The UltimoScorp Posted June 11, 2015 Share Posted June 11, 2015 (edited) Welcome welcome to my newest MOC, which.... really is more or less a reskin of the other one, but with a few limb changes and swapped parts. But whatever, you want MOCs, and MOC's I shall provide. Behold! http://i.imgur.com/WbZPcXq.jpg ANother large photo! And an Imgur link to a full album, as usual. http://imgur.com/a/4sivB What's good? what's bad? what could I do better? I don'tknow until you tell me, dear audience, so don't hold back! And as always, thanks for viewing! Edit: Please keep posted images in BBC to 640x640 pixels and 100 kB.-Wind- Edited June 13, 2015 by -Windrider- 2 Quote BZPRPG Profiles The Unofficial Guide to TBRPG Combat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarumEsSarene Posted June 11, 2015 Share Posted June 11, 2015 The waist articulate is a nice touch. However, the body does have a lankiness and is very gappy. To fix this, try working on the body one part at a time rather than the entire thing at once. Look at all the tahu versions to see how the body should work. Don't just rely on CCBS, try to find a way to meld Technic, Bionicle, and CCBS together in a way that gives a more natural look. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The UltimoScorp Posted June 11, 2015 Author Share Posted June 11, 2015 I'll see if I can't get some actual technic in there, fill in some gaps. I'll admit my technic selection is not large, and I've got little to no experience with custom limbs. But, I suppose there's a first time for everything, yeah? Thanks for your feedback! Quote BZPRPG Profiles The Unofficial Guide to TBRPG Combat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarumEsSarene Posted June 11, 2015 Share Posted June 11, 2015 I'll see if I can't get some actual technic in there, fill in some gaps. I'll admit my technic selection is not large, and I've got little to no experience with custom limbs. But, I suppose there's a first time for everything, yeah? Thanks for your feedback!No problem! I love making MOClets, experiments to see what works and how pieces fit together. Always a fun way to pass time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
32one Posted June 12, 2015 Share Posted June 12, 2015 Good: - Good distribution of gold - The piston add-on works nicely on the chest Bad: - I don't like the torso; very gappy from behind, exposed balljoints that stick out, and the shoulders are very broad. - The limbs are quite gappy as well To improve on: - Torso: maybe try a new torso design rather than reusing the one that you used on Onua. I'd avoid using the Inika torso 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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