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Not necessarily. There's only one left with him now. O.O

Besides, we can get more relevant.

Well, "Follow the Wolves" could be a temporary title, but if we come up with a better one, we might as well go with it.

Look, I have nothing against "follow the wolves", in fact, it's catchy! But the thing is that by the time we get to chapter 4, we might end up with a story where a title like "flying platypi" may be more relevant! (not really, since this isn't a comedy XD)

u get it now? I'm not trying to be contradictory, I'm trying to be logical and realistic!

P.S. I'm not actually doing it for the prizes, what I meant by 3rd place, is that it should at least be worthy! I don't actually care about the prizes unless it's Premier Membership! XD

Haha! Great idea, Xander! You took a while to give us your input, but it was worth it!

As for the name of the story, let's try to find a name related to Surel's leg healing, rather than the wolves.

Well, I'm off to bed. It's lame to be in a time zone so far from you guys'.

I hope the new chapter will be up by tomorrow -__-;

Oh no, that's fine. But you must not have read the recent post HH made on the official topic. She said that it didn't have to actually be resolved by then, and that we could even continue writing once the judges had finished judging! So we have all the time in the world to write this thing! So in that case, you might actually want to go back and edit your first chapter to make it more meaty... if that's allowed. But we need to focus on quality, rather than quantity. I know that makes me sound like a hypocrite, but meh.

And I wasn't planning on branching the story out, although I suggest we forget about the Baterra altogether. The thing that healed his leg should be the primary focus at the moment (in my opinion. You don't have to listen to me.).

P.S. Xander, you haven't been talking much, and we'd like your input!

>.<

You sure take your time with writing! Total, I probably spent a max of 20 minutes on Chapter 2!

So when can we expect Ch 3?

Oh wow, ToD! I just realized that you're probably the first person I have ever seen spell "Rogue" correctly online!

Cudos!

Also, Latin places adjectives after the subject, so rather than Frigus Canis, it would be Canis Frigus.

Ah, but if they died, it might turn into a story about him trying to avenge them, and then following them in death.

 

Anyways, fountain of healing, huh?

 

Oh, and Chronicler, I don't think Tuma's allowed. You should probably just change it to a rogue Glatorian or a Skrall.

Nonono, HH said it could feature set characters, but they couldn't be the main ones.

Also, who said that Surel was right about the fountain. It could have been something else that had healed him (the water could have been completely irrelevant).

But I now have all my inspiration back!

That aside, it's your turn, ToD!

I wasn't concerned with the vote. I'm saying that Follow the Wolves is alright, but we shouldn't come up with a name just yet. What we need is to figure out what the fleshed-out plot is going to be, and then come up with a title. I mean, what if all the wolves end up dying later in the epic? Follow the Wolves won't be so fitting, now will it?

Sorry for being a sourpuss and all. I suddenly got a bunch of inspiration out of nowhere and extended the chapter by a lot! Sorry for all the trouble, guys. I'm better now.

Stopping the baterra? Please tell me that isn't what the whole story is about...

Honestly, I was hoping for something with an actual... you know... plot.

Also, the beginning goes way too fast! And a baterra shouldn't be quite that weak.

I know I'm being a bit of a sourpuss, but we really need a story that can get us at least 3rd place. How many people have read Sahmad's tale, Chapter 5? I was thinking we could have Surel stumble into a cave that leads him to the very world of this Eldrich Abomination. Now, THAT could make an interesting story! Well, anyways, I'll post the next chapter (unenthusiastically).

Oh, and about the title. Let's figure it out once the plot becomes more pronounced. Follow the Wolves is just too vague. Also, one of the reasons I suggest Latin a lot is because Bara Magnan appears to have a lot in common with it (Hence Malum, which means bad, Gelu, which means cold, and a couple of others.)

Well, I posted the next chapter. It's extremely short because... well, you know. Guys, if you don't like the idea of using the ST ch 5 monster thing, then that's fine, but please come up with something with more meat.

Fail? Solitus means stuff along the lines of "ordinary", not single.

Also, Gelidus sounds cooler than Frigus to me. Means the same thing. Oh, and did you notice the other word for cold? Gelu!

So you don't like the team name?

Well, any ol' name with anything to do with wolves should be good, right? Eye of the Wolf? Canis Operor Res Suum Via (Wolves do things their own way)? I like Latin XD. Canis something?

Freedict.com/onldict/lat.html is an English to Latin translator.

This supposed to be some sort of XML thing? I wonder if Teridax has a headache, seeing nothing but this all day =D