Blue Dragon Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 (edited) ^Click for Flickr link^So, my first 'female' moc. I quite like the results, and, except for the neck, it has pretty much turned out how I wanted it to be.This is the fifth moc in a series of eight. The others (Archer, Saber, Assassin and Saver) can be found in my Flickr photostream Criticisms/suggestions for improvement are appreciated.Blue DragonEdit: Image size reduced due to file size. Images posted in BBC should be no larger than 100 kB.-Wind- Edited February 4, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote ~Blue Dragon~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 wow so elegant and yet looks like she could destroy a bohrok in one strike. i love how u used all white. the weapon is good and i like how you did her legs. there is nothing i can think that needs fixing. are u considering doing something similar but with different colors? Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 It's awesome! I like the torso and arm design but it could use a bit more color instead of just pure white. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 question did u use a toa metru head piece or a toa mata head piece? Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flameman Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 nice work, i should say it's a nice to use white on a female MOC, giving her more female-looking, although i don't think kopaka's mask looks femininethe torso is great, it somehow looks like a female body even without making the boobs too big, the skirt is nice tooi'd say you have done a great job buddy Quote Brickshelf | Flickr | MOCpages Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orka Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Wow, I love the torso and dress design! Nice work, excellent overall composition! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Dragon Posted February 11, 2012 Author Share Posted February 11, 2012 wow so elegant and yet looks like she could destroy a bohrok in one strike. i love how u used all white. the weapon is good and i like how you did her legs. there is nothing i can think that needs fixing. are u considering doing something similar but with different colors?No. Look a my topic for Assassin to find links to the mocs in this series I've made already.It's awesome! I like the torso and arm design but it could use a bit more color instead of just pure white.I'm going to replace some parts with thier Metru red variants. That should colour it up a bit.question did u use a toa metru head piece or a toa mata head piece?Metru head. Quote ~Blue Dragon~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 I know you've expressed your concern over her neck, but if I were you, I'd extend concern over the upper torso as well. The shoulders are the correct length apart, but the chest comes out way too much. I'm not suggesting to put a stereotypical pair of massive gravity-defying breasts on her chest, but there are some things you could do to thin it out much more and give her a more sleek look.I like the concept of the skirt, but I can't get past seeing it as a bunch of hard Technic parts hooked up together. While it'd mess up the color scheme without some significant alterations, I think that using light gray cape parts would improve the look of a skirt. I love the effort and the concept, but in the end it's just too stiff to work. Quote avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Dragon Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 Thanks for pointing out the flaws of the upper torso. I didn't want to alter the look it has right now too much, but I lowered the Inika shoulder armour piece one notch and it looks much better now.As for the skirt, I don't have any minifig capes, but I'm working on a more solid version of it, using other pieces to fill up the gaps. Quote ~Blue Dragon~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiaka Posted February 25, 2012 Share Posted February 25, 2012 Very neat. Color layering is good, and design ... wow. I like the more subtle femininity. Some try to exaggerate aspects but here the MOC is female but not excessively so. Anywhoo, I would use a Mata head with a bulb+axle instead of the Metru one (might help with neck placement), and cover up the back with more ... skirt? The extensions from the hip. Excellent MOC and especially excellent weapon. Super work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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