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#41 Offline Flux: The Explorer

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Posted Aug 01 2012 - 11:09 AM

This is actually a bit sad especially near the ending of the comic where Terra killed him. Also, the "in memory" part was a neat addition.
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 11:54 AM

I think that quality of graphics in the later comics is pretty good, especially for someone so new to this.Here are a few ways you could improve, in "Krazon" you could put grass over the feet of the characters so it looks like they are actually standing there instead of floating. In the last bit of text I think that dashes would have looked cleaner than all the periods but they both accomplish the same thing so I suppose it doesn't matter. For the most part your comics are pretty good, there are several parts you can improve on but I'm sure you will be able to.
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#43 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 12:48 PM

Not much to say here, but it does provide some insight. He has such a sad life..

Yeah. I wanted to provide more depth to each character and I wanted people to feel bad about his death, not not care about any old character dying.

This is actually a bit sad especially near the ending of the comic where Terra killed him. Also, the "in memory" part was a neat addition.

I wanted to make it as sad as possible. It even depressed me a little bit

I think that quality of graphics in the later comics is pretty good, especially for someone so new to this.Here are a few ways you could improve, in "Krazon" you could put grass over the feet of the characters so it looks like they are actually standing there instead of floating. In the last bit of text I think that dashes would have looked cleaner than all the periods but they both accomplish the same thing so I suppose it doesn't matter. For the most part your comics are pretty good, there are several parts you can improve on but I'm sure you will be able to.

Thank you for the tips. I will include the grass effect in Terra Nuva's Comics 1.5 which will be launching soon (and the newest comic). Thank you for the compliments :biggrin:New Comic. This one is about Macku

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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 05:36 PM

Holy slag! That was unexpected, so much so that I won't say what happened for the sake of readers.But she didn't really do anything that suited that description...
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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 05:48 PM

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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 05:56 PM

Wait. Lehrak survived? That's sweet! It's great to see him again. Also, I was expecting TNG to randomly burst in because there was pie involved.
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 07:47 PM

So that's where my pies went..It's you and me now, Lerahk. At the end of this day, one shall stand, one shall fall.
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#48 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 07:57 PM

So that's where my pies went..It's you and me now, Lerahk. At the end of this day, one shall stand, one shall fall.

OMG that just gave me the idea for your comic. I was running short on ideas for you and Gavla but now I will make the comic :D

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Posted Aug 03 2012 - 01:42 PM

TNG PrimeThis was really hard to fit into the storyline, but it came out fine :D. Hope you like it TNG

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Posted Aug 03 2012 - 07:24 PM

LOL. Yeah, I like it. Lerahk clearly isn't very evil. I also like the pie.However...MACKU VS KRAZON? Whoa.
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Posted Aug 03 2012 - 08:33 PM

Yeah, Lerahk isn't really evil, he has just known Krazon for a long time.My LoveWhat will happen
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Posted Aug 03 2012 - 08:36 PM

Wow. They need relationship counseling.That's an interesting sword, by the way.
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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 12:39 AM

Oh wow. Krazon looks tough and unstoppable. Also, I think I know the sword Macku is holding.
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 12:42 AM

Oh wow. Krazon looks tough and unstoppable. Also, I think I know the sword Macku is holding.

And that would be?

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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 11:29 AM

Oh wow. Krazon looks tough and unstoppable. Also, I think I know the sword Macku is holding.

And that would be?

It looks a lot like the Soul Edge from Soul Caliber (if I remember).

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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 11:50 AM

Oh wow. Krazon looks tough and unstoppable. Also, I think I know the sword Macku is holding.

And that would be?

It looks a lot like the Soul Edge from Soul Caliber (if I remember).

