Toa Zehvor Brenmac

You know you're behind on your writing when your comedy ends up on the second page of the forum. No, I think he was talking about capturing and interrogating and torturing the rest of us. Don't you just hate it when you forget to lock your door and your mortal enemy (or one of your mortal enemies) sneaks in?Okay new schedule: One chapter a week, either on Fridays or Saturdays. There's no reason I shouldn't be able to adhere to that.Now to cap off the Kaiju Arc.Chapter 27: One Last Battle! Save Kpik, Gamera!A house in suburban Massachusetts..."Are you sure about this? I don't think this is a very good idea.""It's a fine idea. Besides, I'm certain that Brenmac will be pleased to see us again.""You'd better be right. But are you sure that rigging this portal that green Piraka created will work? What if it brings us to the wrong state, or into a different dimension entirely?""Just trust him. He's smarter than he looks. Besides, the only trouble we should be having is getting your big head through that octagon."The first turned to the third. "Just know that I can fry you anytime I want, and-why are you wearing his bathrobe?""It's comfy. He won't mind it as long I don't get it all tattered.""Quiet you two." said the first. "I'm almost done with this. A few more minutes and we should be in Florida. And then our little reunion with our master will commence.Standing amongst the ruins and debris of the center of Miami, Florida, Gamera and the now fully grown Iris stared each other down, neither certain as to how they would start this battle. Gamera broke the silence first by throwing a fireball, but Iris jumped out of the way and over Gamera. Wrapping its tentacles around Gamera's neck, it began to pull the monster towards itself. Gamera dug his left foot into the debris to act as a brake, and it was doing surprisingly well. Then Gamera used a tiny bit of fire to set the tip of the tentacle ablaze. The fire traveled down the appendage and finally reached Iris' body. The monster let out a horrible screech as it released Gamera.Facing his opponent once more, Gamera charged and tackled Iris into the remains of a building. But this only gave Iris the opportunity to wrap all of its tentacles around Gamera's body, all of which were trying to pierce the gargantuan turtle's shell to no avail. Gamera breathed more fire at Irys' head, who evaded it at the last second. Rolling around a few times, it threw Gamera off of it and the monster crashed into what remained of another building. Both monsters had gotten back to their feet within seconds.This time Iris would be the one to make the next move. Charging Gamera at full speed, it pierced his stomach with one of its dagger-like arms. Gamera roared in pain as his power was being slowly drained.Back in his hotel room, MT jumped off of the windowsill and swung his sword as hard as he could. He quickly remembered that the room was pretty much pitch black, save for the thin beam of moonlight coming in from the window. Because of this, he had no idea where in the room Mete was, and worse, he didn't know where an attack might come in from."Surprise."MT grunted as the blade of a sword struck him in the back. An then, another laughing sound. "This is too easy. Because it's so dark in here, I can attack you in anyway I please, from any angle, and you would never be aware of it. For example..." MT grunted again as a blast of Xenon hit him in the chest and sent him rolling until he hit the wall. "See?" Omega Mete asked from the darkness. "You were a fool to accept my challenge, MT. You should have given up from the very start. Would've made things a lot easier for you and I." "You were the one calling me a coward," MT groaned as he got back up. "Saying I couldn't fight you without my teammates to help. You're the true fool here, Mete. I will prove to you that I can defeat you alone." "Then bring it." "Gladly." MT replied as he fired a beam of light from his hand that briefly illuminated the room. Mete screamed and covered his eyes. While his foe was distracted, MT used his grapple beam to grab onto Mete and throw him over one of the beds and into the wall. Omega Mete only continued to laugh. "You have more in you than I had estimated." he stood back up. "That means it will so much more fulfilling and fun when I kill you!" Mete charged back into the shadows, but MT was ready for him this time. Following the sound of Mete's voice, MT raised his sword in time block Mete's. "How did you-?" You have a very distinctive, annoying voice." MT explained. "As long as i know where it's coming from, I know where you're coming from." Mete growled as MT shot an ice missile that froze Mete's midsection solid. Swing his sword and shattering the ice, MT knocked Mete to the carpet. Then the Zehvor Leader raised the sword over his head. "Just stay still, and you'll have a merciful end." With that, he brought the sword down.Gamera continued to groan as his energy faded away. Knowing he had to think of something quick, he grabbed the dagger-like arm and used his remaining strength to rip it out, leaving a gaping hole behind. Gamera dropped to one knee and panted, Iris staring emotionlessly all the while. Looking up at his enemy, Gamera managed another sphere of flames, one that Iris was now capable of duplicating. The two fireballs clashed head on, creating