, mostly consisting of small towns, feudal manors, or homesteads. It is policed by an energized protodermis spawned form of Skrall referred to as the Nuva Guard. The region is ruled by a NG Skrall known as the Baron, who exercises huge control over the area. He rules from a trading post/ feudal manor called Straub (named after the Matoran who discovered the Keystone Territory) that has close proximity to many gates.

However, the area is now war-torn because ten years after the Scattering, and three before this RPG, an experiment with Blinder doomsday technology accidentally opened a huge rift in the fabric of the multiverse, leaving two thousand-mile wide gates connecting the land with a land of Mesonak and a land of GF. (You guys can pick which ones.) The area is now filled with fighters and soldiers, and evacuations of major areas are common. The Skrall, in fact, is preparing for the likelihood of evacuating Straub…

WEAPONS: I would like a Rock Sword that is strengthend by Energized Protodermis to cut everything except something exposed to energized protodermis. Also a rhotuka launcher that creates gates in which to throw enemies into the Zone of Shadows, and an ability to read and control the mind of people, with one catch: I have to be able to see the person, and if that person has a sheild that covers the mind, it still won't work.

I AM HERE!!!!!!

Great looking right now, but two things I would like to add about the Keystone Territory and Azalon: both have capitals, Straub (KT) and Haven (A).

It might be a good idea to give some rules and weapons: a form would be good to. I'm new to these things, so I'll look at the RPG lingo and rules after posting.

I'd post more, but I have to go. I'll work on a history of my lands and weapons I would like. Also, I need to go praise your awesomeness.!

One more Vahki supporting Maryland Terps. (spell?) You know what? I'll change my sig to something that reflects my current mood, [CENSORED] the consequences.

I've been waiting... itching to get... some action... WHENSTHEMISSIONWHENSTHEMISSION?

So when's my first mission?

I'd like to join, but how exactly can someone on BZP change their name. I've been here months and I still have no idea how you do that.

NAME: Unit#MNDSCP

MODEL: Bordakh (might as well)

FUNCTION: Enforcer

NUMBER: 8310

I already took care of the banner and avatar. You choose forum division zone. We all wish to serve you.

sounds interesting, and the animation sounds like it's higher quality- what about the scripts? Is the dialouge better than last time, worse, or on par with the last goaround?