Arzaki

That just makes me think being dead is something he's used to. Maybe all this stuff going down on Okoto has happened before. :v "Oh, hey there. Yeah, I was just dead. I'm used to it. Are you the new test subj- ahem. Are you the Toa?"

I use the Kanohi Komau. Got 'im.

I find it amusing how he greets them as if they were friends who came over for a surprise visit, despite them reviving him after he had been dead for hundreds of years.

I didn't think it looked good at first, but after MOCing a Toa of Plasma, the color scheme grew on me. Some white, orange, and trans orange actually look fairly decent.

But can you defend from double posts being merged? Got 'im.

The air pressure caused the liquid nitrogen to be liquid despite not being extremely cold and instead room temperature. Science'd 'im.

Watch out for my body rolls. Got 'im.

I am become death, destroyer of worlds. Hear me roar! Got 'im.

I would say that Meso and Eljay both like Scorpio, but then wind would get mad at me. Oh wait.

I am Airman. You can not defeat Airman. Got 'im.

I turn Tumblr against you. May a divine deity of your choice have mercy on your soul. got 'im

It walks alone on this empty street on the boulevard of blood, tortured souls, and broken dreams, where the city sleeps and it's the only one and it walks alone.

This is the topic for you to post your criticism of the epic written by myself and Ghidora131, Deignition. If you want a summary, just click that link and there's one right at the top of the post. Please do be as brutally honest as you want, but don't go too far.

So, this is a fanfic based on a (rather flawed) theory I made a couple weeks ago, about the Toa Inika being dead and "revived" using the souls of other dead beings from the Red Star. Soon after posting the theory, a fellow BZP member, Ghidora131, said that it would make a good fanfic. So, I PMed him and we started planning. What we came up with makes one of the darkest years of Bionicle even darker, and the ending will leave you questioning your very existence. We've changed events prior to 2006 as well, such as the deaths of characters that did not die in canon. So, without further rambling, here's what you came for. Discussion Topic Deignition A fan-made story written by BZP members Arzaki and Ghidora131. Okay yeah, so this chapter was absolutely god-awful and I hate myself for writing. I know that literally no one is ever going to see this, but just in case someone ever does, they'll know just how absolutely terrible this is and they don't have to waste their time reading it. Trust me, it's terrible. Ghidora and I might continue back on this soon. Maybe. Hopefully I put more effort into the chapters that I write, because wow, this one was so terrible. I really should just nuke this epic. Just clean it off the face of the earth. Chapter 1 A Bit of Exposition Takanuva was lost in thought as he led the Matoran to their destination. Of course, not much thought really remained in his mind. He had lost some of his sanity during his adventures around Mata Nui. He had seen almost half of Po-Koro wiped out by the plague, and witnessed the destruction of Ga-Koro firsthand. The main causes of his slight insanity were watching Jaller die and himself going through the experience of being fused with another being. Despite being a bit off his rocker, Takanuva was still relatively competent, and knew that he needed to the protect the six Matoran he was escorting. Jaller, the leader of this group, picked the bravest Matoran he knew for this mission. These five brave Matoran were Kongu, Hahli, Nuparu, Hewkii, and Matoro. Hewkii and Hahli weren’t at the peak of their strength, but they were still bold. Hewkii was severely weakened and slightly senile due to contracting the plague of Po-Koro and witnessing most of this closest and life-long friends drop dead in front of him. Despite overcoming the sickness, his body never really got over its effects, and he still feels terrible for being too weak to help Ga-Koro during the Bohrok invasion. He blames himself for the destruction of the village and for the extreme injuries Maku took during it. Hahli, too, was scarred by the destruction of Ga-Koro. Other than being injured herself, she saw Maku get nearly killed by debris. Due to the terrible things that happened in her life, she lost faith in Mata Nui, and blames him for all that has happened. When she heard that he was dying, she was almost glad. However, she could not refuse Jaller’s invitation to this mission. He was one of the few friends she had left. After a while of walking, the group of seven came across a tunnel, which absorbed all waves of light and sound. The group tied their hands to each other to prevent getting lost, and made their way through the tunnel with little commotion. Matoro, however, thought he felt another being with him, and helped this being escape the tunnel with him. He exited last, and when he looked back into the tunnel after making sure everyone else was there, he saw no one. It was at this point that Matoro started to that he might have been going insane, or maybe he was hallucinating due to the lack of senses. After a few more minutes of travelling, the group came across an old gateway, made of some sort of gray stone. On the other side was a lonely looking Matoran, who ran away upon seeing the group. Everyone chased after him, but a barrier of some strange substance materialized in front of Takanuva just as he was about to go through the gate. He and the Matoran were separated, and it didn’t take rocket science to figure that one out. After attempting to bid farewell through some sort of wall, Takanuva reluctantly headed back through the tunnel to his home of Metru Nui. The rest of the group resumed their chase. The startled Matoran led them to a land known as Karzahni. The land where dust rises, fire is cold, and ice burns. Dangerous Rahi ran rampant, and all around were strange looking Matoran who appeared absolutely miserable and lonely. Soon after they entered, they were approaching by the ruler of this land, also named Karzahni, who captured them and took their masks, replacing them with strange new ones. He forced them to work in the furnaces and forges of the land, but kept Hahli so that she could tell him of the outside world. Hours of work and hard labor led to exhaustion for the other five Matoran, and it was a relief when an obviously senile Matoran approached them. He told them to follow him and gather any friends they had. While Kongu went looking for Hahli, the other four followed the clearly insane Matoran to a room that had sort of strange cannon-esque devices overlooking an ocean. The odd Matoran told the other four to enter the canisters mounted on the walls, so that he could bust them out of there. Before they could manage to enter the canisters, Kongu and Hahli sprinted into the room, very out of breath. Seconds later, the thundering footsteps of Karzahni could be heard before the entire wall came down in an explosion of flame and stone. One stone hit Hewkii directly in the head, knocking him out cold. Oh, the irony. As Karzahni stepped over the small remaining part of the wall, his foot landed directly on Kongu, crushing and killing him. He switched his attention to Hahli, the closest living Matoran, and struck her with his flaming chains. She died soon after due to impact. Laughing maniacally, Karzahni continued to whip his chains throughout the room, eventually killing every Matoran in there. He stuffed the dead bodies in the canisters to dispose of them, and launched them using the cannons in the room. He watched as they flew through the air, toward the area known as Voya Nui. He used his Kanohi Olisi, the Great Mask of Alternate Futures, to see what might happen to the canisters. What he saw surprised him greatly. He saw the canisters washing ashore Voya Nui, with bodies larger than those he placed in them emerging from the cylindrical vehicles. They were cackling with crimson colored electricity, the likes he had never seen before. Weapons had somehow materialized with them, and the six beings crossed said weapons above them. A magnificent beam of light shot forth from the point where the tools crossed, straight into the air, parting the clouds as it pierced them. The storm was coming, and it wouldn't stop for anything.

