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Writers' Alliance Contest #1 Entry Entry


Riisiing Moon

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That's right, it's the Writers' Alliance's first contest!

 

What exactly is this contest? Well, stay tuned, girls and boys, and find out just what it is next week...All I can reveal now is that there will be both an Epics contest and a Short Story contest, both of which will be taking place in groups. The theme of the contest is characters of your teammates.

 

Curious as to what the heck that is? Want it? Post here in this entry now with a piece of writing, about 100 words, but no real limit. Show as much talent as you've got--and be sure to write it on the spot. This is to test your skill and instinct as a writer, so don't go quoting an older piece.

 

See you all in the contest!

 

Note--The contest will be replacing any normal Weekly Updates for this and next week--so get to reviewing the old entries! Check out the WA Story Museum for a list of all the submissions so far.

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Forgive me if I'm being somewhat dense, but I am slightly confused. Why are we supposed to post a piece of writing? Is it just to be able to participate in the contest? And is the theme for the contest itself or the piece of writing, or both?

 

Again, forgive if I come across as slow of mind.

 

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You're writing a short piece so I can see which of the entrants work well with each other, and put you guys in groups. The theme you're writing for is the chars of your team members--exactly what that means you'll have to wait and see!

 

It's no problem. :D

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Glistening crystals reflected the pale light that filtered through the snow-laden skies. Snow whipped through the howling winds as more of it came pouring down. Visibility was nearing zero with each passing second, but fortunately, that was no problem to the only signs of life in the area.

 

Draezeth broke a piece of ice off the wall and sucked on it, gulping down the melting water. He wasn't thirsty, but it was the only form of entertainment one could hope to find in an ice cave. Well, that and watch the crystals reflecting the pale sunlight. Or both, as he was doing now. Of course, he could always strike up a conversation with Hoc, who stood leaning on his bright red motorcycle nearby...

 

Hoc would have loved to talk with Drae, but the icicle-drinking human (at least he thought he was human) always cut him off when his voice got too loud, which tended to happen a lot. Hoc polished the motorcycle's gleaming side affectionately. He glanced back at Drae again.

 

Draezeth was a medium-sized young man with electric blue hair, and skin so pale that it, too looked blue. He always wore a pair of pointless blue shades which disguised his true eye color from Hoc. Right now, he wore a white and blue jacket and a pair of waterproof blue pants. He didn't have any gloves, and wore thick boots... also blue. He didn't shiver, despite the cold, and held the icicle as if it were a carrot, despite its subzero temperatures.

 

Hoc shivered as he watched Drae sitting completely unphased, and silent. Hoc wasn't made of ice, as he suspected Draezeth might be, but he had his own secrets he would be reluctant to let Draezeth know. But if the snow continued, they would both have to start spilling the beans or they might be stuck for weeks. At least, that's what Hoc kept telling himself.

 

And then there was that weir creature that followed Draezeth around. It had unnaturally blue fur, and purple horns. It slightly resembled a deer, only it was much too small, and, of course, it was blue.

 

Getting irritated by the solid blue, blue and more blue, Hoc pulled a pair of red shades over his own eyes, and kept them focused on his own black, white and red snowboarding outfit.

 

Realizing that he had been polishing the same two inches of his bike, he stopped and massaged his sore hand, "Look, man. I don't get you. Why in the world were you out here, why is your hair blue, why is your skin blue, why is that animal-thing blue, why aren't you shivering, and why aren't you packing any food?"

 

An ironic smile touched Draezeth's face. He slowly got to his feet and, still smiling, "You've asked me those questions at least a thousand times over the last two days."

 

I could have written more, but I got bored with it.

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Gotta be written on the spot. You can definitely put a lot of effort into it, it doesn't have to be just typed as fast as possible and drawn from the first thought that popped into your head (unless that works for you); it's intended to see your individual abilities at their rawest level, and to compare your guys' styles so I can make groups that don't end up chaotic together.

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Gotta be written on the spot. You can definitely put a lot of effort into it, it doesn't have to be just typed as fast as possible and drawn from the first thought that popped into your head (unless that works for you); it's intended to see your individual abilities at their rawest level, and to compare your guys' styles so I can make groups that don't end up chaotic together.

