Me likey. Better than the one I was writing.... >_> Write more. It looks VERY promising. (the title needs work, though)
Wierd.... My subconcious was unusually active today... somehow I remembered the class 'Nexus' which I planned to use for my own story....
Another wierd thing: The Phasmatis sounds like the Prometheus, which had the Asgard teleporter, which is often used to 'beam' people and objects from one place to another. Are you sure you didn't get inspiration from Stargate?
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