an explosion large enough to send the two monsters flying back. Both managed to recover, Gamera barely, and the two stood back up, waiting see who would make the next move. Too quickly for Iris to react, Gamera let yet another fireball loose, this one burning away part of Iris' torso, revealing something gelatinous inside. Before Gamera could get a good look, however, Iris, now more enraged than ever, lashed out with one of its tentacles. The tentacle stabbed Gamera in the left hand and pinned it to the side of a building. Three others along with both of Iris' dagger hands stabbed Gamera's torso and resumed the draining of energy. "Never."Omega Mete raised his legs in time to catch the sword with his feet. Then, throwing MT into the wall next to the TV, he got back to his feet, picked up his sword, and threw it blindly into the darkness. He heard a cry of pain a moment or so later. Mete didn't know it, but he had just inadvertently impaled MT's left hand and pinned it to the wall. Seeing his enemy in pain made Mete grin sadistically. Walking calmly up to MT, he grabbed the handle of his sword and proceeded to drive it in further, twisting it slightly as well to increase the pain. MT was struggling to resist the urge to scream. Mete's grin grew broader as he unveiled a dagger with poison on the blade and prepared to slash MT's throat with it. "Now," he whispered. "You stay still, and I'll give you a merciful end."Gamera had no idea what to do now. He was very close to fainting due to both energy and blood loss. He struggled to remember how he had defeated this opponent ten years earlier. It quickly coming back to him, he grabbed the three tentacles in his good hand and then ripped them out of himself and of Iris. Throwing them down, he shoved Iris away from him and grabbed the gelatinous object inside Iris' chest, which was the sac that contained the tormented Kpik, and ripped it out as well, separating his foe from its Toa host. He also decided to simply remove the last tentacle from his left had, as opposed to just blowing it off with a fireball as he did last time.Kpik in one hand, Gamera focused all his power into one single final blast of fire that incinerated the agonized Iris from within, and causing it to finally explode. Nothing but silence for a few moments. Looking down in his hand, Gamera saw that the sac had hardened and now crumbling, revealing the unconscious Kpik inside. Somehow, Gamera knew instantly that Kpik did not belong on this planet. Gently placing the Toa on his back, Gamera entered his flying form for the last time and flew into space. Kpik would later wake up in the snow on Mandex, with no memory of what had happened to him, which was probably for the best.MT was in a similar situation at the moment. I've never been in this predicament before, he thought to himself. And I have to think of something, fast, fast! He glanced at his beam weapon and didn't think twice about the idea. Aiming at his wrist, MT shot a plasma beam and blew his left hand straight off. "DAAHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed. Omega Mete was too shocked to make a move. Panting angrily, MT used his grapple beam to grab onto Mete again, slam him into the ceiling and finally through the window, causing Mete to fall several stories onto a pile of concrete. But when MT looked out the window, Mete was gone. Walking over to the wall, he removed Mete's sword and tossed that out as well. By the morning, it would also be gone.Picking up his hand, MT brought to Levacius, who surprisingly managed to fix it. But he was advised to rest it for a few days, to which MT gladly obliged. The next day, power to the hotel once again restored and repairs to the city underway, Brenmac paid his leader a visit. "Please tell me its over and we don't have to deal with any crazy stuff for at least a few days." was the first thing MT said upon seeing Brenmac, who smiled. "Don't worry. I don't think Gamera will be coming back. I think we can finally start to relax now." A sound coming from outside distracted him. Going over the now repaired window, Brenmac was greeted with the sight of Huntress beating a dead Gyaos with her spear. Levacius, who was with her out in the front, laughed. "Okay, let's bring it in now." Brenmac's smile grew wider. Things finally seemed to be going back to normal. Or so he thought.That night, on the west side of the hotel, a portal opened and three creatures stepped out."Is this the place?" asked the first."I believe so. Last I checked, Brenmac was staying with his friends at this hotel." said the second. "Then let's waste no time in getting in. Besides, I'm quite famished." said the third.The three sneaked into the hotel through a side door and headed straight for the kitchen, the hotel's occupants completely unprepared for them.Little Spoiler Note: The three figures aren't MoCs, but actually plush figures of mine, one of which is semi-electronic. (Seriously, if MT is allowed to incorporate a stuffed turtle into his stories, then I should be allowed to do this.)I think I'll go check out Tahu vs Tahu: Aftermath and How To Live An Exciting Life to see if they're any good. If they are, I'll comment. Maybe iBrow and JL will come here as well, but I'd like to stop just reading Aftermath 2 on this forum, y,know, and check out other Zehvor work.-Zehvor Brenmac

