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  1. Grey Snow
    Somehow I'm out of the many parts I use in MOCing already after only building these for my epic, Kingdoms of Nightmare:
     
    Toa Mazeka
    Toa Vultraz
    Toa Defilak
    Toa Garan
    Toa Balta
    Toa Dezalk
     
    (Balta and Dezalk aren't great, I shouldn't have made two Toa of Fire, Dezalk I had to use too much black on (I picture him as red and black armored))
     
    And I still have to build these:
     
    Toa Velika (I don't have much brown for MOCing, I have to get other sets out to do so)
    Toa Kazi (used to much white on Mazeka, I don't have much for him)
  5. Grey Snow

    I Need Suggestions

    By Grey Snow,

    I need suggestions for serials I'm putting into my blog, one will be normal, one a blog type and one a podcast type, so I just need sugestions for what to write them on. My ideas as of yet:
     
    One involving Lesovikk's team (I think I'll do this one for sure, a podcast)
    One involving Nidhiki and Krekka's early missions (blog maybe)
     
    And that's all I have for ideas. I need some, so please give me any you have that I could do.
  7. Grey Snow
    I changed my name to _The Drifter_ (Portal reference, a character), my avatar is him, my personal photo will be when I can get another picture of him, I need one of his quotes soon, time to go re-watch episodes, for my sig, and now my blog has been redone with a Portal theme.
     
    I am still Koji though.
  8. Grey Snow

    I Need A Name

    By Grey Snow,

    Ok, look at my previous entry, I need a name for that epic.
     
    I'm thinking:
     
    Shadow Kingdoms
     
    Kingdoms of Shadow
     
    Kingdoms of Nightmare
     
    Rise of the Shadow Nuva
     
    Kingdom of the Shadow Nuva
     
    Anyone have any other ideas? Or which do you like the best?
  9. Grey Snow

    Who Would Join?

    By Grey Snow,

    My next RPG, Kex just has to get back to me, or Toaraga, whoever gets it first. Kex has replied already, but needed an answer on something else first, but here:
     
    Plot: You are a part of an elite police unit in the year 2010. The story is set in a new California city. As a member of this unit of presumably seven(depends on number of members I get), you will have to take a set amount of tools, weapons, equipment, etc. and go out to stop situations like hostages and roberies.
    During missions each member of the team will be given a set amount of tools which include weapons, ammo, bombs, handcuffs, and more along with a map or maps of the facilitiy or area. You will have a set amount of objectives sometimes, like in a hostage situation, some may have to keep the area clear of civilians while one or two get set up to snipe the criminal.
    You will have to do everything within police guidelines. Doing things like unprovoked killing will result in either jail time, thrown off the force, etc.
    When you get the call, "Code: SCORPIO", you are allowed to use any force necessary to take out your target, other than killing innocents or causing mass property damage.
     
    Rules:
    *All standard BZP rules apply
    *No god-modding
    *One character only
    *Detail must be used because of the limited equipment
    *You must play this out as a real situation, like taking into account the factors of the building, what the enemy may do in the various situations, etc.
    *It will not be scheduled, so players are free to make calls on what the target(s) do, like kill hostages, etc., but it must be approved by me or any co-leaders I get depending on what it is exactly, like as above, killing a hostage
    *Proper grammer is needed, no short posts due to factors like no detail
    *All standard RPG rules I may have missed apply.
     
    Character form:
    Name:
    Age:
    Image:
    Bio:
    Personality:
    Anything else: (married, children, etc.)
     
     
    Sound good?
  10. Grey Snow
    You can use this page to suggest new enemies if you want, and I will also use it to post enemies that will be faced.
     
    The main enemy:
     
    Dark Ninja:
     

     
    Spider Spirit:
     

     
    Vulture Spirit:
     

     
    Ram Spirit:
     

     
    (the front one)
     
    Squid Spirit:
     

     
    Crow Spirit:
     

     
    Crustation Spirit:
     

     
    Fish Spirit:
     

     
    Bee Spirit:
     

     
     
    And that's it for now.
  11. Grey Snow

    New Epic Idea

    By Grey Snow,

    Let me know what you think of this.
     
    Years after the end of the Karda-Nui saga, the Toa Nuva were driven into insanity by Teridax who's plan had failed. In the process of said insanity, Mata-Nui was not awakened. Shortly after, Teridax reached out before dying and fixed the Nuva's minds, but corrupted them as well. Now, each rules as a king (or queen in Gali's case). Each rules their own kingdom, forged in their elements, destroying whole islands to forge their kingdoms. Metru-Nui remains, not even the Shadow Nuva foolish enough to dare try to take it in case it is destroyed.
     