 

What if your style incorporates a bunch of random elements and doesn't really specialize? I mean, mine is just a conglomerate of everything I read, and it can have epic descriptions, or short ones; built-up tension, or constant action. Not trying to make this hard for you, RM, but my style makes no sense whatsoever XP

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Okay, RM, here ya go. Whipped up in about 45 min. on a word doc.

 

Up the stairs, down the hall, the second door on the left.

 

That door has been closed for three years.

 

She walks past it, like she does every day. But today, the things that lie behind the door call to her.

 

It has happened before, and she has tried to ignore the curious yearning, an almost insatiable longing to find out what she already knows, that stirs up inside of her. She has learned to shun, push down, and lock away the urge that is welling up inside her like one resists the allure of just one more cigarette.

 

The girl steps forward, resting a thoughtful hand on the painted brass handle, almost daring to lean her weight against the cool, solid whitewashed wood. She inhales slowly, and a whisper of a familiar scent teases her.

 

It was nothing. Only a frustratingly evanescent memory, come back to haunt her.

 

She lets the breath out.

 

She turns away, not wanting to tempt herself. But her hand still rests on the doorknob.

 

She takes a deep breath again.

 

In her mind’s eye, she sees the picture of her family, which sits, all but forgotten, atop the mantle this moment.

 

A family of four stands before a wispy willow tree. They smile in the picture, but not in her mind. There is a mother, and a father. There are two children. The girl recognizes a younger version of herself. And the boy beside her, only two years older than her, bears a striking resemblance to her. They share their father’s thoughtful, caring eyes, and their mother’s proud, strong nose. The eyes of the boy in her mind blink, and find hers. Not the little girl beside him, but her, as if he knows he’s being spied upon. He mouths her name.

 

The girl lets out her breath, the image of the boy still fresh in her mind.

 

And suddenly, she can stand it no longer.

 

She twists the door handle almost desperately, and stumbles into the room.

 

In three years, nothing has changed. Scuffed up white walls, with lyrics painted over them, a simply designed ceiling fan with layers upon layers of dust on the blades, a rather large bookshelf against one wall, a tall mirror next to an empty laundry hamper, and a worn out bean bag chair next to a barely used work desk.

 

The last thing her eyes find is the lonely, undisturbed bed. The blue and white patterned bedspread looks abandoned, uninviting, and lifeless.

 

Even so, it is all the girl can do to make it over to the forgotten bed before the memories flooding through her cause her eyes to swim and shimmer like the scales of a fish through water.

 

As she collapses onto the bed, and as dust is stirred up and gradually begins to resettle, the image of the boy from the picture flashes through her mind again.

 

Again, he blinks, but this time, she with him.

 

And as she does, she lets the tears overflow.

 

After holding herself together for three years, it was good to cry. It was okay to lie there, vulnerable and raw. It was relieving to come to terms with her loss. And it was freedom to allow herself to think of her lost brother once more.

 

(Edit: Author's Note- yeah, I dunno where I was really going with that. But is that what you were looking for?)

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Eh, here is mine.

 

Dylan slowly traced his finger along the table's edge as everyone yelled at him. Well, he thought everyone was yelling at him. It might just be his brother. His abusive brother, Kyle, the one whose father did not stop him when he began to beat Dylan.

 

Dylan's sisters sat on the couch, staring at him with those hateful eyes. His dad stared at Kyle with a look in his eyes that was almost respect. Dylan hated that.

 

"Are you even listening to me?" Kyle shouted, right in Dylan's face.

 

Dylan lifted his near-lifeless eyes up to his brother, but he did not answer. Instead, he turned toward the table, leaning on it.

 

"I asked you a question!" Kyle yelled, swinging his fist wide toward the back of Dylan's head.

 

Dylan did not try to dodge it. There was no point. Kyle's fist smacked so hard into Dylan's head that his whole upper body lurched forward, sending his face into the table with a thud.

 

Dylan immediately knew his brother was not done, and he knew that the next blow would also be on the back of his head. He didn't really want that, no. So he rolled sideways off the table, doing his best to ignore the pain in his face.