Huh? Oh it's not babies that scare me, just ones that can talk and use guns and are murderous and evil. Because that's simply so illogical. But then again, what am I doing looking for logic in this? Sooner or later I'm going to so something in AT that will make the killer baby look fully plausible.Quiet, yes, but also not bad. Tahu Nuva punching Zaktan and Brutaka falling down the stairs made me laugh, along with the Wendy's Drive-thru scene. I've never watched The Ellen Degeneres Show, so I don't know how bad it is. Maybe that's a good thing. Evil Tahu injected with motor oil means...an Evil Tahu with motor oil for blood? Void stuff was nice, continued the plot there, but if felt kinda, eh, fillerish. -Zehvor Brenmac

Just what I needed a couple nights ago before I went to bed. The image of a killer baby in my head. Is this Aftermath 2 or It's Alive? Thanks a lot, MT. The suspense rises as ultimate power is in Mesoquack's grasp. But the villains have been successfully freed and Evil Tahu is currently in Hydraxon's custody. Let me guess, Rocket Matoran and I try to stop Mesoquack (after we get that sword of course) while Axonn and Brutaka's Mask Shop cause more hijinks at the House. Eh, nice ones MT.-Zehvor Brenmac

I'm not sure about the rest of you guys, but I'm not interested in mating with a dead body. I'm sure they don't resist, by their insides can be all decomposed and stuff and...ew.Anyways, on the subject of the chapter, I'm pretty sure a human baby infused with Xenon will turn out to be pretty bad (but interesting!), the fight between you and Kermit is turning out to be pretty sweet, Levacius is using a welding torch to break out the Barraki and Piraka, and PB thinks our pop culture revolves around vampires in love and killing zombies. Wait until he hears about what music is popular... I'm such a liar. I promised a new AT chapter yesterday and I did nothing. I still haven't come up with the full plot for it yet, and I'm still split as to whether or not I want to write the story arc that was supposed to come after the current or just jump right into the Challenge Matches for the Summer Tourney. (Speaking of which, I'm still looking for volunteers) Also, i have a couple of school assignments to worry about and TBH, AT isn't very high on my priority list at the moment, as I have a couple of other stories that I'm writing, one of which is with a friend. I'll try and do something next week, but you guys probably can't trust me anymore.-Zehvor Brenmac

Wow, Zaktan actually gave up for once. Probably the best decision he's made in his life. But don't worry, the Zehvor are coming to save him! (As much as I didn't think that I'd ever write that.) As expected, Takadox and Mnatax make horrible guards, and JL handled them easy. Pretty cool fight at the end, but with Sonu and Gravity out for the moment and Mesoquack with the power orbs, hope seems lost. Eh, you'll come up with something. New AT chappie tomorrow. -Zehvor Brenmac EDIT: Hey cool I started the sixteenth page!

I don't wanna know what that baby is going to be like when the mother comes home.Fine chapters. If Assassin is dead from that pillar falling on him, let's hope he stays that way. There are plenty of villains to take his place (Heck, you just added n a new one!). One character dying is not really a big deal. Beyond that, it looks like the third orb is as good as Sonu's and I would like to know how PB would react to other areas of American popular culture (Music, movies, TV Shows, etc.). -Zehvor Brenmac

I would say that, yes, Mesoquack is dangerous. Considering how close he came to killing Mesonak.Hopefully Evil Tahu and Mantax can come up with a creature that his truly terrifying. Like a Cerberus or something of the like. And it looks like I'm finally getting out of the Core! Although since Gravity has teamed up with Ghirardelli and I teamed up with Gravity, does that mean that Ghirardelli is now my ally (Albeit my temporary one.)? And Mesonak and TR18 VS. Mesoquack. That should be real good.Now please get back to Tahu and OT and the baby. I want to see what happens next with them!-Zehvor Brenmac

Meh. Good chapters. But can we get back to Tahu and OT next chapter? I want to see what they'll do with/to the kids. OT has already abused a poor baby, I want to see how far Tahu can take it.Awesome to see the Coffee mines back after so long. Something weird must be going on down there if there are talking squirrels. Or maybe the squirrels have built an advanced civilization and are preparing to overrun the Earth. And now I have a bunch of guards on my side. Cool I guess? And now Lev and iBrow are in jail and we have to break them out. Perfect. Just what I want to do when I come back to Earth.-Zehvor Brenmac

