Katoris Posted March 3, 2014 Author Posted March 3, 2014 (edited) I'm sure everyone has been waiting for this. Takori Meets Mr. Freeloader ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 2 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
tahukan Posted March 3, 2014 Posted March 3, 2014 (edited) So how does he feel bout Halloween? Great job with it all although I think Katoris should be a bit more kind to the random people that come into his house keep it up! Edited March 3, 2014 by Tahukan The TaVo-Matoran Quote
TBK Posted March 4, 2014 Posted March 4, 2014 Oh boi. Better find a way out of this before Katoris comes in and throws steaming hot tea at you. Quote
Katoris Posted March 4, 2014 Author Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) To tell the truth, what annoys me are anime cosplayers and some certain videogame cosplayers. Oh boi. Better find a way out of this before Katoris comes in and throws steaming hot tea at you. That'd be a waste of tea! ~Katoris Edited March 4, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Katoris Posted March 6, 2014 Author Posted March 6, 2014 (edited) New Comic! First Mistake, Freeloader I have my next comic planned out, and half-done. ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 1 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
tahukan Posted March 6, 2014 Posted March 6, 2014 Yes tiss i the brave and kind defender of the strange and insaneTahukan. Great job on that you got me down to an A Good deed to you Gentleman! Quote
Katoris Posted March 19, 2014 Author Posted March 19, 2014 (edited) New Comic! Finally. Boredom ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 2 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
TBK Posted March 19, 2014 Posted March 19, 2014 I'm not sure why, but I'm starting to get this gut feeling that somehow I'm gonna get stabbed with a katana at some point. That was simply awesome, keep it up! =D Quote
Katoris Posted March 20, 2014 Author Posted March 20, 2014 (edited) I'm not sure why, but I'm starting to get this gut feeling that somehow I'm gonna get stabbed with a katana at some point. Most likely. Edited March 20, 2014 by Katoris 2 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Hexann Posted March 22, 2014 Posted March 22, 2014 Holy Karz! I've been waiting to see these up for a while! I hadn't even noticed that they'd been up for...well, the amount of time they've been up for. Was it worth the wait? Oh-ho Karz yeah; it was! You put a rather expansive amount of thought into these comics; I can tell. You're no noob. I hadn't even acknowledge my own crediting until just recently. Thanks, Katoris and keep up the good work. I'll await anxiously for your skill to proliferate even more. 1 Quote
Katoris Posted March 23, 2014 Author Posted March 23, 2014 Holy Karz! I've been waiting to see these up for a while! I hadn't even noticed that they'd been up for...well, the amount of time they've been up for. Was it worth the wait? Oh-ho Karz yeah; it was! You put a rather expansive amount of thought into these comics; I can tell. You're no noob. I hadn't even acknowledge my own crediting until just recently. Thanks, Katoris and keep up the good work. I'll await anxiously for your skill to proliferate even more. Thanks, Damaracx! And nice to see you again! Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Katoris Posted April 1, 2014 Author Posted April 1, 2014 (edited) New Comic! April Fools' Day! ~Katoris Edited April 1, 2014 by Katoris 1 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
tahukan Posted April 1, 2014 Posted April 1, 2014 Wow you captured me perfectly in that comic caus i would have done exzactly that Quote
Hexann Posted April 1, 2014 Posted April 1, 2014 (edited) Well, I'm going to start reveiwing these comics individually.@Comic 1: Wow, nice backgrounds. I see you're working GIMP quite well. I like how you've been carrying that cup around every where. You like tea too! I didn't think I'd find another tea-lover. XDGreat start. These comic started out way better than mine.Keep up the good work! Edited April 2, 2014 by Damaracx Ultimate Quote
Katoris Posted April 2, 2014 Author Posted April 2, 2014 Well, I'm going to start reveiwing these comics individually. @Comic 1: Wow, nice backgrounds. I see you're working GIMP quite well. I like how you've been carrying that cup around every where. You like tea too! I didn't think I'd find another tea-lover. XD Great start. These comic started out way better than mine. Keep up the good! Thanks! I have been making lots of plans for this series, to hopefully start an interesting arc. I just need to find names for a female and a male! Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Hexann Posted April 2, 2014 Posted April 2, 2014 @Comic 2: Takori- The center and epitome of cast abuse. XD Like I said on the first comic basically-everything looks good. I see you use the 'smudge' effect for blurs. There's also a few others in the 'Filter' section such as the motion blur try to see if you can that or some of the others included within the blur section or stick with smudge. It all simply comes down to personal preferences, but remember to experiment with GIMP's effects when you get the chance. You might be able to discover something cool! Keep up the good work, Katoris! Quote
Katoris Posted April 13, 2014 Author Posted April 13, 2014 I'm going to try and make a comic soon this week, so stay tuned. Also, I won first in Tahukan's Comic Contest and I get to co-author 3 comics, so look out for those. Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Hexann Posted April 13, 2014 Posted April 13, 2014 @Comic 3: You've also got PGS abuse? I freaking love this comic series! Quote