    Each of the Toa has a following, such as Tahu, almost all Ta-Matoran and fire Toa and Turaga follow him (though beings like Skakdi of fire don't and were wiped out by Tahu's army, same with the other elements respectively). Only rebels who can see through their new actions dare stand against them. Takanuva, freed from his light drain by a Klakk is now a wanderer. He did take something away from his freement however, he has a black and white sense of justice and stands against the Nuva. The Order was wiped out in battle with the Brotherhood and then blindsided by the Dark Hunters, resulting in the three organizations being destroyed, only members (except the Makuta, servants) remain, in very few numbers.
     
    The Shadowed One, Brutaka, Helryx, Krakua and few more notable beings exist as rebels in Metru-Nui, where they know the Toa's armies won't dare strike. However, Helryx doesn't believe them unreedemable and went to see Gali. Gali was enraged and beyond talking, attacked Helryx. Helryx was slaughtered but she got a message back to Krakua before she was killed. The message had something along the lines of "They are too strong in their realms, our powers are below theirs if we fight them in their kingdoms", an ominous message. Krakua and others with him must now find a way to stop the armies from conquering more lands, by joining with the surviving members of the other tribes, like Magnetism, Iron, Plasma, etc. who the Toa slaughtered most of early on. But there's always threats like Takanuva who has grown in power tremendously, able to use the Av and Kra (Shadow Matoran) powers from Karda-Nui almost on command. The Nuva however, are waiting to claim final victory and rule Metru-Nui without a massive invasion force or destroying it in the process.
     
    How's that sound? I'm personally just bored and nearly out of stuff to write.
  12. Grey Snow

    Mistika Tommorow

    By Grey Snow,

    Finally, tommorow at my cabin (gone till Sunday, perhaps limited acess Friday-Sunday, not much), couldn't find them last week at Target, but our friends in La Crosse found them at Walmart, Toys R' Us didn't have them there, suprisingly, so tommorow I get the canisters and Vultraz. They couldn't find Taka or Mazeka unfortunatly, but found Rockoh, though I don't want the vehicles and aren't getting it.
  14. Grey Snow

    Mata Nui?

    By Grey Snow,

    I was on Bionicle.com and finally got the arrow to work so I could look at images like Axalara flying, and the last one made me think.
     
    Here
     
    Now, look in the back, doesn't that look like something large rising? I'm thinking that's Mata Nui rising. What do you think?
  15. Grey Snow

    Blog Overhaul

    By Grey Snow,

    My blog will soon be going over a full overhaul. Feel free to guess until I have it ready, guess on the theme. I can only do this theme if I can get images though, which seems kind of doubtful at the moment unless I use some untraditional methods...
  16. Grey Snow
    LOTFB: Legacies of the Final Battle, the 08 epic I'm doing, is nearly done. I don't expect the rest of you to be near this point yet, I have a lot of time to write on weekends, no internet, well, little, at my cabin. So I've had a lot of work time. 21 chapters so far, working on 21, I'm in the end of it, the final battle in the Swamp, the Order's next move, and the Dark Hunter/Toa/Order-Toa mission. Though I can't finish until BL11 is out and I've read it so I know how to end it. This is getting fun to write, I've brought back Lost War characters like Oborn and Sarn for the Order's mission, included the FoF in it, well not the whole thing, just the end.
     
    Ok, major spoilers:
     
    Swamp:
     

    » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Normal combat, etc., Ahkmouh is leeched and becomes a Toa of Shadow and Stone and fights Taka. 
    Order Mission:
     

    » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Suicide charge, most of the members attacking Destral in one move, including the Barraki, Piraka, Karzahni and Miserix with Ehlek's species as an army. 
    DH/Toa/Order-Toa Mission:
     

    » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Defend Metru Nui with the Hagah, Mahri, Order Leader, Krakua, another Toa (you'll see who when you read), Lariska, Falk and Doom (DH from Lost War), TSO, Voporak, TSO's bodyguard (can't think of how to spell the name), Master (another DH I created) and more defending the city from the Makuta who attack with Visorak, Rahkshi, etc. in one final defense. 
     
    And with some of the casualties I think some of you will be mad at who I've killed off.
  17. Grey Snow
    Ok, not an update or asking, but a conference more or less. I know most of you if not all of you, myself included, have forgotten this, so I have some questions, just post your answers writers.
     
    1. How far are you?
    2. What year(s) are you doing?
    3. What part of the year are you at?
    4. How much more do you need to do (half a year, more, less, etc.)?
    5. How much unique story (a lot, not much, etc.)?
     
    And that should be it.
     