He said from years past, iBrow. (I don't know, actually. Xplode seems too recent to me.) Anyways, I'll go with...Befuibla? I'm not certain. It was a character from way early in the original TBTTRAH. And Hydraxon and Maxilos and Spinax. Because we haven't seen them in a long time.The chapter? Great. Sonu and Mesoquack forming an alliance? For some reason I like that idea. tahu and OT getting their first customer? In that case, I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much. The Skrall and Tuma finally returning? All I can say to that is finally. Awesome.Overall, great and suspenseful chapter Mogwai's Tempertantrum.-Zehvor Brenmac

I dunno. The Core doesn't seem that bad as a chocolate factory.Matoran:You wouldn't get to have any chocolate....Oh. In that case, let's revert the Core back to the terrible afterlife it once was!It seems that you, Lev, and iBrow have more or less joined out to break Pridak and Xplode out of jail. Sonu vs. Gravity, that should be good. And Tahu, hope you like looking after screaming children and changing diapers! Because that's what in your immediate future if this babysitting service thing works out. Good chapter Mom's Taquitos.Off topic: Hopefully I won't have school tomorrow. There's big snowstorm coming, or at least that's what I've heard. Yes, I'll have to shovel snow tomorrow if it works out, but that's a small price to pay to me. (Keeps fingers crossed.) -Zehvor Brenmac

I'm baaaaaack! And sooner than expected at that.@JL-Charter is the cable company/Internet service provider that disconnects my family's cable TV and Internet connection when my parents can't pay the bill on their (the company's) terms. Y'know, since we're so busy spending our money on other things such as food, oil, rent...Seems I didn't miss much while I was gone. Tahu having a babysitting service? That should be interesting. And the next AFL being in the summer? In that case, I'll have the Tournament Arc of AT's story start at around the same time.-Zehvor Brenmac

Is it bad that I'm starting to like the "villains" in this comedy more? 'Cause they can be hilarious at times.The end of the Sonu/Lambda Turtle fight was pretty good and the fight between Ghirardelli and Lambda Turtle look like it'll be pretty funny. And signs seem to pointing to a confrontation between me, Rocket Matoran, and possibly Lambda Turtle on one side and Ghirardelli on the other. Guess we'll have to wait and see.We haven't seen any female Turtles have we? They have to exist too, right?In other news, Charter has struck again, so...you know what that means. See you guys in a week, or more...-Zehvor Brenmac

