Some Random Phrase Posted December 25, 2014 Share Posted December 25, 2014 The review topic for Phantom's Trials Quote Kopaka, the coolest(Pun intended) Ko-Toa ever: "If the fight had turned, Exann might be the one on the floor with Antidermis spurting out of him. This is how battle is. This is how life is." -Mar'jik, Corpus Rahkshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some Random Phrase Posted December 26, 2014 Author Share Posted December 26, 2014 First chapter posted! This introduces our main protagonist. Quote Kopaka, the coolest(Pun intended) Ko-Toa ever: "If the fight had turned, Exann might be the one on the floor with Antidermis spurting out of him. This is how battle is. This is how life is." -Mar'jik, Corpus Rahkshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 This shows promise. I'm liking the backstory so far, and am curious about where the plot is going to go.My only suggestion is that you might want to proofread the chapters for spelling errors and such.Happy writing! Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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