    1. Nearly half way done with summer story
    2. 08, possibly 07 later
    3. Summer
    4. About half the year, a bit less
    5. A lot, unlikely that I'll do serials in this, but I have recruiting for the war, extra battles in Karda-Nui, not just with Toa and Makuta, I have the Bom/OoMN war later, and more
     
    There's my evaluation, based on how far most of you should be by this point, let's go with a release of these by years end at the latest.
  18. Grey Snow

    Victory!

    By Grey Snow,

    The Official Super Smash Bros. Topic has been closed, a victory I say, I got my information before the arguments caused by Rho got it closed, and its due to Rho mainly it seems, I am pleased.
  19. Grey Snow
    Ok, Mythic Force, the characters will be at the end with images to help since I didn't want to take time going into more detail with description or anything, and I'm bad at starting epics, so it may not be good, and finally, fighting is hard to write since they flip around and stuff like that so much, but anyway, here it is.
     
    Chapter 1: Mythic Destiny Pt. 1
     
    One year ago:
     
     
    “We found something Bede.”
     
    A young man, twenty four years old walked over to the pit. He was quite handsome, he had short black hair and was well muscled.
     
    “Yeah?” He called down, “What did you find?”
     
    “Come down and have a look!” His companion called back up.
     
    Bede slid down into the pit and looked at what was found, some old tablets, “Exactly what we were looking for!” Bede exclaimed and looked at them, reading the ancient Greek dialect.
     
    “What do they say?” His companion asked.
     
    “The first speaks of Medusa; the second speaks of the Gods.” Bede replied and looked at the bottom, “I can’t read this.”
     
    “Too old for even you eh?” His companion asked.
     
    “Too worn away.” Bede replied.
     
    He looked to his companion and saw something, he was stone.
     
    “What the hel#?” He demanded, dropping the tablets.
     
    A clawed hand took the tablets up, “Don’t do that!” The woman’s voice snapped.
     
    He looked and saw the claw had become human and before him was a woman, looking around twenty with jet black hair down a few feet and wearing what appeared to be ancient Greek garb.
     
    “Who are you?” Bede demanded.
     
    “I am Medera, I am the living embodiment of the one you call Medusa.” She replied.
     
    “You turned him to stone…” Bede muttered, looking around, trying to get out of the pit.
     
    “Don’t worry, you have a much better destiny, you will live, and you will strive, master.” She told him.
     
    “Master?” He asked.
     
    She bowed, “You revived me and now you shall have the power of the tablets, the Mythic power. Now Master, shall I take you to the temple?”
     
    Bede was shaking slightly, but smiled grimly and stopped, standing rigidly, “Yes, take me there.”
     
    She stood up and lighting flashed around them, taking them both.
     
     
    Present day:
     
     
    Thomas looked at the papers at his desk. He was twenty one and had a bit of a receding hairline, black hair, and wore a suit.
     
    “No, I have to be wrong.” He muttered and looked through the papers for the fourth time.
     
    He slumped in his chair, “No. Those tablets were found by reports, but their current locations are unknown. This isn’t good, don’t tell me…”
     
    The door opened and he slid the papers under a large book at his side and turned, “Yes?”
     
    A man walked in and Thomas was relieved, “Find anything?”
     
    The man shook his head, “No, nothing, but I did find something that may or may not be involved.”
     
    “What is it?” Thomas asked.
     
    “There were two researchers looking for the tablets and neither returned from Greece, hel#, no one in Greece knows where they are, I was looking through Greek documents.”
     
    “Who are they?” Thomas asked him.
     
    “One is named Bede Damen, he never returned, the other is named Charles Korkrin, and the thing is, he was found, or a hoax possibly. They found him in stone, they still don’t know if it was him or a fake, but obviously, a fake.”
     
    Thomas nodded, “That will be all, thank you.”
     
    “You don’t actually think it was him?” The other asked.
     
    “I do, I know you don’t believe in this, but I do, I think this is all happening for real.”
     
    The other man left the room, leaving Thomas alone in the small office.
     
    Thomas opened a drawer at his side and pressed a small button in the back of it and stood up, “I think it’s time I acted on my suspicions.” He told himself and left the building.
     
     
    On the other side of town in a martial arts building stood two men, their arms up and at each other, their elbows bent, their hands flat and facing upward while their left arms were tied behind their backs.
     
    One had short blond hair and the other brown, both wore the same white uniforms of the school.
     
    “Begin!” Their instructor yelled.
     
    They forced their arms against each other, trying to get a grip, but couldn’t.
     
    The blond one pulled back and threw a punch at the other’s body.
     
