Jump to content

Millennium

Members
  • Posts

    396
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Millennium

  1. Do I sense some hindu mythology influence? The insistence of four arms, each of them with its own weapon, reminds me a lot of those indian gods, maybe that's just me...but I like that. The protector of creation looks overfilled with power that just screams to be unleashed and man, ain't that a nice thing? The protector of control...he is less original than his counterpart, looking like a twisted version of the canonical Gen2 Makuta. Of what he is supposed to look like, at least. He ain't bad though. I guess that if Makuta were to be taken over, for real, by the MoUP, he would certainly look like the Demon of control. All in all, outstanding work!
  2. Visionaire - Tiamat Man, I'm so obsessed with this one.
  3. Pohatu's condition struck me more than Gali's. I do not recall if in the original canon Makuta gave the Skrall shadow powers, I think not, in any case it was a nice addition. The initial meeting/sparring between Toa and Glatorian seems too hurried, even considering the situation. They're aliens to each other, after all, but that's the only flaw of some significance I could find so far. Good work!
  4. I'm up to chapter 17. The part at Matoro's memorial is very touching. Your description of Gali's depression and obesity is...overwhelming, for it is extremely realistic in a striking way, that makes the reader feel bad for her. That's an exceptional thing for a writer to accomplish. I appreciate how you dealt with matoran surgery and moreso with their diet, making rahi edible and such. I guess rahi reproduce in your canon? Do agori eat rahi?
  5. Scene nine: finally free - Dream Theater
  6. And then there was silence - Blind Guardian
  7. Dr. Faust on Capri - Luciferian Light Orchestra
  8. Our imperfect race - Arjen Anthony Lucassen
×
×
  • Create New...