LimeFlavouredLibertarian24 Posted July 21, 2016 Share Posted July 21, 2016 (edited) I just posted my review of Takua and Pewku onto my tumblr blog and I'd like to know what type of feedback you all have about it. But it's got a great function and tons of brown technic pieces, but it's got some questionable building techniques and those tubes he has make it hard to pose his arms upwards http://limeflavouredlibertarian24.tumblr.com/post/147757305044/takua-and-pewku Edited July 21, 2016 by LimeFlavouredLibertarian24 Quote http://limeflavouredlibertarian24.tumblr.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fry Posted July 21, 2016 Share Posted July 21, 2016 It's pretty good, It is very common for these things to lack decent pictures Quote Visit my Bionicle 2001 site recreation! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LimeFlavouredLibertarian24 Posted July 22, 2016 Author Share Posted July 22, 2016 I use a nitendo dsi xl to take photos for my reviews so that's basically why my photos aren't that great in quality, but what did you think of the comparisons I did in the review? Quote http://limeflavouredlibertarian24.tumblr.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regitnui Posted July 22, 2016 Share Posted July 22, 2016 Good points, but you could stand to do a little editing. The main problem is the sheer amount of run-on sentences. Hot Tip from an editor and writer; if your sentence ends up more than one line long, you should check if it can't be two or more. Quote Elemental Rahi in Gen2, anyone? A write-up for an initial video for a G2 plot I really wish everyone would stop trying to play join the dots with Gen 1 and Gen 2 though,it seems there's a couple new threads everyday and often they're duplicates of already existing conversations! Or simply parallel them with a slightly new 'twist'! Gen 2 is NEW, it is NOT Gen 1 and it is NOT a continuation. Outside of the characters we already have I personally don't want to see ANY old characters return. I think it will cheapen the whole experience to those of us familiar with the original line... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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