You are correct :D

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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 01:28 PM

GavlaI guess Gavla is a much nicer guy in this comic series. He isn't trying to kill everybody :DLook for some big changes in the next comic series :P
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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 02:42 PM

It's always great to put storylines into a darker tone.......... :sneaky: I like the style you have going in this series so far.Probably because it reminds me of my style. Fitting comedy with a growing dark plot and the like.Always nice to see another one of those going on in the Comics Forum. :D-V-
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Here are some actually great comics that I feel deserve a bit more attention as well.

One Nation Under The Great Spirit - The Lazy Life of a Comic Maker 3.0 - 009 Makes Comics - Tilted - The Awesomepacolypse - Tavkorp: Since 2008 - Akano's Comics

 

Well, see you never again, BZP.

 


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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 02:46 PM

It really is getting darker. I think I'll like where this is going. I like the part where TNG is attempting to think about what to do with Terra. Also, why are there 2 headless Gavla sprites at the top left corner?
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 02:49 PM

It really is getting darker. I think I'll like where this is going. I like the part where TNG is attempting to think about what to do with Terra. Also, why are there 2 headless Gavla sprites at the top left corner?

I'm not quite sure :???:

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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 04:15 PM

Here it isThe Awakening #1 I hope I adressed most of the design problems in this new comic. Feel free to criticize :D I love improving. Where am I?
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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 06:28 PM

@Comic 20, Lol. Worst cover ever. Makes everyone hate you.Actually, I would have taken him to a hospital (for examination for signs of life and/or treatment if he is alive) myself while alerting everyone, but then again you only showed 5 seconds of my actions so it's very possible that I did.@Awakening, oh slag. He's in the afterlife...I think. I KNOW, I'LL BRING HIM BACK WITH THE MATRIX OF LEADERSHIPand oh wait that would only work on me.
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Posted Aug 04 2012 - 06:48 PM

@Comic 20, Lol. Worst cover ever. Makes everyone hate you.Actually, I would have taken him to a hospital (for examination for signs of life and/or treatment if he is alive) myself while alerting everyone, but then again you only showed 5 seconds of my actions so it's very possible that I did.@Awakening, oh slag. He's in the afterlife...I think. I KNOW, I'LL BRING HIM BACK WITH THE MATRIX OF LEADERSHIPand oh wait that would only work on me.

Actually you do take me to the hospital :D I just had to throw in some humor. (OMG Spoiler for the awakening :o)

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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 02:37 PM

Walk and TalkTerra Nuva finds somebody in the mysterious white land. But, I thought I was dead
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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 05:24 PM

Death is just another journey. doesn't matter to canon :PI only saw a few comics, and I was honestly reminded of my past series from years ago. Which isn't a good thing. My only real vice was the text. But your awaking stuff looks very promising, especially since you used glowy text, which is way easier to read then basic text.Have you tried speech bubbles? They can be big, but they allow for the reader to see what is being said sooo much better.So yeah, only a few things that bothered me, but still, you got promise kid. I love the great use of GIMP in this Awaking series, especially the reflections, thats classy.So, I shall come back again to see what you have to show, good luck my friend, and may the force be with you karz be with you.
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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 07:02 PM

I've seen this before...lol. In various other media.Actually, this makes it more obvious that he is dead.What next? "We have been watching you...a long, long time. You have fought for (insertnamehere), our last (insertnamehere) with courage and with sacrifice, the virtues of a leader. A leader worthy of our secret. Return now to (insertnamehere). (inserttaskhere) It is, and always has been your destiny."LOLWUT. No. Cookie if you get the reference.
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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 07:05 PM

I've seen this before...lol. In various other media.Actually, this makes it more obvious that he is dead.What next? "We have been watching you...a long, long time. You have fought for (insertnamehere), our last (insertnamehere) with courage and with sacrifice, the virtues of a leader. A leader worthy of our secret. Return now to (insertnamehere). (inserttaskhere) It is, and always has been your destiny."LOLWUT. No. Cookie if you get the reference.

