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Theory of Evolution: Review Topic


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The Review Topic of my new fanfiction, Theory of Evolution, which can be seen here.

"Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis


 


 


 

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cool cool cool youve got me interested

 

there are quite a few technical errors ("it's torso and arms" should be "its torso and arms", possible run on sentences?, and a font discrepancy after paragraph 4) but overall i am waiting eagerly to see what comes next

"I may not be smart enough to try everything, but I'm dumb enough to try anything."



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Yeah my computer was beig a butt on the form, but I'll fix the its and it's things. Keep getting those confused :P

"Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become,"-C.S. Lewis


 


 


 

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