Reborn King Dr. Cakey

Well, I'm a first-time reader, and so far I'm quite interested. This is solidly written, and the plot is intriguing. There are some minor nitpicks I could make about word choice if I were to put my editor hat on, but they're so minor as to not be worth mentioning. If I were to make complaints, they would be these: first, Subtarond needs a better back story. You can come up with something I'm sure. And second, Brond seems evil to the point of absurdity. His default reaction to everything is to kill the nearest Matoran. He's going to run out of workers quite quickly.

Time Trap. I thought of it first, you all just copied me. Posers.

Transformers got three groups of post-produced clips (I hesitate to call them "movies") but they had humans. And I don't think they had much to do with Transformers. The aforementioned saturation of the Transformers franchise is also a factor.But Bionicle could work very well as a movie. Here, let me show you, courtesy of those handy media tags:EDIT: Or not. Okay, haven't been on a family-friendly website in years. Um, okay, how should I do this? Well, this image also gives you the idea:http://biosector01.c...hu_Mata_Set.PNGAwesome robot + lava + doing stuff = amazing movie. In other words, it would be an action movie, which isn't what Lego would want, but it's what we want, and frankly I think it could do well if marketed exactly right.