tahukan Posted May 14, 2014 Posted May 14, 2014 @Comic 3: You've also got PGS abuse? I freaking love this comic series!Yes and I'm his favorite target! Which makes me.. I'm at a loss for words. Punching bag? Quote
Katoris Posted May 15, 2014 Author Posted May 15, 2014 (edited) Training "dummy". I'm going to see if I can whip something up this weekend. No promises.Eventually I'm going to bring my character's insanity to a different level. Edited May 15, 2014 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Hexann Posted May 19, 2014 Posted May 19, 2014 @April Fools Day Comic: Reverse, Reverse Psychology? It feels like the end of Death Note... Quote
Katoris Posted May 19, 2014 Author Posted May 19, 2014 @April Fools Day Comic: Reverse, Reverse Psychology? It feels like the end of Death Note... Never seen it. Glad you enjoyed! Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Hexann Posted May 19, 2014 Posted May 19, 2014 @Comic 4: Funny thing considering I confused those two once... Quote
Katoris Posted June 5, 2014 Author Posted June 5, 2014 (edited) Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~Katoris Edited September 16, 2014 by Katoris 2 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
JacobLazer Posted June 5, 2014 Posted June 5, 2014 Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~Katoris LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLthe best part is that you can't see anything XD Quote
TBK Posted June 6, 2014 Posted June 6, 2014 Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~Katoris I love how you used only dialogue to create this genius-ness. Quote
tahukan Posted June 7, 2014 Posted June 7, 2014 Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~KatorisWas that... Me? In the closet? Quote
Katoris Posted June 7, 2014 Author Posted June 7, 2014 Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~KatorisWas that... Me? In the closet? As you know I always refer to you as freeloader, so no. Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Calvirick Posted June 16, 2014 Posted June 16, 2014 Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~Katoris Hi I'm new to these comics. And as feedback, I would've loved to have actually seen the characters go at it behind the door. Not be hidden behind it. It would add more character and made it worth reading. Cause when they're behind the door, in this particular instance, it seems more like an excuse to be lazy. I'm not judging that you were, just suggesting. Quote
Katoris Posted June 16, 2014 Author Posted June 16, 2014 One day I'll probably reveal what's behind the door, when I can make the torture devices.To tell the truth, it was pretty much laziness that it wasn't revealed, so I don't really mind what you say. Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Katoris Posted June 29, 2014 Author Posted June 29, 2014 Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques. Thanks. Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Calvirick Posted June 29, 2014 Posted June 29, 2014 Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques. Thanks. Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. Story wise however I think needs work. So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting. Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think.When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what? I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. How's that critique? Quote
Katoris Posted July 2, 2014 Author Posted July 2, 2014 Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques. Thanks. Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. Story wise however I think needs work. So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting. Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think.When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what? I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. How's that critique? This is very helpful to me. I really appreciate it. I'll review it thoroughly later, and work on it. Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Katoris Posted September 16, 2014 Author Posted September 16, 2014 New Comic! Been Forever! Return from "Vacation" Though I don't know if anyone will notice me. ~Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
JacobLazer Posted September 16, 2014 Posted September 16, 2014 (edited) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A THING TO THE BIONICLE 2015 LOGO?!?!?!? welcome back! Edited September 16, 2014 by JacobLazer Quote
TBK Posted September 16, 2014 Posted September 16, 2014 Haha, 'tis the truth! Still enough to keep my hype train chugging along, though. Good to see you back, Katoris! Quote
Katoris Posted September 17, 2014 Author Posted September 17, 2014 Thanks! Special Announcement!New character coming next comic! And sorry, TBK, not you. 1 Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
Lemony Lepid Posted September 20, 2014 Posted September 20, 2014 (edited) Hey, just wanted to tell you to stop drinking my element's dried up ashes. It's kinda gross. Try drinking soda. Or grease. Just not my chlorophyll filled friends. I can feel their screams of terror. :/ ... On another note, I am really liking your comics so far. Good effects, Nice panel size, doesn't take much to please me. Edited September 20, 2014 by Loganto The Bo-Matoran Quote ~~
Katoris Posted September 20, 2014 Author Posted September 20, 2014 Thanks, Loganto! The comic I had planned to make is being canceled temporarily, due to a very special occasion!You shall find out Sunday! ~Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea.
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