Well we were running just as the bomb was being released, but I'm not sure if that counts. I mean we ran before the bomb fell, but like you said, w/e. We still got out alive.Also, where's Lev gone off to? I thought he was still reading.Oh well. As promised, new chapter now.Chapter 26: Godzilla and GameraA Matoran had heard Kpik's screams and ran to the Toa's house to investigate, but the time he got there, it was too late. A huge hole in the roof caused him to look up. He could see a tentacled creature that was steadily growing larger, Kpik lodged in its torso and unconscious. The creature disappeared into the night sky and the Matoran could only return home, hoping that this was all a terrible nightmare. "So what is the next phase of your plan, master?"Omega Mete remained quite collected. "Oh nothing much. Just send the Queen Legion down into another one of Florida's cities-I haven't decided on which one-along with a flock of Gyaos. You do have those ready, right?" The Zadakh nodded. Mete smiled. "Good. I'm hoping to attract Gamera-and possibly Godzilla-so that I may destroy them once and for all. Then, only the Bionicles will be able to stand in my way. Then, the "special plans" I have in store for them will be able to be put into effect."The control room's sliding door opened and a second Zadakh entered. "Sir, we've just gotten word that the Irys-which is rapidly maturing as I speak-has just departed from Mandex." Mete nodded. "Good. And had it bonded with and absorbed a Toa?" The Zadakh nodded yes in response. "Really? Which one?" "We believe it to be the one known as Kpik." answered the Zadakh. Omega Mete grinned madly once more. "Oh my day just keeps getting better and better."Merrick rested his head on his seat. He, along with many of his soldiers, had managed to pile into the trucks and speed off before the bomb fell and destroyed Orlando, along with all but one of the Gyaos. So far, no casualties had been reported, which relieved the exhausted commander. "However," said a soldier. "One of those monsters may have escaped and been whisked away by some unknown means. For the moment though, we can't confirm it.""Also," said another. "I think I may have seen what looked like a red Porsche driving away from the city just as it blew." "But I thought the entire city had been evacuated." Merrick said. the soldier shrugged. "Perhaps we missed someone and they just barely managed to get away. Like that monster." Merrick sighed. "Alright then. If that's the case then our work isn't done yet. But if things are going out like they usually do, then next time there will be more. We have to be ready for anything." His men nodded in agreement as the truck stopped. "Sir, you may want to come look at this." Called a voice from the front of the vehicle.Merrick tiredly got up and walked to the driver's seat. The driver pointed up ahead and Merrick was shocked at what he saw. Their base of operations, albeit a temporary one, had been totally vaporized. Nothing was left. "Don't worry sir." the driver said. "I know of another one not too far from here. He stepped on the gas and began driving in the direction of Miami. When they reached the state capital, the men immediately bean filing out of the car. Getting out himself, Merrick recognized the building as the military base Warsoff had used a couple days before his death, untouched by Barugon's icy rampage. Saluting the base, he turned to his soldiers and ordered them all to go inside and get some rest before the next attack, which he predicted would be tomorrow night. The soldiers replied with an enthusiastic "Yes sir!" before running single file into the base. Merrick stared at the building grimly. Don't worry Warsoff and Kingsley. I'll avenge your deaths and live up to your names by ending this tomorrow night. Well, it would be ended tomorrow night. But he wouldn't be the one ending the battle with the monsters.Across the city, Tahu Nuva's Porsche was driving at a steady speed back towards the hotel. "Man!" Tarakavarbiter excitedly exclaimed. "Did you see that huge explosion? It was the biggest one I'd ever seen in my life! And that's saying something." "We all saw it." Brenmac said. "Well except Tahu Nuva, who had to pay attention to the road. Or rather, the grass and then the road." "Hey," the House co-leader replied, not looking back. "I had to drive this car on the grass so we avoid detection. By military men that may or may not be after us. It was best for us to lay low, just as we are now."The others did agree with him. After all, if they were remain on the run from authorities successfully, then they would have to take whatever risks were necessary. The four stuck to silence as the Porsche pulled into the hotel parking lot. There weren't many cars here, as people were reluctant to came her after the incident with the Gremlins. Once they returned inside though the back door, MT was quick to fly back upstairs to his room, most likely to restart his game that had been unplugged before the four had left. Tahu Nuva, Brenmac, and Tarakavarbiter wished each other a good night before returning to their own rooms to sleep the night away. Unlike MT, who continued to play video games until sunup.The next morning, one of the same two Zadakh from before entered the control room to ask Mete if he had decided on the city he would next attack. As it turned out, he had. "I plan to end my tormenting of the humans with giant monsters in the same one it began in: Miami." "But you've already damaged he city," the Vahki said, "And that's where the Bionicles are!" "I want to finish what I started." Omega Mete replied. "And if the Bionicles die in the process-and I know that they won't-then that's just a nice bonus. However, I would prefer crushing them using mainly my own power. If i was able to destroy their precious House that way, then their little hotel should be much easier." The Vahki nodded. "Interesting sir. Also there's something I'd like to tell you concerning the Gyaos." "What is it?" Mete asked. "Is there something wrong with it?" "Not at all." The Vahki replied. "We just found out that Gyaos can reproduce asexually. Which is why we were able to create