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This is the review topic for Dynamics. Dynamics is a story of adventure and action. The entire cast is made up by me, but they are placed in the Bionicle universe. There will be gore in future chapters, so I warn thee ahead of time. Leave a review if you feel the story is worthy of one. Here is a rough sketch I made of an Ithamar, the Rahi used by Zebulun:Yes, the sketch only had two legs, but the Rahi has four legs.
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Hello,this is my review topic for my new epic,"The leaking".The epic: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4327
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This is the review topic for Battle between Brothers: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4059Characters:JamarZahunTardukJihliFardinu-CDP
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Okay, here's the review topic for my epic, Shadows (found here).Constructive criticism very much welcome. (I'm not sure what else I'm supposed to put in here... Oh well)
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This is the review topic for The Uprising: http://www.bzpower.c...t=0#entry188465A little thing to explain what The Uprising is about:The Uprising is the story of how Malia(a water-tribe Agori) goes on the adventure of a lifetime. The Skrall live,and their new leader is the last Makuta alive, Makuta Miserix. It happens 36 years after the battle between Mata-Nui and Teridax. 30 years ago,a top-secret project began. This is the tale of how the Hero Factory was created...Characters:Malia: An Agori from the water tribe. During the battle between Mata-Nui and Teridax,her left hand was sliced off by a Skakdi warlord named Nektann. Due to advances in technology,she was given a Bionic arm.Sardis: Malia's best friend. Also the new leader of the water tribe after the original one was murdered by a Rahkshi.Yarhki: A Skrall. Very few Skrall are now left alive on Spherus Magna.Gali: Oh,you know who's Gali. No? Well,Gali is one of the six Toa Nuva.Giant scorpion: A random desert scorpion mutated by a Thornax,and grew to 100 feet.Barnax: A Skrall messenger. Was the commander of the Skrall army during the Battle of the Temmaot Valley.Miserix: The last surviving Makuta(other than the Alternative Teridax from the Melding Universe);also the new leader of the Skrall.Mawel: A Jungle tribe Agori,the Chief in the production of the HERO FACTORY.Makunero: The Founder and leader of the HERO FACTORY.Kopaka: The Toa Mata/Nuva of Ice. Got upgraded to Stormer.The three Skrall: Kinda like the Three Stooges,they are funny and weird.Ghulu: A giant Snake that lives in Dream Land. Needs to go back to Grammar School.-CDP
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*Brushes off Snow*Ah, well, if it isn't a Kini with a story.Now it's been a while since i wrote the first chapter here so bear with me. I don't really intend to go back and change stuff too much but the writing quality should increase as more chapters are added. If you notice anything out of line with the content of an earlier chapter (i've already had to change some things in that respect) please tell me, as this is a work started in April of last year and not looked at again until literally a week ago.Table of ContentsChapter OneChapter TwoCharactersIntroduced characters will have a slight Bio posted here when I get around to it. If a character is introduced and does not appear with a profile, that will most likely mean that the character does not have an important role in the story asides the chapter(s) he or she appears in.Main CharactersSkieros (Coming soon)Known WorldRandom information will be stowed here if i deem it necessary to gain the full experience, or if enough reader interest is given.AcknowledgementsAkaku:Master of Flight: For himself and AquaRemember people, reviews are welcome =)Oh, and please note. There are references to real world events/memes/generalizations and a great many inside jokes. So please take them with some good humor - especially if you recognise them.
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Here's the story link:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=1727post all comments here!
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Hello, and welcome to the review topic for Bionicle: Infinities. The new topic for the actual epic won't be up for a little while, but you may read and review it from where it was formerly posted in the forum archive by clicking the link at the bottom of this post, and post your thoughtful reviews here. Rest assured, Bionicle: Infinities WILL return. Eventually. X-Ray http://www.bzpower.c...2
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Here is the review topic for my epic, Voyage of Madness. What I'll be doing is re-posting each chapter of the epic that I had posted so far. I will try to post one a day. As I am doing this, I will try to write the remaining chapters that I had planned to write to finish this epic. I can't guarantee that they will be ready when all the already written chapters are posted, since I have a lot less free time now than before. I will get them done sometime though. Here's the link to the new story topic: Link Here's the link to the old story topic: http://www.bzpower.c...howtopic=332474 And here's the link to this epic's old review topic: http://www.bzpower.c...howtopic=332476