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Wow, very good job. I'd just suggest moving down the bristles a bit. Now make toothpaste =D

Chapter 9: It was pretty cool. Zaktan is very... Zaktan-ish. And what Bitil said was great too: "Who cares? There are at least 20 shots a day in this house." And it's funny to see how Brutaka can destroy the house with his experiments.Chapter 10:

Breez: You're wierd. Everybody likes killing.Evo: You're evil! Killing is wrong! Doesn't your conscience tell you that?Breez: Nah, I killed my conscience long ago.Rocka: Yeah, me too. He was easy, didn't even carry a pistol do defend himself.

That was so funny. Kalmah is always a good thing to add in comedies. And the "1/140th of a pancake" story is just crazy. I guess the "white hero" must be Stormer. Overall, good chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Thanks Ehlekdude! I agree simple ways are boring.Chapter 6.5: The Wizard and the Lion-------------Someday to the New Atero City...Me: Stronius!Stronius: Yes, my lord?Me: I need a newspaper.Stronius: Here is it, my lord!Me: Let's see... "The Heroes are in the process of being upgraded for the Savage Planet mission. A rookie named Daniel Rocka joined the Alpha Team 3.0."Someone knocks to the door.Me: Yeah?Stormer: Hey Author! Look at my new rhino armor!Me: You should've been a polar bear, as said a friend of mine months and months ago.Stormer: I've heard there's a Raw-Jaw there.Me: Really?Stormer: Yeah. (Shoots Kalmah)Kalmah: Silly! I'm a tentacled Barraki!Stormer: What's a Barraki? Where am I?Me: On Spherus Magna.Stormer: Oh my... I believed I was on Quatros.Ehlekdude: Look! There's Witch Doctor in the forest!Narrator: Through the window, we can see a tall, white silhouette emerging from the trees around the City.Stormer: See, Author? We're on Quatros!Me: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifLater, in the deep forest...Me: Hey, skull wizard!Witch Doctor: Hmm?Me: Why are you here?WD: There are so many creatures to corrupt with Quaza spikes... and your Protodermis might make me even more powerful.Stormer: You're a villain! We Heroes will throw you in jail!Me: Preston, shut up!WD: Your dinner is ready, Scorpio.A wild Scorpio jumps and attacks Stormer.Furno: Fear the red eagle!Ehlekdude: Weren't you supposed to be dead?Furno: Oh yeah. *falls*Nex: Fear the orange tiger!Raw-Jaw: attacks Nex.Stringer: Fear the black bear!Bulk: Fear the werewolf! *attacks Stringer*Stringer: You betrayed us!Bulk: Yeah. *kills Stringer*Nex: runs away.WD: Good job, Dunkan.Bulk: Call me Bulk.WD: Good job, Wolfy.Bulk: My name is Bulk! *kills WD*Me: Well, there's nothing to do here. Let's go.Ehlekdude: Yeah. I want an ice-cream.Matau: It costs around 50000 widgets.Ehlekdude: Whaaat?Matau: Because it's a gold ice-cream.Me: Where did you find the gold?Matau: I used Rocka's mask.Rocka: Fear the golden lion!Me: You look silly without your mask.Rocka: Grumble.Stronius: Author! The newspaper has been updated!Me: Let's see... "Witch Doctor has corrupted Bionicle beasts and objects. A Hero named Dunkan Bulk betrayed the Hero Factory and joined the white wizard."Ehlekdude: Look! A corrupted Muaka!Me: I'd suggest... running!And we run to the castle.Narrator: Author! An army of beasts is going to take the castle over!We can see Mantax, Vezok, Hakann, Thok, Avak, and many beasts such as Muaka, Raw-Jaw, Waspix, Fangz, Kikanalo, Sand Wolves, etc... some of them being corrupted with Quaza spikes.Me: I knew I should have killed Mantax... Where's Lake Eternity?LE: Here! And now my name is Toa Leafix! Mantax will lose against me! *jumps out with a sword in each arm*Me: He's totally mad!Ehlekdude: At least, let's try to help him. *glues beasts*Me: Rocka, help us or I kill you!Rocka: I can't without my mask!Me: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifNex: Hero Factory is here!Evo: I'm here too! Why haven't I been upgraded?Nex: Are you jealous?Evo: Yeah, I think so. *starts fighting against Nex*Hakann: I am your opponent!Leafix: Knocks out Hakann.Me: Okay now this battle isn't serious. Mantax, I kill you!Mantax: Aah... *falls dramatically*Brutaka: Police is here! *imprisons the Piraka and scatters the beasts around*Me: Cool.Brutaka: You're under arrest.Me: And why?Brutaka: Because you stole a truck.Me: It wasn't me, it was Onua.Brutaka: Ah okay. Now go away before I find another reason to arrest you. I love arresting people.Me: Try arresting Nex and Evo. They're annoying.Brutaka: Good idea!Later in the castle...Stronius: Newspaper has been updated!Me: Again?! Let's see... "The Piraka are back in jail. Onua was arrested for stealing a truck. Nex and Evo were arrested for being annoying. Leafix has turned mad and is being currently cured by a doctor named Vezon." Oh my god.Ehlekdude: Vezon is crazy!Me: We must save Leafix. Even if he's mad too.Ehlekdude: Which means we're also getting mad.Rocka: And don't forget looking in stores, there might be a new mask for me.Ehlekdude: He's even more annoying than the Narrator.Narrator: Someone called me?Ehlekdude: Yeah. Someone named Someone. Try finding him.Narrator: Someone? Where are you? *opens the door of the Author's bedroom* Aaargh!Me: What?Narrator: There's a Scorpio in your bedroom!Me (locking the door): Who cares? I'll sleep in the living-room.Ehlekdude: Is this door strong enough?Me: Of course.As soon as I said this, the Scorpio destroys the door and enters the living-room.Rocka: Fear the golden lion without lion mask!Narrator: And what do we do now?Me: Well, good luck. I and Ehlekdude have to find Leafix.We go out and leave Rocka and the Narrator with the hungry Scorpio.Word count: 808