several with just one." "That's incredible!" Mete exclaimed. "So as long as one survives, many more can be easily created?" The Zadakh nodded again. "Perfect." Mete said. "then make certain that the Queen Legion and a single Gyaos are the only ones left standing by the end of tonight's battle."That evening, Merrick made a peculiar announcement to his troops. "Men, tonight we fight the final battle. Or so I assume it will be you fighting. Because in the event that Godzilla, Gamera, or both appear, I will have you all fall back and let them do the fighting. Is that clear?" The men nodded in unison, but Merrick knew that the majority of them didn't want to accept his terms.He had the soldiers set up what tanks and guns they still had left on the city's perimeter. Then, they waited. Eventually one soldier directed Merrick's attention to the sky. He could see a tiny black dot hovering above the city. Using a pair of binoculars, he could barely see the outlines of Omega Mete's ship. A moment later a long white beam of light shot out of the underside and materialized into the Gueen Legion and seven Gyaos, which began throwing their lightning and sonic beams everywhere. Some of the blasts just missed the hotel, but the power inside the building went off for a second time."Open fire!" Merrick ordered. The tanks and soldiers began unloading their guns with all their might. But it was a lost cause, as the bullets and missiles merely bounced off the Queen Legion's body while those that hit the Gyaos didn't seem to affect them in the least. The tanks, however, did have luck in downing one of the Gyaos, but at this point Merrick was giving up hope. He was considering having the soldiers fall back and leave the city-and its denizens-to the mercy of the monsters.A familiar sound caused Merrick to look to his left. In the distance he could see Gamera's flying form. His eyes followed it until it rammed into the Queen Legion, sending the two falling into a nearby building. When the smoke cleared, Gamera was standing over Legion and slashing her with his elbow claws. Legion tried to do the same with her own, only to find her adversary now easily able to parry her blows.A recognizable roar had Merrick looking in the other direction. Far away, he could see the King of the Monsters ring out of the ocean and heading in the direction of the battle. Smiling, he yelled to his soldiers, "Fall back! Get out of here. Leave this fight to them!" The men were more than happy to oblige as the refiled into their trucks alongside Miami and proceeded to drive as far away from Miami as possible. Gamera, meanwhile, had finished slashing Legion for the moment and turned his attention to the Gyaos still soaring though the skies and slicing buildings with their sonic beams. Gamera prepared a fireball, but there was no need, as a blue beam of energy shot one out of the sky and sending it flying into another building, demolishing it. So Gamera used the fireball-which was much stronger than usual due the increased time it had to charge-to shoot a third Gyaos out of the sky, which landed near the hotel.Gamera looked to Godzilla, ready to fight with him again, but it quickly became clear that Godzilla had no interest in doing such, at least not for the moment. So, backs to each other, Gamera finished off the remaining four Gyaos while Godzilla resumed his battle with Legion, who had returned to her many feet. Godzilla and Legion locked claws and pushed each other away. The Monster King then swiped his tail at Legion, which she dodged-only to be met with a blast to the face a split second after. But Legion was not as harmed this time and reacted with another blast of lightning, causing Godzilla to drop to his knees and roar in pain. Slowly getting back up, he and Legion stared each other down before charging. But Legion was slightly faster, and managed to slash Godzilla's side before her opponent had time to react. But Godzilla was not affected and "swallowed" his fire again, unleashing another nuclear pulse that drove Legion back. Godzilla blasted a hole in Legion's torso with his ray and began roaring in victory. Angered, Legion began using the last of her power to charge up one, final devastating blast.Gamera had killed all but two of the remaining Gyaos. Getting a new idea, he retracted his legs into his shell and flew up, catching one of the Gyaos in his arms. Pointing its head at the other, he forced it use its sonic beam to shoot the other through the torso, effectively killing it. Then, he threw down the other one and fried it with a blast of flame once it hit the debris-covered ground. The Gyaos were finally no more.Returning his attention to Godzilla and Legion, he saw that the dying Queen was preparing one final attack. Just as the blast was released, Godzilla and Gamera threw their breath rays in unison, pushing the blast back and into its source, causing the Queen Legion to explode from within. As the body went up in flames, the two monsters roared in victory.Then, Gamera expected Godzilla to turn on him and start their battle again. But, surprisingly, he did not. Godzilla simply turned and walked back towards the ocean, leaving Gamera to his lonesome. Or so he thought.The skies had grown darker, and lightning flashed as the last monster, a fully grown Irys, descended and landed in front of Gamera. Within him, Kpik lay tormented by darkness and nightmares. MT watched the scene play out in his room from the window alone. Until he heard a very familiar laugh coming from the center. "Omega Mete," he said, taking out his sword. "How did you get in here? and what do you want?" "That first one really isn't important, is it?" came the answer. "But as for what I'm doing here..." MT heard the sound of another sword being removed from its sheath. "I want to fight you MT, one more time to decide who is the better Toa. Do you accept my challenge? Or are you too much of a coward to face me alone in the dark without your teammates to help you?"MT's eyes narrowed. "Bring it, Mete."The next chapter will end the Giant Monster arc of AT's story before moving on to the next one and after that, the Challenge Matches begin.-Zehvor Brenmac

