Peter Johnson

THATS MR. TOA WITH A LAZER HARPOON TO YOU Why is your avatar closing his eyes?

OK

Lets not do that. We have enough heroes

It's not good to have revenge! Revenge is not the answer!

Great. There is no cure. OH NO! Xerneas is allergic to Jallers qwerty keyboard! He died on the spot! *sniff* he was so young..

Ehhh...Batman will have to go because of his allergies! he is DEATHLY allergic!

That explains it. I can't really get into bionicle because I am new to it, so I like HF more

Ah, but allergies can and he is allergic to zebras!

Yo, And zebras! If we can get Mr. Zebra to kick him!

Which one do you like better? My opinion is Hero Factory

We should get a point to this. Wait! I spoke too soon! Lord Voldemort is on the loose!

ummm....fine

Chapter 3 Dimension Number Two Things were really starting to creep me out. First, the...First...The man. Wait, I'm starting to remember something...The man...The long hair...The man who got me here! “Excuse me, do you know anything about a person with long hai-” He wouldn't even let me finish. “Do NOT speak of him!” said the old man. “He's the one that made us- all of us- waste our entire lives in the desert!” He had kind-of long white hair and a long, white beard. He walked with a cane, and- How did he live so long in the desert? He looked well fed. Although he had bad clothes. He wore it so long it looked like it just fell apart. It was scratched up. And his pants too... “QUICKLY! EVERYBODY TO THE BOX!” he screamed inside. Everybody came rushing out. There were a lot of people. They ran out to the corner where there was a big cardboard refrigerator box. That said, 'Please help the poor.' I followed them when they all tried to go in. They had a little tin can I suppose for money. “Who's poor?” I asked. “Just look.” Said the old man. I turned around to look out the box and...Everything was changing one by one. Everything except for the building and the box. Now it looked like New York with people walking around everywhere. “Woah.” I said. “Welcome, to Dimension Number 2.”

So please change it please please please

Your picture is weird XD change it XD

Please get more people to play this game besides me and you

No, we did get rid of the cow. Mr. Zebra killed it

Lewa, sadly had another...flying...cow...killing...thing...to do!

Jaller is awesome though! We cant give him up D: (I didnt know what else to say XD)

Chapter 2 In the desert After Prologue: I woke up, again. This time the pain wasn't that bad. I could get up, as least. I stood up slowly, still kind of limping. I finally opened my eyes. Oh great, I thought. I'm in a desert. It was a desert alright. Sand down for miles. No water or nothing. I guess I'm just gonna starve to death. Then, just when I'd thought all hope was lost, I heard somebody say, “Hey look! It's another one. Lets go get him before he goes mad.” I turned around, to see an old man walking in a cane, walking towards me. “Come on. Over here.” He grabbed my arm. “The place is about to change.” That made me curious. I don't know what he meant by 'The place is about to change...' He pulled me away to- wow...When I saw where he was taking me I just jaw-dropped. A HUGE blue building. It looked like a modern day New York skyscraper. Black, with a LOT of windows. And very high. He pulled me in through the front door. I guess Ill have to describe this guy eventually. He had a white beard, and long hair- Long hair. Wait...My brain is starting to hurt. I think...I might be remembering something else...- Then I lost my concentration by the man screaming “Hey everybody get out its time to go!” “Go where?” I said with a major headache. “To the refrigerator box! Listen, I'll explain everything later.”

How about this: SUPER MARIO, SONIC THE HEDGEHOG, and THE DOCTOR (doctor who), COME IN! JALLER AND HIS QWERTY KEYBOARD, BATMAN, CRAIG, KOPAKA, LEWA, and MATORO ARE STILL HERE! Oh, and don't forget Mr. Zebra. Or Aslan

FOR NARNIA! XD

I know. I'm making an updated version: Not so cluttered

Dang. What should it be about?

Sorry Hero Factory yea