Toa Chuck Posted August 1, 2016 Share Posted August 1, 2016 (edited) My entry for the Makuta Contest.Rebrick when public Flickr Edited August 1, 2016 by Toa Chuck Quote The Chirox Codex Chuck's Very Dead Comic Series This is my signature. Exciting, huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted August 1, 2016 Share Posted August 1, 2016 (edited) It's just one of your older mocs with a new mask, weapon and a few parts thrown on here and there. Edited August 1, 2016 by Voxumo 5 Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyMetalSunshineSister Posted August 2, 2016 Share Posted August 2, 2016 Okay, there's that, and there's also the matter that, for something with the epithet Master of Power, he's... kinda scrawny. Like, it's tall, sure, absolutely, but it's also skinny, and has a rather high center of gravity that makes it look like it would tip over easily. The wings suffer from the same problem as the rest of the build, and definitely need to be bigger if you want me to believe they're carrying even that skinny fellow into the air. As a last structural gripe, the head pretty much brings nothing to the build - it's a predictable mask, with nothing really added to make it unique or interesting. The colour scheme also seems rather inappropriate to the concept. With the presence of that little yellow bit on the chest, all three primary colors are present, with inconsistent shades of at least one of them. Primary colors aren't particularly frightening, and not even the use of black can bring back this fellow's intimidation factor when it's struggling against them. Pick one of the three (bright yellow would probably be the most unusual choice, and may be quite rewarding if tried) and stick to it as a supplement to an overall black, or black+metallic color scheme. Quote We will remember - Skies may fade and stars may wane; we won't forget And your light shines bright - yes so much brighter shine on We will remember - Until the skies will fall we won't forget We will remember We all shall follow doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted August 2, 2016 Share Posted August 2, 2016 Yeah he feels too skinny for a proper Makuta build. Colour scheme feels unique though, but is it really Makuta-ish? Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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