Fantastic two chapters Megatron's Tombstone.The dialogue between OT and Evil Tahu was funny, especially with it turning from "spirit to demon possessed my freezer". Darker Sonu is still awesome, and somehow I doubt that the cop car heading for Pridak and Xplode has camera crew in it, so they may not succeed in getting on Cops, but they may just succeed on getting on TruTV Presents: World's Dumbest Outlaws. So they'll still get their wish in the end.I've been slow with coming up with the full plot for chapter 26 of AT which why there's been yet another hiatus. However, regardless of whether or not I've come up with it by tomorrow evening, I'll still write it then and make things up as I go along. But that's what I usually do.And I'm always checking my PMs, so feel free to throw one my way.Edit: 1. I don't really care if i reuse a word. 2. He's been killed twice in the last five years, so two tombstones.How about...Macho Taco? Does that work for you, Lev? Huh? Huh?-Zehvor Brenmac

...I'm supposed to be beating the guts out of that Rocket Matoran right now. What am I doing leading him up to Gravity?Regardless, it should be interesting how life in the Core changes with Ghirardelli as ruler while Evil Tahu is still stuck in the freezer (Although since Evil Tahu is a Fire Toa [i think?] he should be able to keep himself warm for a time until he inevitably freezes. Or he could just burn through the lock, if that's an option.) You know what battle I'd really like to see though? Mr. Matoro vs. Rocket Matoran. That would be epic!-Zehvor Brenmac

So next chapter it's gonna be me vs the Rocket Matoran. Sounds pretty interesting. And a battle that's a lot harder to win than it sounds.So Sonu and Ghirardelli are having a really cool fight here, the scene with Evil Tahu trapped in the freezer was pretty funny (although if the freezer is locked from the inside wouldn't it be easier for Evil Tahu to escape?). And...that's all I have to say about this chapter.-Zehvor Brenmac

I feel the need to ask why candy, something that human beings created, exists on Delarax. Same goes for Trick-or-Treating. The only reasonable explanation would be that the Delaraxians have been studying us for a long time. That said, with the Barraki's, Piraka's, Evo and Nex's, and others antics, Aftermath would still make for a great sitcom. And Sonu + "Radioactive Substance"= Not Good. Or possibly Sonuzilla, which would be hilarious.@JL-The Rocket Matoran is far away from Sonu, searching for the three Nicro-Xenon Toa, the other two power orbs, or both. Meh, still two great chapters though. I have my own stories to get back to.-Zehvor Brenmac

