fishers64 Posted August 28, 2015 Share Posted August 28, 2015 The StoryIf you have an review, go post it. You don't have to read all of my senseless rambling.FIIIIINAAAAALLLLLYYYYY!!!!! Welcome, at long last, to my new...epic. I've already done enough whining over the fact that it is an...epic, so trust me, your criticism on that matter cannot match the amount of self-criticism I have already inflicted. For three. Whole. Years. (You have permission to laugh - I think it is funny too.)It turns out that I was attached to a particular character who was not a comedic character at all for this particular story, and writing a comedy without comedic characters, especially using the Arena Method (I still be doing experiments with that for fun and stuff.) is an enterprise destined for failure. However, my failure in these matters is rather graceful, as I have allowed the character to shine and dictate the lack of comedic-ness rather than trying to force something.In truth, this epic jumps all over the emotional spectrum, from hilarious to Voltexian levels of dark. But that doesn't make it a bad story - it just makes me bad at predicting the future.So here it is. Hope you all enjoy. ---------------------------------------------------This epic has about 36 chapters, plus a short epilogue. Each chapter has approximately 1000 words apiece - some chapters are longer, some shorter, but around there. The epic is entirely pre-written as two of my previous epics are, and as such will be posted weekly, on Thursdays. Every effort will be made to post things ON TIME as I hate when things are not posted ON TIME and don't happen ON TIME. (Hey, I can hold myself to my own standards. ) In the event of a forum crash, chapters will be reposted on the hour, and all interested parties will be informed. And you should go back up your stuff right now because both times I posted a lengthy epic on the forum the forum crashed. I guarantee it will happen again.I may accelerate to a bi-weekly schedule as the epic nears its end and I have more time in which to do so.And without further further ado, go complain about my bad writing or whatever else you wanted to say already. Comments, criticism, and everything else welcome! Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 4, 2015 Share Posted September 4, 2015 Other than your skittish writing style, you've done a great job so far. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted September 4, 2015 Author Share Posted September 4, 2015 Other than your skittish writing style, you've done a great job so far. Keep it up!Skittish? skittish[skit-ish] adjective1.apt to start or shy:a skittish horse. 2.restlessly or excessively lively:a skittish mood. 3.fickle; uncertain. 4.shy; coy Definition #3? Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 4, 2015 Share Posted September 4, 2015 ...What? nobody has the definition of skittish anymore? Alright, imam rephrase it: quick, jittery, and into the action immediately, which makes me think you'll write fight scenes very well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted September 10, 2015 Author Share Posted September 10, 2015 Chapter 3 is up! Credit to bonesiii for the name Goldiflocks. I tried to cut it, but it was badly needed here to reinforce the crazy tone of this passage. And yes, this is one of the few funny chapters in here. At least, it was supposed to be funny. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted September 17, 2015 Author Share Posted September 17, 2015 ...What? nobody has the definition of skittish anymore? Alright, imam rephrase it: quick, jittery, and into the action immediately, which makes me think you'll write fight scenes very well.You'll have to decide that one for yourself, methinks. No one has commented on my fight scenes one way or the other...but that's because for some reason I don't write a lot of them. Chapter 4 is up. Writing a quieter chapter always makes me edgy, but in this case it had to be done. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scanty Demon Posted September 20, 2015 Share Posted September 20, 2015 I'm uh a little confused about the "Part 125" bit. Does it relate to anything in the story or is it something outside of it? Also: using the Arena Method (I still be doing experiments with that for fun and stuff.)I'm a little bit interested in this arena method. Think you could explain it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted September 20, 2015 Author Share Posted September 20, 2015 (edited) I'm uh a little confused about the "Part 125" bit. Does it relate to anything in the story or is it something outside of it? Also:using the Arena Method (I still be doing experiments with that for fun and stuff.)I'm a little bit interested in this arena method. Think you could explain it? Part 125 is a joke. I counted up the number of official story sources for Bionicle G1, and they added up to 124. So this is what happens after that, so... Yarr. The Arena Method is this. Basically, it's the idea that you define the setting, characters, and the "rules" (i.e. main protagonist, antagonist, mysteries, and POVs) and let the story write itself without controlling the ending, using the rules of logic as a guide for what happens next. Personally I have as of yet found this method difficult to adopt and use. It does produce high quality work, but it has been time-consuming to use for the first several go-rounds. Your mileage may vary. ---------------------------------------------------- Chapter 6 is up. Basically a bunch of character stuff before we get to Chapter 7. I might post that one early, since I'm not so busy right now. Edited October 1, 2015 by fishers64 Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted October 17, 2015 Share Posted October 17, 2015 Hey, Fishers... I had a thought. Would you like a comedy based off of this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted October 17, 2015 Author Share Posted October 17, 2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Nope, nope, not happening, a thousand times no. If anyone parodies chapters 28-31, it will make me sick to my stomach. Please, don't do this to me. I will do your math homework for a week. Just don't do it. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Nope, nope, not happening, a thousand times no. If anyone parodies chapters 28-31, it will make me sick to my stomach. Please, don't do this to me. I will do your math homework for a week. Just don't do it. :C But i liek mah hoamwurk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted October 18, 2015 Author Share Posted October 18, 2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Nope, nope, not happening, a thousand times no. If anyone parodies chapters 28-31, it will make me sick to my stomach. Please, don't do this to me. I will do your math homework for a week. Just don't do it. :C But i liek mah hoamwurk Too bad. There are some things that are just not meant to be parodied. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Nope, nope, not happening, a thousand times no. If anyone parodies chapters 28-31, it will make me sick to my stomach. Please, don't do this to me. I will do your math homework for a week. Just don't do it.:C But i liek mah hoamwurk Too bad. There are some things that are just not meant to be parodied. :C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted October 18, 2015 Author Share Posted October 18, 2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Nope, nope, not happening, a thousand times no. If anyone parodies chapters 28-31, it will make me sick to my stomach. Please, don't do this to me. I will do your math homework for a week. Just don't do it.:C But i liek mah hoamwurk Too bad. There are some things that are just not meant to be parodied. :C After giving this some thought, I have changed my mind on this. You may proceed. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 After giving this some thought, I have changed my mind on this. You may proceed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted October 23, 2015 Author Share Posted October 23, 2015 (edited) Chapter 9 is up. Chapter 8 was the one that the Arena Method kinda ruined, but this one is actually one of the stranger and more positive twists in this story that I really liked. Edited October 23, 2015 by fishers64 Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 6, 2015 Author Share Posted November 6, 2015 Chapter 11 is up. Late. But at least it's here. Chapter 12 will come out next Thursday. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 12, 2015 Author Share Posted November 12, 2015 Chapter 12 is up ON TIME. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 (edited) Chapter 14 is up. Chapter 15 will be coming out Monday. EDIT: Chapter 15 is up. Chapter 16 is coming Thursday...so I can finish this up. Edited December 1, 2015 by fishers64 Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted December 1, 2015 Share Posted December 1, 2015 I'm so so sorry, I've been terribly slacking off on the comedy and I don't really have any excuse. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 1, 2015 Author Share Posted December 1, 2015 Lack of interest is an allowable excuse. I provided you with an opportunity to do a comedy, not held you to a whip and yelled "YOU MUST MAKE COMEDY!!!" in your face. The only person I do that to is myself. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted December 2, 2015 Share Posted December 2, 2015 Lack of interest is an allowable excuse. I provided you with an opportunity to do a comedy, not held you to a whip and yelled "YOU MUST MAKE COMEDY!!!" in your face. The only person I do that to is myself. Not lack of interest, more of a "Is too lazy and only too late realizes he is swamped". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Chapter 16 is up, as usual. Interesting things may happen once we get to Chapter 20... ...at least, more interesting than usual. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 12, 2015 Author Share Posted December 12, 2015 Here's Chapter 17....late... Posting may be late over the holidays. When I get back from all that vacationing and other entanglements, I'm going to post this one a chapter a day to finish it out. It's clear that very few people actually want to read this one, so I'm done messing around - time to move on to Extrenix. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted January 8, 2016 Author Share Posted January 8, 2016 Mood for Chapter 24: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYXbb0aN20Y Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gifthammer Posted January 14, 2016 Share Posted January 14, 2016 Is it just me, or are these chapters getting posted at least as fast as I can manage to read them? Loving every bit so far. Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted January 14, 2016 Author Share Posted January 14, 2016 Is it just me, or are these chapters getting posted at least as fast as I can manage to read them? Loving every bit so far.They are being posted daily, because I thought nobody was reading them and I want to see this finished. Glad that someone is actually enjoying this one, though. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 22, 2016 Share Posted January 22, 2016 New chapter up of Lait To Ze Partie, in case anyone's interested. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted January 22, 2016 Author Share Posted January 22, 2016 In other news, Chapter 33 is up. Only 3 chapters and a small epilogue to go. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 22, 2016 Share Posted January 22, 2016 In other news, Chapter 33 is up. Only 3 chapters and a small epilogue to go.O_o *hurries to finish comedy* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted January 26, 2016 Author Share Posted January 26, 2016 The Epilogue is up! And my work is done here. Feedback is still welcome, but for the most part I'm moving on. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 Whoever is enjoying this, please don't drop out of reading! Lait To Ze Partie will still continue until its chapters have reached 37 as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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