A fail to see any flaws.

-Torhuki

It looks pretty win, especially the details in the shading on Komas' face ^-^

But Tachi's lips are a bit awkward O.o

~CK

But Tachi's lips are a bit awkward O.o

Argh I know, it just makes me wanna cry or something. D; I tried fixing in photoshop, but it didn't really work out. xD

But Tachi's lips are a bit awkward O.o

Argh I know, it just makes me wanna cry or something. D; I tried fixing in photoshop, but it didn't really work out. xD

Grah, I know what you mean, sometimes however much I "fix" a drawing, it still looks off...:angry:

Can't wait for the colored version! =D

I used to be really into high-level inking, though now I've degraded into second-grade graphite. I miss my inking kit. =(

Anyways, I still love this work. Really. It's as good, though likely better than, my old inkwork. Dunno why inking seems to hate you so. *shrug*

~EW~

Thats awesome ^^ And inking is evil. But with the right steady hand and amount of patience you can't fail. Espescially not you I like Komas. I will read GitS asap, i only got to section 3.0 or so...-.-

Wow, Nice.

(I kinda only just started reading GitS)

::g:

Lady K, Lady K... *shakes head*

I've got two sided-feelings now.

On the one hand, I just want to tell you that it's awesome, and that you shouldn't be so critical and all that stuff...

On the other hand, I agree that there are some little flaws...

And, on the third hand (yeah, _I have 3 hands ) I'd love to put my usual 2-3 sentences about practising on if you're not happy with your results here... but I'm pretty sure you've already heard them often enough in your life. <3

And I don't wanna seem like the teacher or whatnot...

...shall I go ahead and do a loong encourage speech now?

Le gasp, I didn't know Chappy 10 was up!8D

*Dashes off*

I can't believe I didn't notice that earlier.>>

-Raia-

Lady K, Lady K... *shakes head*

 

I've got two sided-feelings now.

 

On the one hand, I just want to tell you that it's awesome, and that you shouldn't be so critical and all that stuff...

On the other hand, I agree that there are some little flaws...

 

And, on the third hand (yeah, _I have 3 hands ) I'd love to put my usual 2-3 sentences about practising on if you're not happy with your results here... but I'm pretty sure you've already heard them often enough in your life. <3

And I don't wanna seem like the teacher or whatnot...

...shall I go ahead and do a loong encourage speech now?

LOL, dear Taka, if something looks off you can tell me. I don't need anymore silly praise. Well of course, if I already know of the flaw, one can pass on critiquing again.

And yes, practice makes perfect!... Or atleast, it'll help us learn how to do something a tad better. xD

Le gasp, I didn't know Chappy 10 was up!8D

 

*Dashes off*

 

I can't believe I didn't notice that earlier.>>

Aw, thanks for the review Raia, you didn't have to do that! You see I had this gut feeling my regular readers didn't know I updated, so I just wanted to make sure. I guess I need to inform updates in my blog.

*throws pens at Lady K*

At least your inking doesn't look like a drunk chicken attempted to ink a picture of Krakua....

I think your inking looks very nice. I like the variations in line thickness.

So yeah.

I love Komas' hair and Tachi's purdy.