    His opponent sidestepped and span around, and sent a chop at the head.
     
    The other dodged back and rocked forward again, throwing a punch at the torso.
     
    He was barely blocked by the others hand and saw his opponent jump and spin around, throwing a kick.
     
    The blond man ducked and sent his elbow up and landed a blow on the torso and their instructor called, “Enough.”
     
    They untied their arms and bowed to each other, “Grey, Ben, excellent work.” A new voice told them.
     
    They turned and saw Thomas walking in who bowed to the instructor.
     
    “Thomas, to what do I owe the honor?” The instructor asked.
     
    “I’d like to see your best students, and last you told me it was these two.” Thomas replied.
     
    “Yes, Grey and Ben are my best students.” The instructor replied.
     
    Thomas nodded, “Grey, Ben, could you come with me?” Thomas asked.
     
    They looked at each other and followed Thomas out, grabbing their clothes as they left.
     
     
    In Thomas’s office at his home he turned to the two, “Ok, now I need to tell you two everything, I’m sure you two can be a big help to me.”
     
    “Everything about what?” Grey asked.
     
    “About an incident in Greece last year. Two men went to Greece seeking ancient tablets, well, apparently they were found and one of them turned to stone, the other man left and has become corrupted, an enemy.” Thomas started.
     
    “What are you talking about?” Ben asked.
     
    “I fear the other man, Bede, has allied with the enemy that was incidentally unleashed and is planning to attack most likely.” Thomas finished.
     
    Grey laughed, “What the hel# are you talking about? What nonsense is this?”
     
    Thomas shook his head, “Believe me, we have proof. We need you Grey.” He looked to Ben, “What about you?”
     
    “It depends on what you really want.” Ben replied.
     
    Thomas looked at them, “Ok, when something happens I’ll alert you two and then you’ll see. For now just go on and take these.” He opened the drawer and took out a steel briefcase and opened it, revealing three oval shaped grey objects with symbols on one end, one being a red phoenix, one being a blue lion head with three marks following and the last being a white unicorn head.
     
    “What are these?” Grey asked.
     
    “Just take them and you’ll know when the time is right.” Thomas replied as they each took one and Grey took a second, “Good, just take it.”
     
    Grey had taken the red and white ones while Ben had taken blue.
     
    “Ok, now go you two, I’ll find a way to contact you as needed.” Thomas told them and turned back to his desk.
     
    Grey and Ben walked out and Ben turned to Grey, “What do you think?”
     
    “I don’t know, I don’t think Thomas knows what he’s talking about for one thing.” Grey replied.
     
     
    Thomas looked out his window at them, “Am I making a mistake?” He asked himself.
     
     
    Grey and Ben sat in their science classroom and spoke in hushed tones at their table so the other person, a girl named Kristen, wouldn’t hear them.
     
    “Do you think we should go back to see Thomas again?” Ben asked.
     
    “I don’t know, I’m not though.” Grey replied.
     
    Kristen, the same age as them with long blond hair, turned to them, “What are you two talking about?” She had heard parts, but not much.
     
    Grey turned to her, “Nothing that would interest you.” He replied coldly.
     
    “Ok,” she turned away from them, “just thought I’d ask.” She said a bit sadly.
     
    Grey and Ben went back to speaking until class began for their last class.
     
     
    Bede turned to Medera, “It’s time, my power has grown enough, we can launch our attack.” Bede growled.
     
    Her eyes widened, “Really? It’s time to attack?”
     
    “Yes, ready a creature.”
     
    She bowed; she now wore some light armor in red and black and walked away.
     
     
    Grey and Ben walked in Thomas’s homes direction.
     
    “So you decided to come, why?” Ben asked.
     
    Grey shrugged, “I’m bored.” He reached into his pocket and looked at the two devices he had and they started beeping.
     
    Ben’s started as well, “Could Thomas have been right?” He heard Grey ask.
     
    They looked ahead and saw a group of pure black fleshed beings in light grey armor resembling ancient soldiers; each held either a blade, shield or spear.
     
    Ben and Grey took fighting stances, “So he’s right.” Grey muttered.
     
    Coming from around the corner came a creature, a Centaur, apparently in command.
     
    “What the hel# is that?” Ben asked.
     
    “I guess it’s a Centaur of Greek mythology.” Grey replied, “What now?”
     
    “I don’t know, but we can fight, or try to at least.” Ben replied and ran at the closest soldier and punched it in the face, rendering it.
     
    The other soldiers saw and ran at him, readying their swords and spears.
     
    Grey ran in and took one out with a kick to the torso and another with a sweep kick, “Ok, now what?” He asked Ben.
     