My latest MOC is the Redrone (red drone), a small, purple-eyed, flying Mecha. I tried to make something small and intricate. This is the "Number Two" MOC of 2012 mentioned in KK's topic.BackHere you can see that all the body/head/arms structure is built around a Waspix bone. And the jetpacks.Oh and yes it has a cartoonish face. It's even smiling.C&C welcomed.Matt

It's interesting to see how you gave Corroder a bird shape. The legs and wings are very bird-ish. Of course the head isn't, but who cares. Corroder was designed as a clawed, humanoid rhino. This MOC would need some lime armor plate on the chest though. Overall, I'd rate it 9/10.

@PooZy: I also hate this rubber band. But without it, Krika's back would "open" all the time. Glad you like Waspil.@Ehlekdude: Thank you! You know, Waspix looked better than Bitil as a set.@Akuna: Agreed. I said Bitix's legs were a fail. Especially the upper legs. Thanks anyway!

Surge is pretty great. It looks like a Breakout Surge with a 2.0 color scheme, which is cool. Is that me or his core is yellow?I like Bulk's silverness and upper chest area, however the neck is a bit long.

Thanks guys. I know, Waspil/Bitix (or whatever I call him)'s legs need some work... It's what happens when you work with a limited number of parts. You're running out of pieces, and only half of the MOC is good. I might revamp this guy.@Eragon: Krika's new head was an experiment, yes it will never be as cool as the original mask, but I already used it, so...

As the title says, I played with two Mistikuta : Krika and Bitil.First experiment was a Bitil/Waspix combiner. I had to use extra pins/axles/ball joints because Bitil is sadly lacking of those :/Also, this is the "Number One" MOC of 2012 I mentioned in Kanokuaza's topic.Click here for gallery:Now, Krika.I got a second (and second-hand) Krika. I was lazy to build him again. So I made a custom version using my two Kanohi Crast as front blades, and adding a Rahkshi spike. This is my Fourth MOC of 2012.Nynrah blaster/upper arm connectionOther side viewEnjoy!

