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Lionel Trains.

Yeah, that pretty much covers it.One thing I'm unsure of- since Artahka created the collectible Nuva masks, does that imply that a whole lot of random basic Great Kanohi were destined to become Nuva masks?Also, hmm... Do I smell a Vahi Nuva somewhere in the works?

Whaaat?TPBM runs long-distance.

Nobody notices any other aspect of anything and ironic chaos ensues in which you are slain by an angry mob of positivity worshippers.I wish I could break 20 minutes in the 10K...

/ insert french revolution pun here

And hers are green.

If it hasn't occurred to you yet, I'm not much of a parts purist. If I see a color I don't like, or need something custom, I paint it, or make a new part. It's just kind of the way I work.

Wow, thanks, Aderia! I have actually written more Bionice-related stuff on another site, but that wasn't really serious writing, just for fun. So in a sense, this was my first purposeful piece, if that makes any sense. I do plan on making Adray's story into a short epic (that's so contradictory...) with this story as a sort of epilogue. In fact I already have quite a bit (almost 2000 words or so) done; I'd say it's going pretty well. And yes, I do have a Skype, but I may not have time to do writeoffs and such that you guys have; I'll have to take a look, though. Thanks.

Irresponsible driving.(Stop trying to make me say roadkill again! )

Nah, they were canceled. Much like Brock's presence in the TV show.

Caution signs.

For some reason, it makes me think of Thunderbolt...

The cloud disperses immediately after you attempt to lay on it.I wish I didn't get random annoying advertisements on these pages...

And back to roadkill...

Light meeting dark... light too bright or lack thereof can make migraines more painful, despite that fact that I'm 14.

Pichu -> _____ -> Raichu

Wipe that interesting look off your interesting face.

Remember the episode where they went into a forest full of Pikachu?

Stolen by Homer Simpson.I wish that the economy was in a better state.

Happy birthday. Feel mighty. "Is it a boy? Is it a girl?""No. Happy birthday, it's a gundam."

Or saying that Thomas Edison should have been able to emit light, since his invention could.

The pugs are all rabid!I wish me school email account wasn't broken.

And where's your right eye?

This is a very mysterious and intriguing story, I'm very excited to hear the prequel you mentioned. As for the actual writing, you did a very good job of introducing several characters right away, (which I've found is very hard to do, and when done incorrectly, it results in people getting characters mixed up), you gave just enough explanation to each character, without going so in depth that it took up almost the entire story like most people do. Great job.

Although I always pictured Marendar to be much larger, I think this is a great representation, if not to scale with actual Toa and such. Very robotic while still having some sort of animalistic predatory killer edge to it, which is an interesting combination of traits.