Avohkahs' Sparks

Yes I do.

Yup, i am.

I hope I'm not being pushy, but could you post what you thought of the story in its topic?

I'm going to get 5 soon.

Yes I am. I'll ask my dad if I can get it.

I have finished the beginning of my story, and I know you want to read it, but I cannot send it to you since your inbox is full. Could you delete a couple of messages?

I decided to use Dormus as a placeholder.

No, I would not. If I did, they wouldn't be the same.

Ya, I got all of them for Christmas. I plan to get four or five elite Skrall to go with them.

Yes, I am 100% Italian, as is my direct family. 70-80% of my relatives live in Italy.

GregF does not reply to his comments. Ask in a PM.

I'm allowed back in the contest!

I feel I have a very food chance of winning.

Well, Erebus did say he might consider re-qualifying my entry.

I think they already selected the judges.

No problem.

Could you please post a review of it?

Did you like my story?

Nothing. Thanks for reviewing my story. Would you mind getting several of your friends to review it? I want to see how it compares to all the stories.

Would you mind closing this topic?

http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=307909

Sorry, I meant this one.

http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=307909

Anything you think I need to change?

Would you mind closing this topic?

http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=307948

Thanks, I working out a few kinks. The perfect and final version will be out on August 1st.

Did you like it?