Oh, thanks.Chapter 6: Teridax is one of my favorite characters... The whole chapter was funny, here are some of the best quotes:

Gorast: We’ll die.Teridax: If all those times others told me I’d die were true, I’d be dead 79404 times now.

Teridax: Teridax rule #17: Shoot first, think second.

Krika: Me Krika, make pancakes for others but eat them myself.

And yay Mister Purple is back.Chapter 7: Yay, Breakout sets are here! Evo is so capricious... Chapter 8: One of the best chapters. Oh lol the Toxic Reapa part was cool. Nuparu makes me laugh too.

Nitroblast: I want every single weapon you have, and I want it now!Antroz: Sir, that’s a lot of weapons. Are you sure you have enough money?Nitroblast: Don’t worry about that. Now deliver my order!Pohatu: We don’t have enough money to buy all the weapons.Nitroblast: You actually think I’m gonna pay?Pohatu: Uh, yeah. How else?Nitroblast: Not pay.

Yeah. http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.pngSplitface's halves is a good idea too. Oh, btw, is Brutaka a MOCer? That sounds cool.Overall, my favourite chapter. Until I read the 9th chapter, who knows....

Chapter 4: I'm kinda lost. Wasn't Jetbug supposed to be with Nitroblast, heading to Makuhero City? Oh wait... Wouldn't they be the real Jetbug and the real Drilldozer? Anyway, Stormer made me laugh.

Jetbug: They’re Heroes. We’re villains. Aren’t we supposed to be enemies?Drilldozer: Nah, that’s just according to the dumb storyline. Come on.

I always thought this, for years, about the toys themselves. Chapter 5: It was funny. Especially about Gresh and Kopaka. Wait, now I see Drilldozer and Jetbug are toys (right?), so the real Jetbug must be the one with Nitroblast. Help me...Anyway, I'm getting addicted to your comedy http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.png

That's brilliant. Add stubby little feet and it'll be perfect.

Well it was supposed to levitate, and thus be feetless. It's not a bad idea though. Thanks!

Well, it's simple, but I won't go on about that :-)Neat connections, didn't know it was even possible. Might want to lose the disk and integrate it into something else that's larger.

Thanks, I might think of this when I get bored of this dude.Flameman, Didonchu, Ehlekdude: Thank you too.

The second chapter was even funnier than the first one. Good idea to see minifigs. Good bye Julius...The third chapter was good too. I almost turned mad reading mad characters' sentences.

Breez: Who are you?Voice: Your greatest nightmare.Breez: My greatest nightmare is a 500 foot tall walking doughnut.Voice: Your second greatest nightmare, then.Breez: My second greatest nightmare is a 499 foot tall walking doughnut.

Oh lol.Overall good job. I'm glad to see Bionicle characters here and there, and the idea of narrating parallel adventures in that way is cool. Going to read and review other chapters soon.

Hey! I'm now going to show my 2012 MOCs! Starting by a tablescrap (which means it's not a serious MOC) named Kanokuaza.Yes.A powered, living Kanoka launcher corrupted with Quaza spikes.I said this wasn't serious.I lost my head!Oh right. I guess it could never work as a launcher.Just ignore the "#3" on the main picture. It's something about me, and nobody else. Well... I'm going to count how many MOCs I make this year. That's all.So in case you wonder where are the Numbers One and Two, I should show them soon.Enjoy.Matt