 

Kyle's fist slammed into the table with a crack, and Kyle howled. Probably broke his hand. Too bad for him.

 

Dylan ran toward the door.

 

"Boy!" his father yelled at him. "You haven't finished your chores! Don't you dare run out that--"

 

But Dylan did not stop to listen. He ran straight out the door.

 

As he ran across the lawn, Dylan heard his dad yelling.

 

"You better not come back, boy, if you ain't gonna appreciate what I do for you and go and run away! You hear me...?"

 

His voice faded away. Dylan ran all the way to the bridge over the river. The river was fast and had a terrible undercurrent. Perfect.

 

Dylan slowed at the bridge. He though of his brother. His father. His sisters, who had both, at some point, tried to drown him when he was younger. That wasn't worth it. None of it was.

 

He jumped.

 

I'm not sure where exactly the talent is in that little story, but whatever.

 

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Cold wind blew against the man; he scuffled along the hard sand, the moonlight guiding him as he trekked across the desert. Frost had formed on his armor, his eyes were dry from the wind. He stopped a few times, getting his bearings, then continued onward. He looked at the cliffs, seeing small caves in them. Hesitantly, he began climbing upwards towards one of them. After a few scares, he pulled himself into the cave, thankful for being out of the wind. He striked a match, pulling out a torch and setting it on fire. He struck it into the fine dirt, getting it deep enough that it didn't fall over. He looked outside, staring at the three moons. One went across the sky at amazing speeds, while the other two did an intricate dance around each other. Many would call this sight glorious; the man knew he'd see it many times more.

 

He looked at the stars; he could dimly make out a tiny star, which he knew to be Sol. He was so far from home, so lost. He retreated into the cave, pulling out a picture. It showed a family, playing in green grass in a brightly lit day. They were happy; so happy. Sighing, the man put it away, looking at his cracked armor. He had salvaged as much as he could from his fighter, but it was pointless; he only had enough supplies to last a few weeks at best. He had been ****ed to an slow death. If only he had avoided the blast... perhaps there were more survivors, but he himself had only survived re-entry because he came in at a shallow angle.

 

He took his armor off, pulling a sleeping bag from his backbox. Letting it roll out, he pulled himself into it, zipping off the top and waiting while it automatically warmed. A faint light glowed, giving him some reassurance. This planet wouldn't get the best of him; rescue efforts would come, and he'd be there waiting for them. No matter what.

 

Hardly my best, but it works.

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Alright, wqrote the first part last night, but had to get off before I could post it.

Two titans stood leaning against one of the many small houses in the slums of Nerdak town. The were commonly known as petty thieves, although they wouldn't hesitate to rob if they got the chance. Right now their gaze was fixed on a Le-Matoran who was striding confidently in their direction. They ignored the fact that he definitely had the look of someone who you would not want to mess with. But the two thugs ignored that, after all, how much harm could a single Matoran do to them?

 

 

* * *

 

 

Kemaru almost grinned as the two thugs came at him. Heh, fools. Why everyone thinks a Matoran is easy pickings is beyond me, he thought, placing his hand on the leather grip of his blade. The two thugs swaggered up, laughing at the Matoran's defiance.

 

"Hey there, little bud. How about you wipe that look off your face. A traveler, eh? Hand over your cute little sword and bow, and your pack as well. Then thank your spirit that we're going easy on ya!" one of them snarled. And the look on Kemaru's face turned from defiance to anger. In a moment his weapons were out.

 

The first titan snatched a broadsword from his back and threw himself forwards, aiming an overhand blow at Kemaru. The second simply fired a blast of energy at the Le.

 

They both hit nothing. Kemaru had thrown himself to the side, neatly avoiding both strikes. A quick shot from his crossbow sent one of the titans to the ground, his head blasted by an energy bolt.

 

The remaining Titan took one took at his fallen comrade and fled, several energy bolts hissing through the air around him.

 

Kemaru smiled slightly as he continued waling, acting like he hadn't just been fighting for his life.

 

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:tohu: Now guys, don't judge, writing isn't one of my stronger talents, which is why I joined the WA.

Josh had always been a loner. He had always relied on his wits rather than his trust in people. He hardly trusted himself.

 

But tonight, tonight all that changed. He was meeting someone who could change that. Someone who, according to his dying friend had told him, would change his life.

 

He had no hope. He never had. He had only done it to succumb his dying friend's wishes. The man who he trusted. In a world without trust. The man he thought of as a brother.

 

No longer did he believe in rules, or government. He was a loner. Yet here, now, he was walking into a deep cave.

 

At the moment he saw electricity, he knew something was wrong.

 

He felt a knife. And he knew that he was right in how he had always lived. He should not have trusted his "friend". The only person in the world he cared about, had betrayed hm. Now, he accepted it.

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Arcanio's steps seemed to split the earth itself.

 

A giant of a man, Arcanio literally shook the earth with each step his comically small legs took. That is, comically small compared to the hulking mass of muscle and sinew that was his torso. Covered in armor fashioned of a silver metal, he appeared to be a monstrosity even more so when one examined his right arm. Unlike Arcanio's left arm, it was covered in a mishapen mass of metal that made it three times thicker than the other arm. Claws came out of its stumpy ending instead of fingers, lethal stilettos ready to stab. Half of his face, as well, was covered by the same gunmetal blob. Dangling lose at his belt was a war hammer, and a serious-looking one at that. Covered in glowing red and white runes, the hammer had a huge axe blade on one side, whereas the other had the traditional metal head. To top it off, literally, the top of the hammer had a huge spike mounted upon it. His face was covered by a helmet shaped like a wolf's head, which was appropiate considering his company. Next to the giant, a gray wolf plodded along faithfully, its blue eyes showing a stoic determination like its master's. Virgil was the pet's name, but Arcanio did not consider Virgil a "pet"; rather, to him, the canine was his partner.

 

The two travelled on through a canyon, its walls a rusty red. Once, long ago, a stream had babbled there. Now, the only sounds were the shaking of the earth under Arcanio's feet andt he cawing of crows. He saw a throng of them overhead now, descending. It was all prefectly normal-

 

-Except for the fact that crows didn't live in the desert.

 

Suddenly, one of them dive-bombed Virgil, biting the wolf in the ear. Howling, Virgil twisted this way and that, trying to shake the bird off, but more were coming, and soon, the wolf was covered in crows, snapping and clawing at him.

 

And then Arcanio descended upon them like a thunderbolt, literally. He had been preparing all this time, storing his magic, and now he unleashed it, lightning sparking off his right arm and hitting the crows. They scattered, shocked, then re-formed, and turned to attack Arcanio himself.

 

At first, their pecks were just a nuisance as he shocked them off, but gradually, he realized two things: his electric attacks weren't affecting them any more, and his armor was being penetrated by their beaks. Slowly, ever so slowly, he was losing.

 

Now, he decided, was time to fight. Grasping his war hammer's hilt, he threw it, spinning, into the crowd of crows. They screamed, trying to get away from it, only to die smashed by one head, impaled by the spike, or cut in half by the blade. Flying around, the hammer cut another swath through his foes before Arcanios caught it. That dealt with most of his enemies.

 

However, the few left were still pecking and clawing at him, and he was, by this time, covered in stabs and slashes made by the crow's natural weapons. Arcanios tried to punch them off, but to no avail. The crows seemed to have a near-magnetic grip on his armor, not to mention a near-metal constituition of their feathers. Closing his eyes, Arcanios prepared to die-

 

-And then heard a howling battle cry. Reopening his lids, the titan saw Virgil, descending upon the crows once more. Smiling, Arcanios used his last bit of magic to turn Virgil's fur into metal temporarily, and the iron wolf literally wolfed down his enemies as they fultiley tried to pierce the wolf's armor, gulping them down like chicken.

 

Finally, the battle was over, the canyon floor covered with the corpses of the birds. Sitting back and relaxing in the shade of the canyon, Arcanios and Virgil licked their wounds, then, tired from the combat, went to sleep.

 

Sorry about the length, cuz I know I went a little overboard here, but I couldn't help it. I love this dude <3 I might actually be using him in an epic, if I get the time. I mean, I have a lot of writing projects coming up...

