Padishah Mehmet II

I Am Rock - Brother Firetribe-Dovydas

4/5.-Dovydas

Life Starts Now - Three Days Grace-Dovydas

2006 and 2003.Because the Voya Nui saga was the height of epicness. Oh, I get nostalgic shivers just thinking of it.-Dovydas

Nullvoted.My favourite is Flow of the River.-Dovydas

One Wild Night - Bon Jovi-Dovydas

I played field hockey in the U-18 team for my city until quite recently. Quit, eventually. Got really sick of sucking at it.-Dovydas

Tom Mc. Israel: I can't begin to describe how I disagree with you. MORALS IN STORIES ARE COMPLETELY UNNECESSARY. In fact, it's probable they'll tick off the reader and you'll come across as a stupid idealist trying to shove his thoughts down another's throat. My stories are moralless, written for the sake of writing them, and that's how people happen to enjoy them.-Dovydas

Like you said about archetypes, morals will worm their way in, too. For example, if you're strongly against capital punishment, your story will include parts where a hero spares an enemy's life and simply imprisons them, or agonizing over a recent victory, wondering if it was self-defense or murder. You'll get your point across either way, but if you try to get your point across, you'll just sound preachy. Even if your main character doesn't align with your personal moral beliefs (which would probably be really tricky to write, but I think I'll have to try it sometime as an exercise), you'll probably wind up creating another character to voice your opinion on the situation.

The time when Dovy played actually more videogames than usual.-Dovydas

While I generally enjoyed this story, I've had two main problems with it.

As Shasta fell, he caught a glimpse of Rahi tearing the cable apart.

However, one of the cable lengths had dropped on its face, keeping it from seeing where he would land, and he landed on the Rahi’s back.

Then, suddenly, deliverance came. One of the cable lengths dropped on the Rahi's face, obscuring its vision and resulting in Shasta landing on the Rahi's back.

Eh, it's darn near impossible to avoid archetypes altogether. I'd say that, while archetypes aren't necessarily evil, don't always try to include archetypes in your stories. No one wants to read the same thing over and over again; the same applies to writing.

Aren't all stories based off archetypes, just presented in different ways (ie: the characters, setting)?

Or alternately, try not to use archetypes at all.-Dovydas

Guys. Guys. Seriously, I just thought of another. "And Now A Word From Our Sponsor..."

Notable fact: few people on this forum are still under 13.-Dovydas

So, Dovy doesn't have to do anything since that work of his (which, unlike some people's, wasn't late, aren't I right Skar and a few other people?) ? Good then. Good to see this up in that case.-Dovydas

You could post that story as its own topic in Completely Off-Topic. Speaking of stories, would anyone here care to review my two newly-posted original fiction stories whose links are at the top of my signature?

Brilliant comic is brilliant. Discussion over. ... Okay, new discussion. Any fans of ElfQuest prowling BZPower? I chanced upon it randomly while browsing TVTropes, and read it from a site online. I must say, it's a darn good comic, and I do prefer it to any superheroish comics, no offense to Marvel/DC fans.-Dovydas

1/5. Same, really.-Dovydas

Have got Dreaming Out Loud as a physically existent album and regularly listen to what I don't have on that video site we're not allowed to discuss. it's a darn good band, really.-Dovydas

1/5.-Dovydas

5/5.-Dovydas

MNOLG.

YES. I especially loved the ending theme.

ME TOO I'm gonna remix that someday.