Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 21, 2014 Posted July 21, 2014 Topic for reviewing A Mind in Darkness. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T)
Akavakaku Posted July 23, 2014 Posted July 23, 2014 Whoa, really amazing so far! The character interactions are great, and so is the plot. I'm a little curious why you spelled Macku and Hewkii with the Naming Day changes, though. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins
Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 23, 2014 Author Posted July 23, 2014 Thank you! I know the official explanation for the changes was Naming Day, but they were still seen in the Metru-Nui arc, showing that the names had been completely retconned. I figured I would just go with that. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T)
Akavakaku Posted July 26, 2014 Posted July 26, 2014 Great story! Excellent handling of the plot and characters, I really enjoyed it. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins
Gifthammer Posted July 28, 2014 Posted July 28, 2014 Wow that practically felt like a canon story. Although, did the matoran already know the names of the Toa Mata? Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse
Pahrak Model ZX Posted July 28, 2014 Author Posted July 28, 2014 I seem to recall they did, but I don't remember any sources off the top of my head. Also, this story was drawing a little more from an outdated lore guide that said the Matoran knew their names, so I just sort of went with that. Quote My Library Right of Law (Epics) KARDAS DRAGON appears! (G&T)
Akavakaku Posted July 29, 2014 Posted July 29, 2014 (edited) Edit: removed accidental post. Feel free to delete it if you're a mod. Edited July 29, 2014 by Akavakaku Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins
Gifthammer Posted July 29, 2014 Posted July 29, 2014 (edited) Ok, I had to catch up on the early years so I was just wondering. I can see an argument for either choice anyway. Edited July 30, 2014 by LanceMuch7 Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse
Akavakaku Posted July 29, 2014 Posted July 29, 2014 Yes. It's fixed now. Quote ( The bunny slippers hiss and slither into the shadows. ) -Takuaka: Toa of TimeWhat if the Toa you know best were not destined to be? Interchange: The epic begins
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