Heh, this was pretty awesome, man! The "Choose your own adventure" thing reminded me of some of the Goosebumps books from the 90s, lol
Just finished reading all of the chapters. I liked the Bink path a bit better, but both were pretty cool. The fact that each chapter is short really helps the flow of the story (probably wouldn't have read it all otherwise). There were a few typos here and there, but otherwise the writing was very good as well.
But you can definitely tell the early chapters were written in 2009... "We’ve worked up an ending with the Stars Sets" xP