I like the Voyatoran because they match their story perfectly. They're a ragtag group of rebels who have been disassembled and "repaired" by some insane guy, and their appearance reflects that. Of course, I didn't like the lack of posing and eyes, and I would've liked some new masks and weapons, but I still think they resemble their backgrounds quite well.

Not exactly... OM NOM NOM brainstalk, and his victims are left with no eye color. There is no eye color, only Zuul.

What do you call a fight between a Toa of Iron and a Toa of Gravity? Heavy metal.

I mean, while you have a point, an instructional video alone isn't evidence of a launcher being hard to use. The new Airjitzu spinners in Ninjago have instructional videos as well, despite being ridiculously easy to launch. The main difference is that those videos serve largely to give you an idea of the variety of ways they can be used. Conversely, there was really only one way to use squid launchers, which ranged from mildly effective to totally ineffective. But squid launchers were (I believe) the first thing they made an instructional video for. Maybe it started some sort of trend (though I personally don't remember any other BIONICLE launchers after that getting one). Other than the squid launcher, the launchers were pretty simple to use, usually just pushing, pulling, or squeezing something. Pardon if I'm wrong, but weren't the Cordak Blasters technically air-powered too? I remember that the missiles sometimes wouldn't come out. Yeah, they were. I didn't really like the Cordaks either.

I thought people were more mad over how Samus was portrayed in Other M rather than the storyline.

I burninate all the peasants. Got 'im.

Ghidora and I are planning a fanfic based on the 2006 and 2007 years in which this theory applies, essentially making the two darkest years even darker. Trust me, there will be lots of death.

Can I just say. This joke is perfect with my new avatar.