    “I don’t think we can fight them all, especially not that Centaur.” Ben replied.
     
    The Centaur looked at them and laughed, “Ok, eliminate them!” It yelled to the soldiers.
     
    They ran at the two, “Yeah, we can’t beat them all before we get killed.” Grey told Ben.
     
    Grey saw something out of the corner of his eye, “Da#n it.” He muttered.
     
    “What?” Ben asked as he blocked the spear of one of them, yanked it forward, and delivered a kick to put the soldier down.
     
    “Kristen is here.” Grey replied.
     
    “What?”
     
    “Yeah, we can’t let her get involved, she’ll get herself killed.” Grey told Ben and ran off in that direction.
     
    The Centaur saw and sent two soldiers while the rest attacked Ben and the surroundings.
     
    Grey reached Kristen, “What are you doing here?” He demanded.
     
    “I just came this way.” Kristen replied, a bit in shock.
     
    Grey ducked and swept the footing out of one of the two and then delivered an axe kick to its torso to defeat it, “Get out of here.” He told her.
     
    “What’s happening?” She asked.
     
    “I’ll explain later.” He replied and ran to and jumped off the wall next to him and took out the second.
     
    Kristen nodded nervously as Ben joined them, “Ok, we’re outnumbered Grey.” He said.
     
    “I know.” Grey replied and heard more beeping from the devices.
     
    Gen looked at his and Grey took the other two out, “What’s this supposed to mean?” Ben asked.
     
    Kristen looked at one, “I’ll take a look…”
     
    Grey handed her one, the one with the unicorn head.
     
    “Thanks.” She murmured and looked it over.
     
    Ben put his on his left wrist, “Why do that?” Grey asked.
     
    “It might be the point of these things.” Ben replied, “And we have nothing to lose.”
     
    Grey nodded and strapped his on and Kristen followed suit.
     
    “Now what?” Grey asked.
     
    Ben started pressing in the symbol at the end, but saw nothing happen, “I don’t know.”
     
    Grey tried pressing in the bird head and just slammed his whole palm down which caused the whole symbol to move into an indentation in the device and it started to glow.
     
    “Ok, I get it…” Grey muttered, “Ben, Kristen, follow suit.”
     
    They nodded and pressed their symbols down and caused the devices to glow, the glow of red, blue and white respectively bathing their bodies.
     
     
    Name: Grey
    Age: 16
    Personality: a prodigy, kind, distant
    Image: http://member.toei-anim.co.jp/tv/digimon_s/poji/11_4.jpg
    Color: Red
    Zord: Phoenix
     
    Name: Ben
    Age: 16
    Personality: tough, strong, arrogant, takes care of himself
    Image: http://images.wikia.com/tardis/images/0/01/Adam_Mitchell.jpg
    Color: Blue
    Zord: Chimera
     
    Name: Kristen
    Age: 16
    Personality: Shy, kind, quiet
    Image: (original image gone, be up after discussing with my partner who's helping with this)
    Color: White
    Zord: Pegasus
     
    Name: Thomas
    Age: 21
    Personality: colder than the others, he works to defend his students, protective of them
    Image: http://tvmedia.ign.com/tv/image/article/82...01043444490.jpg
     
    And that's it.
     
     
  20. Grey Snow
    Ok, what is your progress? I know most of you forgot, but what is the progress? 08 has I think ten written and starting eleven as the second in the Swamp, about five in Swamp, then more with OoMN and DH and then the Final Battle and War. Anyone?
  22. Grey Snow
    I got it today, yet to read it, I'll do that later tonight when I'm done on another, better forum (sorry loyal BZPers). I've heard its great, though I know some spoilers, like Avohka, Order Leader, etc.
     
    Finished, incredible.
  23. Grey Snow
    Ok, I have a question before I get too into Part 3. Do you prefer more of the parts being actual story, like The Rift, Powerless, Dead Walking (and the rest of Orwik's death), etc., or like Fragments, Shkorl, etc. that don't talk about the story, just side stories? I just need to know before I plan out too many chapters, I can say now that the first two chapters of Part 3 are actual story and the third is side story, but I need this advice now so I can figure out the chapters and where they'll go.
  25. Grey Snow
    Well the other day from Amazon I got some DVD's, the Oban Cycle of Oban Star Racers, and all I had left to get from Amazon was SoS. So I was bored, looking for something to do yesterday, and guess what comes. An Amazon package. I open it and guess what I find. Another copy of the Oban Cycle, seems I accidently added it twice.
    Sorry Kaji, but we're sending it back, it would be too much to ship to...where do you live? Denmark? So we're sending it back.
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