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Yup, tomorrow at midnight. :D

 

Yayz. ^_^

 

Um... my final writing is about 850 words. I like it a lot, so I'm going to post it as a flash fiction story and enter it here. Is that okay? :)

 

 

 

--Mr.M

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Yup, it's no problem--just remember, don't expect a review.

 

Yes, of course.

 

But I can still submit it as a short story in next weeks entry, no? ^_^

 

 

 

--Mr.M

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The sight was stunning. The sight was magnificent. The sight was blinding in its beauty. The sight was heartbreaking.

 

But the observer did not care.

 

The observer only cared that it was happening, and why, and what the results would be.

 

The observer— he with twenty thousand years of life behind him— could only think that what he saw was nothing more than another cosmological episode that was to be analyzed and studied.

 

It was happening relatively quickly to a being of such long life, and as a result the observer would have passed this down as just another quick examination had it not been for the fact that this rapid event was an opportunity to learn something new. An opportunity to scrutinize another obscure parallelism of the universe in the hope to understand its workings; perhaps to gain some insight to how the observer might accomplish his given task.

 

And as all this was happening— the sight and the observation of the sight— a war was being waged. Blameless civilians and passive countrymen were being subjected to statute by strength; their sovereignty and liberties taken away by the might of the masses, continually driving onward to the beat of imperialism. All fell to the vigorous legion and the machinations of the hated Barraki. And their great protector did nothing, because it was not disturbing the ‘balance’. The very same balance that kept him alive.

 

For their protector, their sanctified being of supreme power, could not care for the individuals or the people as a mass so long as he was in a state of health. Even when he weakened because of his people’s strife, he would not turn to them and aim to cure their civil turmoil. No, for he had created organizations to deal with such important matters as universal peace.

 

Their protector, their adored guardian, was nothing but an automaton devoid of emotion or feeling.

 

And as this war waged, not once disturbing the perpetuated equilibrium, the observer watched the tragic sight unfolding before his analytical gaze.

 

The system was not too large—just the right size in fact; the five planets carefully strung to their orbits around the glowing star. An adolescent star for a sun, the planets, trace amounts of cosmic rays, a lack of nearby stars, and modest interstellar debris made this a very healthy system.

 

Therefore, the observer could not understand why the life bearing third and fourth planets were heading towards the bright sun. A quick study revealed that the gravitational field of the fourth and massive fifth planets seemed to be interacting in a normal manner, resulting in the massive pushing and pulling that was changing the third planet into a scorched rock.

 

The second and first planets both were orbiting the other side of the sun and thus did not feel much of the gravitational dancing of the outer planets. An interestingly random accident.

 

Firestorms erupted on the surface of the lush third planet and fast became visible from space. The oceans boiled away and steam swiftly filled the evaporating atmosphere, obscuring the conflagration that ravaged below. The planet collided into the sun, and the star hastily consumed the elements composing the now obliterated celestial body.

 

The fourth planet did not have such a horrible fate. It would survive; but most of its life would not. The gravitational affect of the gigantic fifth planet pushed the it closer to the sun. The fourth planets massive ocean flowed over the single continent that it bore. All land life forms drowned in the newly created ocean planet and temperatures raised by eight degrees. Most aquatic life died.

 

To the observer this was nothing more than gravitational interplay between planets.

 

This observation led to another question, concerning why such a large body should exist in an otherwise small system with comparatively undersized planets. Several observations, studies, and one experiment were then performed, resulting in the most likely reason to be concluded upon: Due to the proximity to the galactic center, the metallicity of this solar system was particularly high. This meant that large planets could form. Not only this, but high metallicity also increases the density of the protoplanetary disk and thereby induces said giant planets to shift position. These massive planets would then dominate and determine the fate of minor planets as their gravitational fields pushed and pulled.

 

This proved a possibly useful piece of knowledge given the observers purpose: to reform a shattered planet.

 

But that did not matter. Even though the observation made would help the observer with his duty, he did not once give a thought to the life just obliterated. He did not care about the life of others; he did not care about the life of his own people. That made all the difference to his life. For in his years of existence, The Great Spirit Mata Nui never had a soul.

 

And there it is. ^_^

 

 

 

--Mr.M

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