Bionicle Adventures Part 2Starts where the old comedy ended. You can find it in my sig.As always since I'm French, feel free to point out any grammar mistake. You'll help me improving my English ---------Chapter 6: Breakout---------Takanuva (still writing): "We've been captured by the Zglorff. We hope to get some help from Ehlekdude."Gali: Author, since you're the one who writes the story, make us escape from this darned planet!Me: It's not that simple... Just wait and see.Gali: Grrr.Pohatu: A good way to spend time is joking.Lewa: Oh yes! I know a good joke! What is orange, fat, and with a rock instead of a brain?Pohatu: hmm... me?Lewa: Yep.Pohatu: Knocks Lewa.Takanuva: "Suddenly, the ground is shaking."Onua: Oh right. Trust me, I'm an expert.Kopaka: Looks through the window.Pohatu: What's up buddy?Kopaka: It seems our cell is... flying through space.Everyone: :blink:A hatch opens in the ground and Ehlekdude goes out.Ehlekdude: Guess what?Onua: You saved us?Ehlekdude: Yeah.Onua: Tell me how!Ehlekdude: I glued all the guardians, and the Zglorff king on his throne. Then I repaired our spaceship and glued the cell on it. And there we go!Kopaka: You could help us in a lot of simpler ways.Tahu: Throws Kopaka through the window.Tahu: He's so annoying.Pohatu: Knocks Tahu.Gali: By the way, who is piloting the ship?Ehlekdude: It's me, let's see.Gali: But you're talking with us!Ehlekdude: Oh right!!!The ship crashes.Pohatu: Looks through the window.Gali: Where are we?Pohatu: We're floating on the sea around Mata Nui... but Mata Nui is destroyed now.Mata Nui (materializing in the cell): What are you saying? I'm alive, orange noob!Pohatu: I meant the island, keetorange noob. How did you manage to get here?Mata Nui: It doesn't matter. What's keetorange?Pohatu: Doesn't matter.Mata Nui: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifMe: So we're on the sea of Aqua Magna. We're so far from our city and my castle. But at least we're on Spherus Magna.Lewa: *wakes up* Looks like we're floating.Me: Yeah.Lewa: Which means my bath is ready! *jumps through the window and falls in the sea*Onua: I can't leave this fool alone in the sea. *jumps out*Gali: I am the expert of sea! *jumps out*Pohatu: Don't leave me with this keetorange noob! *jumps out*Mata Nui: I must kill him. *jumps out, again*Me: Well Ehlekdude, I guess we should jump out too.Ehlekdude: Agreed. *we jump out*Takanuva: "jumps out"Now that everyone is swimming in the sea...Pohatu: Help! I can't swim!Mata Nui: Wow I don't need to kill him myself.Pohatu: curses Mata Nui and drowns.Takanuva: "We already lost two Toa."Lewa: And I'll soon be the third! A tentacle grabbed me!Gali: fires Nynrah stuff underwater.Onua: Show your face if you're a man, monster!Kalmah: Who called me a monster?Me: You still have tentacles?Kalmah: Yep. Tentacles are cool. Is this guy Ehlek?Ehlekdude: No I'm Ehlekdude.Kalmah: But you're an ugly green monster like Ehlek.Ehlekdude: And you're a silly.Gali: Let's swim, the coast is near!Three hours later...Takanuva: "We finally reached the coast."Lewa: How can you swim and write at the same time?Takanuva: Dunno.Gali: Oh my god!Mata Nui: The only god here is me.Lewa: What's happening, Gali?Gali: We forgot Tahu!Lewa: Who cares? He's annoying, like Kopaka.Gali: slaps Lewa.Onua: I found a truck! Let's go to our city!Gali: Where have you found it?Onua: I stole it.Lewa: Look! A police car!Onua: Let's go!Everyone jumps in the truck and they go away, followed by the policeman.Gali: I'm not sure this is a good idea to have Onua as driver.Onua: I'm an expert.Gali: Let me drive!Onua: No!Gali: Yes!Onua: I said no!The truck misses a turn and falls in a pit.Everyone: AAAAAAAAAH!!!Me: Don't worry, we'll survive.Gali: Why?Me: 'Cause I'm the Author. -_-Using my awesome powers (again), wings appear on the truck's sides.Gali: What about the policeman?Me: Oh, I guess he crashed.Takanuva: "The truck is flying towards our city."Many hours later...Tamaru: There's a winged truck in the sky!Matau: Where?Tamaru: I don't know.The truck crashes on the Author's castle.Me: Onua! You are the biggest noob driver of the world!Onua: Well at least we're back.The Toa and Mata Nui jump out and go to see friends and homes again, leaving the Author, Ehlekdude and Kalmah in the semi-destroyed castle. A surprise is waiting the Author.Me: Narrator! What are you doing in my living-room, watching TV and eating pop-corn?Narrator: I was bored.Me: Okay. Welcome back. Now start working!Ehlekdude: Oh no... Mister Pointless is back...Narrator: Goodbye everyone! Keep looking around for the next chapter, because it will feature a new Hero.Lake Eternity: What about me?Me: Don't worry.Word count: 801　