Two weeks have passed since I posted a new chapter. [sarcasm]Boy, I have been doing a fantastic job of keeping my word haven't I? [/sarcasm] Not when it's piercingly bright it isn't. No. Why do people associate addressing teammates or friends as "comrades" with being Russian? It's not like he's addicted to vodka, uses Russian Reversal, or crashes his car into a convenience store and then tries to buy a prepaid phone card. Wait...that last one was in the Czech Republic, not Russia. Sorry Russia! Or maybe Godzilla is just very rough-skinned.I need to get back on track with this.Chapter 25: Kpik and IrysOn the Planet of Mandex and in the village of Akaria, Toa Kpik looked out at the rival village across. Surprisingly, neither village had attacked the other in days, allowing the Matoran to go about their daily business without incident. And it seemed like today would be another one of those days. "What are you looking at?" asked a Matoran who had come up to check on him. "Oh, nothing." Kpik answered. "Just thinking to-"A flaming, falling object that had suddenly appeared in the sky caught his attention. His eyes continued to follow it until it crashed into a mountain range in the distance. "Oh I'm sure that's nothing to worry about. Probably just a meteorite and nothing more." "Perhaps." Kpik whispered. "But I still feel that I should go investigate it." "Should I tell someone you're leaving?" asked the Matoran. "No. Don't worry about me." Kpik replied. "I'll be back shortly."It took Kpik about half an hour to get to the crash site on foot. When he finally reached it the first thing he saw was steam rising from the perimeter of the crater. He reluctantly got a little closer, knowing for sure that the object was still blazing hot. But upon giving it a slight touch, Kpik found that it was not hot at all. Feeling slightly safer, he began examining the object and discovered that it was not a meteorite, but a more of spherical container. But built to contain what? Kpik asked himself.He got his answer a second later when he heard a sudden cracking sound. He instinctively readied His sword and backed slowly away from the sphere as it split open. He lowered the weapon, however, when he saw that what was inside was a juvenile alien. Kpik placed the sword back onto his back and knelt down to get a closer look and saw the creature appeared to pose no threat. "Little thing, stranded and alone." He said, gently taking the creature in his arms. "I'll bring you back to my village, where you can eat, play, and sleep without worry. Come." He carried the creature away from the still slightly steaming crater and towards Akaria. "So, does Tahu know you own this?" Tarakavarbiter asked. He, MT, Brenmac, and Tahu Nuva were driving at high speed towards Orlando in the red Porsche that Tahu Nuva had shown them. The House co-leader shook his head, keeping his eyes on the road. "No. If Tahu knew I owned this, he'd probably do something stupid with it, like scratch the paint or get it into an accident. Also, he'd probably demand where I got the money from and make me share it with you guys. I'm only letting you three ride in it because we need a method of transportation to get us to Orlando as fast as possible." "So how should it take to get us there?" "By my calculations, about two hours." "Two hours?" Brenmac blurted out. "How does that work?" "Hey, I'm just doing the 37 mile per hour speed limit." Tahu Nuva replied. "I don't want us to get pulled over by the cops, who we're on the run from, need I remind you." "I suppose you're right." MT said. "Besides, that gives us plenty of time to come up with a plan." Meanwhile, in Orlando, the military forces had already come up with plan. The city was in the process of a complete and total evacuation, while Merrick had gotten word of the governments approval to use a bomb on the monsters, and that it should be over the over the city, ready to be dropped, by the evening. "Good." Merrick said. "Everything is going according to procedure." "Just one thing Merrick sir," said the soldier who had given him the information. Merrick nodded. "In the chance that this plan fails, how much money do you think will have been wasted?" "Probably thousands, but," Merrick placed a hand on the soldier's right shoulder and said calmly, "We'll cross that bridge when or if we get to it."Tahu Nuva's Porsche arrived on the outskirts of the now vacant city a couple hours later, as Tahu Nuva had predicted. He parked the car several dozen yards away in order to avoid detection, out of fear that the military knew of the fact that the Bionicles were wanted fugitives. After getting out of the car, MT asked, "So how do we get there in the fastest, most inconspicuous way possible?" " You and I will fly there, carrying Tahu Nuva and TA while keeping low to the ground." MT shrugged. "Okay, sounds like a plan."After several minutes, the four were hiding behind a building on the very perimeter of the city. "So how will we help the military without being noticed?" Tarakavarbiter asked. "My suggestion is that MT and I fly up on to the roof of this building, while again carrying you and Tahu Nuva, and wait for the Gyaos to arrive. They'll almost certainly be airborne, we'll snipe them from up here while the military uses their tanks and guns." Since none of them could come up with anything better, Brenmac picked Tahu Nuva and began flying him up to the top while MT did the same for Tarakavarbiter. "Ugh!" MT said as lifted the big Toa off the ground. "You need to lose a few parts!" "No I don't." Tarakavarbiter replied. "Now fly me up there." After reaching the roof, the group ran until they reached the edge, overlooking the city. MT was looking up now. "I don't they'll need any tanks or guns." "Why?" Brenmac asked. MT pointed up in response. The other three looked up and saw a large plane hovering over the city. Underneath it was a cylindrical object. MT's eyes widened. "It's a bomb!" He looked to the others. "When that thing is dropped, we run. Got that?" Brenmac, Tahu Nuva, and Tarakavarbiter nodded without question.It didn't take long for the Gyaos to arrive, who began shooting their sonic beams in all directions as the military and Bionicles opened fire on them in unison. Brenmac looked to his right and, using some of the technology built into his mask, zoomed in on the military forces and saw Merrick speaking something into a walkie-talkie as the soldiers were filing into trucks and driving away rapidly. He looked up again and saw that the bomb as slowly being released. MT saw it too and shouted, "RUN!", which he four did as fast as their little legs could carry them. They jumped off the roof, MT and Brenmac catching Tarakavarbiter and Tahu Nuva and flying as fast as they could back to the Porsche. "Step on it!" MT ordered Tahu Nuva upon getting in, but he didn't need to be told. Tahu Nuva drove the car as fast and as far away from Orlando as possible. MT looked back in time to see the city enveloped in a mushroom cloud, a single Gyaos escaping before being enveloped in a white light and disappearing. Omega Mete smiled to himself. "It seems that you humans are better at destroying you cities than I am." He snickered to himself before turning to a Vahki. "The juvenile Irys is on Mandex?" The Vahki nodded. "Good. Then it's only a matter of time now..."In his home in Akaria, Kpik was feeding the juvenile Irys. It was late at night now, and the Matoran were fast asleep. He managed to sneak the creature in through the back entrance, where his home was located. Suddenly, without warning, the juvenile Irys reached out with its tentacles and wrapped them around Kpik's arms. "Woah, what's going on here? Play?" The Irys dragged Kpik closer as more tentacles were wrapped around his body. Kpik could only scream in terror as he was dragged closer, and and closer, and closer...-Zehvor Brenmac

Zaktan vs. Toa=One of the funnier fights I've read on here. Liking Sonu's darker attitude, and Mesonak vs. Mesoquack should be good, but I'm placing all my money on Mesonak. And why is there going to be a fight for the House? Evil Tahu is still in there, or not all the other house's Bionicles got run over by Hovoki?Nice one, regardless.-Zehvor Brenmac

Lucky Gravity, getting a tower all his own.But another nice chapter. Zaktan getting chased by the other house's Bionicles was pretty funny and it should be interesting to see just how long Mesonak and Mesoquack's little truce lasts.And thanks for clarifying Sonu's upcoming "dark side". Though I guess it won't be so much of a dark side as much as it is a change in attitude?-Zehvor Brenmac

Don't worry about me, