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Inferno630

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  1. Here you go. My additions in bold. P.S. I think Smileys hat should glow when he uses a hat power I like the A + Air attack. Wait, I have a new idea for the standard B attack. He could do something that absorbs the enemy's power (like Kirby minus swallowing). The problem with the side taunt that you suggested is that that would be only slightly different then the up taunt. Any ideas on how Smiley can absorb the power are appreciated.
  2. I still need ideas for three of Smiley's moves (check last page). Krika sounds good for the game, you still probably didn't keep a secret as long as I did, though. Wait, if all the characters need to end up in the lab, can I have Smiley leave and then come back? (Suppose this should be in the story section...)
  3. Ah...there is a problem with that, you assume that he is happy because he is smiling, but he is actually very serious, he is a Lego person, he doesn't get to change his face (That is just how it works). I could make a better storyline if I could actually have him interact with someone. I also wrote each chapter in about 45 minutes. I will try harder, after all, I have time. Very good edit, Angel Bob. Just a note: Smiley does know Teridax's real name. If you would prefer that I just refer to him as Makuta, then just tell me. I wont be on til late Sunday, so I will probably have Smiley's next chapter on Monday. Is there any character I can have him meet?
  4. » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Chapter ?: Cutscene: Another Detour “Dealing with those enemies was too easy. This must be a traaappppp!” Smiley said, falling 10 stories down through a hole that showed up below him. Just before he hit the ground he activated a shielding power he had. “Thank you, Toa Tahu” He said remembering a few previous encounters with the hot- headed toa. “Why isn’t my flight power working, or strength?” He zoomed into a wall. “At least my speed is still working perfectly” He went through the wall. “And my intangibility.” He back flipped back into the hallway. “Well, I can do a longer checkup later, but I have to stop that shadow of mine”. *Insert Level: Running through a darker part of the lab earlier. New Enemies: None* Cutscene: The Angry Shadow “You! Stop before I stop you!” Smiley yelled at his shadow self. “Why should I listen to you? I am more powerful than you, especially in this universe!” “Come and fight then!” “As you wish!” The shadow jumped down, staring at Smiley the whole time. “Now I will cut all ties to my former life, and join Teridax in victory!” *Insert Single Stock Brawl: Smiley vs Smiley (in shadow costume)* Cutscene: The Chase Begins Shadow Smiley fell to the ground, battered but not beaten; he got up and flew onto a platform, cut a rope connected to a crate, and ran out the door. The crate dropped and Smiley dodged. The crate crashed into the floor revealing some bricks. Smiley took the bricks and built a staircase with them. He ran up the stairs and through the door that Shadow Smiley went. *Insert Level: Chasing after Shadow Smiley, who you see occasionally setting off security systems. New Enemies: Security Drones* Cutscene:A Cut to the Chase Smiley saw Shadow Smiley going into a huge empty room. Then the Shadow stopped, turned, and stared as Smiley ran into the room. Smiley got ready for the fight. “Now, let’s try this again”, Smiley said. “Bring it on” *Insert Three Stock Brawl: Smiley vs Smiley (in shadow costume)* Cutscene: The Shadow is Down Shadow Smiley lay on the ground, staring at his enemy. “You cannot beat me.” “Too late, I have” Smiley looked away for a split second, and his Shadow was gone when he looked back. “I’ll have to find him later, he’s probably looking for Teridax.” Smiley felt a surge of power, he regained a few abilities. “Well, at least there is some good news today.” After all the problems, his smile never faded, although he wasn’t all that happy. “I’ll get him later, but now I should find a way out of—“ “Security to sector B-5, Security to sector B-5” “Looks like they found someone else in this lab. Hope it isn’t someone I know, but it is the perfect distraction to blast out of here.” *Stage Clear: No Reward* Here is another chapter for you guys. Featuring Smiley.
  5. Actually, I probably should explain this. This all started in my second story about Smiley (I wrote two stories a long time ago). He travelled to an alternate Bionicle universe many times (this Alternate Universe is the same as the mainstream one except Smiley is there). So far, he has experienced any given part of the storyline. In a way, this is similar to reading about it, because he sees everything and helps, but somehow he never changes the course of events. His portals also seem to ignore time, so he still experienced the Metru Nui story arc after experiencing the Mata Nui story arc. That is why Smiley has so much experience with every Bionicle character, except Talos, so that should make things interesting. Here is the moves list though. I would like ideas for the areas missing moves. Missing moves are in bold. Note: After I wrote the moves list I decided that the Hat (so awesome that it is a proper noun) is just a channel for Smiley's powers.
