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Category: 2nd chance MOC Name: Rembathsis Topic:Here Moral Type:Hero Species Type: (I'll leave that to your discretion) Bio: Rembathsis has boisterous and friendly personality (think Alex Louis Armstrong from FMA). He is incredibly strong, exceeding both Krekka and Makuta in raw power. He can control water in all states of matter and influence the behavior of Rahi. He does not believe in the use of conventional weapons such as swords and spears however in times of extreme danger he will take up his orange shield.

That's debatable. There are two schools of thought...

I could probably whip something up for it...

Ooooo... Black Fantasy? I can't wait to see the finished product!

"There's no point in voting for myself so, here are the members I've selected: JP54 Distorted 5555 Good luck to everyone.

@ Prophet: Your candle MOC is a nice concept creation and you've utilized all those hip joints very well. I think it would be better representation of candle though, if you had made the body of the candle white, and tried to somehow show it in the process of melting. Perhaps more piece variation would help achieve that goal. Shroudspawn, is very imposing MOC, the borok head really suits it nicely. However, the placement of the silver slizer foot and other piece (I have no idea what the term for it is) obstructs the head. I recommend removing the slizer foot or at least the other part and moving the head forward. The color distribution is very well done. The shoulders look kind of blocky and I don’t like the upper arms design. @ Primus: Thanks for the clarification. I chose the gears behind HT's head because I wanted them for their yellow/orange coloring, and I felt that they fit my rendering of HT. They can easily be changed though. I guess it really more matter of opinion on which gear is more aesthetically pleasing. Yeah I don't really like the blockiness of the torso my self. That’s why I game him a cape to cover up his back. Do you have any suggestions for building fusion torsos? Torsos are the parts of MOCs I find most difficult to construct. I can never get them in quite the right shape. My favorite part of Robocop is his torso. You integrated the cordak blaster seamlessly and it adds a lot to his butt kicking demeanor. Nice touch with the barraki eyes as "police lights". What's the deal with the "horn" on the back of his head? It seems unnecessary and doesn't add anything to the MOC, I recommend removing it. His legs and arms seem short compared to such a large torso; perhaps you could give them an upgrade?

Hapori Tohu This was my BBC44 entry and my first successful fusion MOC. It got a mediocre amount of posts and I would've liked a little bit more feed back. Note: I upgraded his torso and reduced its fragility, but it doesn't look physically different so I didn't bother taking new pics. I have some more but I'll add them later. If I want to review another person's MOC do I have to edit my post and write it here? Or do I create a new post?

You're going to college next year ? The Australian school system must be very different from the Canadian one...