Transformers ROTF LOL Cookie plox ;D

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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 07:09 PM

I hereby give you the cookie. (Cookie for THAT reference)I also forgot to say, that's quite an interesting and precise color scheme, especially with the mask, on Terra Nuva's dad. Nice work.
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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 07:20 PM

Yay :biggrin: a cookie!

Death is just another journey. doesn't matter to canon :PI only saw a few comics, and I was honestly reminded of my past series from years ago. Which isn't a good thing. My only real vice was the text. But your awaking stuff looks very promising, especially since you used glowy text, which is way easier to read then basic text.Have you tried speech bubbles? They can be big, but they allow for the reader to see what is being said sooo much better.So yeah, only a few things that bothered me, but still, you got promise kid. I love the great use of GIMP in this Awaking series, especially the reflections, thats classy.So, I shall come back again to see what you have to show, good luck my friend, and may the force be with you karz be with you.

Why thank you. The text was pretty bad in 1.0, but I hope to fix that with the glowing text in future series's. I am not a fan of speech bubbles due to space issues but perhaps I might try them in the future.oh, and here's a comic. Location revealedInside his Head

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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 07:34 PM

Getting out of the brain? How does that work? Does that mean Terra wakes up? Anyways, great comic. It looks very suspenseful.
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 05 2012 - 08:33 PM

Inside his head, yet he died, and--HARRY POTTER REFERENCE. HAHA FOUND ITBut it does have a unique twist in it, because there's some other guy..maybe Zorax is the smoke cloud guy.And the other twist is they have no idea how to get him out. XD
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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 11:17 AM

Still Alive?I think SeeKay is the most overused body in my comics....
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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 11:31 AM

I expected Terra to be bandaged up. Also, I only noticed 2 characters with Seekay's body so, I don't know if that should be considered "overused."
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"Everyone wondered what powered Zane. I don't know if we'll ever know. I like to

think he was a brother. Because he powered me... and he'll still power me as his memory lives on.

A ninja never quits and a ninja will never be forgotten. Wherever you are Zane...

you'll always be one of us..."

~ Kai, Ninjago


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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 11:33 AM

I expected Terra to be bandaged up. Also, I only noticed 2 characters with Seekay's body so, I don't know if that should be considered "overused."

Well, if you count SeeKay XD I was thinking of the matoran who uses SeeKay's head. My Bad :P. I was going to do a bandage, but then I decided to make it look like an old run down hospital. That will play into the story later.

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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 06:23 PM

Eh. I've used Just About Every Pre-Made Stock Body I Can Find as background characters. Grab a body, put a mask, done.Still, that's awesome. I have no idea how that's possible. But if his brain was breached too, how is he still alive there?Still a great comic, and looking forward to the answers.
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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 07:17 PM

Neat series. It was funny to start, but it got serious pretty quick. Can't wait to see where this goes in the future! ^_^
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Posted Aug 06 2012 - 08:46 PM

Eh. I've used Just About Every Pre-Made Stock Body I Can Find as background characters. Grab a body, put a mask, done.Still, that's awesome. I have no idea how that's possible. But if his brain was breached too, how is he still alive there?Still a great comic, and looking forward to the answers.

It will play into the story and probably the next comic.

Neat series. It was funny to start, but it got serious pretty quick. Can't wait to see where this goes in the future! ^_^

It was originally going to be a comedy with an epic in between seasons but I decided to spice things up a bit :P

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Posted Aug 07 2012 - 01:23 AM

I am not trying to copy Gavla with this comic/ idea. You will know when you see it. It happens for completely different reasons in my Comics and his. Don't sue me :PWhat the...
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Posted Aug 07 2012 - 02:04 AM

He left? Ok, now I'm confused.And he's becoming PIXELEMATED...O_o
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Posted Aug 07 2012 - 02:06 AM

He left? Ok, now I'm confused.And he's becoming PIXELEMATED...O_o

He's still in his head. He is just walking aimlessly with his dad when his arm fell off.

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