Peter Johnson

Because it's in the rules

Your still the same avatar Mr. Pound cake

#1 Yea sometimes I just accidentally switch from first to third person #2 Typo Ill change that now

POSTING CHAPTER 2!

I think I'll relax, maybe take a nap while I wait for my six hour download XD

XD Zebra- Mr. Zebra, sorry, Finally came, to save us. He pounded his hoofs on the cow and killed him END OF STORY. Next start another story with a

Chapter 1 The man with pesky hair 5 years before Prologue: I woke up in my bedroom. Normal day, normal job, normal everything. I groaned. I sat up in my bed, and turned my head to look at the alarm clock. 6:03. Again, I groaned and got up slowly out of my bed. I got dressed in my work suit and tie. I walked down the stairs to go get some morning coffee. I lazily walked down the stairs. Just when I hit the third-to-last step...I heard a strange noise. Kind of like a hiss and a scream put together. Then I heard, “Coommmmeeee.....Commmeeeeeee....Toooooo.....Meeeeeeeeee......Cooommmeee....” Intruder! I thought. I had been prepared if an intruder had ever come one of these days. I slowly stepped back in my room, reached under my bed and grabbed the 'Emergency Handgun.' In case this guy tried to harm me. I slowly and quietly walked down the stairs. When I got all the way down I looked around. Something told me this was worse than an intruder. I saw nothing. When I was about to go back up, I heard it again. This time I heard it coming from under the cupboard! I ran to under the cupboard and opened the door. For half a split second I got to see a man. Not really a man I guess...He had hair that was so long it went down to the floor. He was about five feet tall? And he had a completely black face with no mouth or nose or ears. All he had was eyes. And they were about as deep a tone of red as you can get. Oh, and they glowed, the eyes. Except for the pupils. They didn't glow. Only the iris which was as I said dark red. He wore a black coat which covered his entire lower body, and dragged on the floor a little still. In the split second that I opened the door he punched his hands in front of me, but didn’t hit me. While his hands shot towards me, so did his hair. His long green hair. Except the hair can reach me. The weird thing was...The hair kept growing around me until I couldn't breathe any more. So basically somebody wrapped me in their hair. Then he let me go. The hair went back to its original place. He put his hands at his side. And...I wasn't there anymore. If you like, say in discussion topic, I love feedback!

I wrote two chapters in fifteen minutes >.< guess Ill slow it down a bit

nope Mr. Pound cake

You calling my dude lame? No I'm totally fine with that it is a random bunch of colors XD

Ah ok thanks When I reply all it does is edits it in...How do you get the gap in there between the prologue and the chapter 1?

Im getting tired of describing your avatar

To tartarus it shall go, til a million years!

POSTING CHAPTER 1!

Good idea... the chapters are gonna be short. Not too short, like about two paragraphs long

Its all gonna be in one post Ill comment to add new chapters

Title explains it all. Discuss my new epic Peter: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10742

Its a lazer harpoon, Mr. Pound cake XD

If you like my epic, then say so BY THE DISCUSSION TOPIC. DO NOT COMMENT ON THIS TOPIC or it will be deleted by...somebody. Let me start it off by a quick prologue. Prologue I woke with a start. My mouth felt like a hornet laid a nest in it. Finally, I gained the strength to just open my eyes. I made a mistake by trying to speak. It, of course, came out as gibberish. Plus the amount of pain in my mouth increased by about a million. I groaned. I tried getting up, but I could barely lift my hands. It took me a while...But I finally got to my elbows. Then everything just went blurry and dark...And then I fainted. Who am I? I wish I knew...I can't remember anything...like my mind has been wiped. It's like trying to remember a dream you had a couple days ago. It's very faint. Wait...I think I can finally...Yes! My name... I think...My name is Peter.

white unicorn. I wonder why they call unicorns the word unicorn. They certainly are not corn. But they do have one (uni) horn...Wait...Yours doesn't. Man what the heck happened to that poor unicorn!?