  6. Actually, Maelstrom wouldn't work, but, those skeleton zombies from Alpha Team would work really well (Smiley's archnemesis was Ogel). Nope, can't do that, Inferno is a character from a non-bionicle story. I may make an MOC with a new name, but I'm not really good at MOCing (If need be). I believe that Talos meant that the dark hunter's arm literally turns into a mace. I think that Smiley's portals should be a purplish color, like a black hole from the DS game Scribblenauts (you could probably look that up). This should be switched to an easier "Now, where am I?" Smiley speaks that way. Just one clarification, Smiley doesn't just deal in psionics, he pretty much absorbs power from anyone he encounters. He has encountered a lot of people, hence the huge amount of power. Just to note is that I only chose Roodaka because 2Tie had mentioned to me that no one has written about Roodaka yet. I don't care that you took her out, it actually makes more sense. Well now I will probably start working on Smiley's next chapter. Smiley vs Shadow Smiley
  7. » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... « Well there it is. If you are going to rewrite this chapter, I will probably have to re-rewrite Smiley's dialog. I am the only one who knows about his personality. Therefore, if anyone writes a chapter with Smiley, I will possibly have to change Smiley's dialog. I can write a few more chapters for this story arc if you would like. If you wish, you could have Smiley break the fourth wall, too. That's always fun. Spoilers Added -S
  8. It is time. Smiley UNLEASHED! You may not like the name Smiley, but this is in no way a democracy. I create the character, I pick the name. I only created the model because of the name’s history. A few notes: 1. This model is highly accurate in scale. One mm = one blender unit. 2. This model is not rigged yet. 2Tie was going to do it later. 3. This model also pays attention to detail. The legs even have holes in the back. A few notes about the character: 1. He has many powers (Surprised?) 2. He has worked with Bionicle characters before. He has experienced every part of the Bionicle storyline. 3. He is extremely resourceful. If you want to know anything else about him, post questions here and I will answer them soon. If you want to see Smiley in action, check out the story chapter I wrote out in the story section. I will post his moves list later.
  9. That was me who came up with that. Have we added any stages recently? Because they should probably be added to the list of stages.
  10. Am I allowed to use that Laboratory that was in the story earlier? If so, I'm writing a chapter with the new character and possibly Roodaka. What number are we on? Seeing as no one has said anything, I will be putting the new character and Roodaka in a part of the Laboratory. EDIT: I'm done with chapter, I will probably post it tomorrow.
  11. @Angel Bob: Do you have the overall plot set up? I will probably write a chapter with my new character (granted 2Tie lets me) and I want to know if he could meet any characters or not.
  12. Oh, that's right, I just gotta get a few details hammered out with 2Tie. Probably before Friday night, cause then I will be gone for the weekend.
  13. I think that is fine, but that is not my decision. After all, you already came up with where he can fit in story. But once again, not my call. Sounds fine to me. Not my call again, though.
  14. For fun, and for deleting her/him (I'm still not sure). Either way, I only need 2Tie's permission. Plus I'm Third-in-command so 3 + 1 = 4; 4 > 2 so ha. You should at least understand the > sign, cause it's an angle like you Angle Bob...
  15. Wait, what are you talking about? PS: Was everyone else having major technical difficulties here? Yeah, I know, but at the beginning I was confused as to why, at the time. Just look at the top.
  16. No, I had been trying to find out why the character I created wasn't being included in the main game. Although, now I have an explanation but I am trying to change 2Tie's mind.
  17. If it is storyline problems you are worried about, he has been gone to every story year of Bionicle. He has dealt with their characters. In an alternate universe of course, but the only real difference between the universes is that he came. I can easily fit him into story. Don't worry about that. Also of note is the fact that this game takes place in pretty much another alternate universe, you could have Mario show up if you really wanted to. EDIT: Or is is just the name...? Off Topic: Why are you playing Metroid on your laptop? Don't worry I'm sure you can beat Kraid quicker now. (You already fought him so many times) PS: Really? Cause the server was always too busy for me to do anything yesterday...
  18. Wait, what are you talking about? PS: Was everyone else having major technical difficulties here?
  19. Don't worry, Shadix probably just didn't see you. I am pretty sure you are considered staff, after all, you wrote some of the story.
  20. I did get my only superior's permission (2Tie), I thought you got the authority smacked out of you. It isn't the gold-skinned fusion. You might not like the character, but too bad, they're in. EDIT: Actually, you may not mind the character, but you will probably dislike the name. (Once again, too bad) You're just mad that you haven't been in on a secret that I am.
  21. I think he means your gender... But I have no idea. Who is writing the next story chapter?
  22. *ignoring Inferno38957893417589-34758-93427-5897-* I suppose... I don't care if you waste your time writing that out every time. I'm going to be gone most of Sunday, July 11. So the reveal isn't then...
  23. Yes it does, thank you very much.
  24. We're getting closer to my big reveal guys!
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