Your comedy is back. Yay. So will be mine soon.I've only read the first chapter at the moment. It's cool to see Jetbug as a toy "again". (Well, I think he never appeared before...) The dialogue between Surge and Nitroblast made me laugh. Nitroblast is so pessimistic...

Jetbug: Right. *Pulls odd device resembling an engine, and a seat out of a closet.Surge: Will this fly?Jetbug: Yes, but maybe not as far as Makuhero.Nitroblast: Oh,yay. Lost in space forever.

Oh lol.And it's funny to see Jetbug called Bug.

Nitroblast: Any sign of life forms?Surge: No, but don't call for any, cause we don't want some alien monster ripping us apart.

This is funny, too.Overall, keep up the good work! I'll read and review the other chapters as soon as possible.

Thanks Ehlekdude! Glad you like my new Self-MOC, Von Nebula and Kopaka. I think the Brown Titan was supposed to be a titan version of my old self-MOC, who had spikes. I know about the Steltian. It's one of the "older experiments" I mentioned. Ah, this "Experiments" folder is full of randomness and doesn't care about timeline.Oh, I forgot. The Gunmetal Drone's centre piece. It's a big wheel from some Castle set. I've heard it can be found in dark grey in Jetrax T6, which would have been better to suit the color scheme of this MOC.

Thanks Paleo! You're probably right on a lot of things here. Big Head was a quick build from a random idea and I thus didn't care about the back... I agree about the Elite War Limulis and Crocosaur too.The Xmas Creature was supposed to be some kind of aquatic larva and lives underwater. I let you imagine what could the adult form look like.Oh and yes I'm going to fix the link for Kopaka's gallery

Hello BZPers! How are you? I'm finally back. I'm glad to be back. Before anything, I'll show all the MOCs you guys didn't see: the Dowtime MOCs. Where to start?GolemOn a rock planet, there are stone creatures named Golems. Here is a warrior-class Golem. They're supposed to be one-eyed, with large shoulders. The bohrok eye on the weapon is a kind of "battery" to power the blade and allow the Golem firing energy from it. All Warrior Golems have a different eye and battery color.GalleryBionicle ShipAs title says. The back sail is sooo bad IMO. Gallery 'cause I'll never have the time to show every MOC's main photoCrocosaurA cross between a crocodile and a dinosaur.GalleryBig HeadIt's a funny thing. I used the Piraka Stronghold's giant Vezok mask. Gallery hereClockwork KopakaA birthday gift for KanjaRyu. Click on the picture for the gallery.Fangz Alternate ModelNothing special. LookCyberMothMade this some time before Christmas. Akamai RevampYes I know it still needs work... I should revamp it again. LookExo-Toa of FireThe Great Beings gave a consciousness and an elemental power to an Exo Toa armor. It is still completely mechanical. Made this after getting Raw-Jaw for my (14th) birthday.War Limulis

This is inspired from the Horseshoe Crab. If ya dont know what this is, check wikipedia. This Rahi lived in the sea around Daxia for millenias.

Gallery Oh and there's an EliteWarLimulis in this gallery.

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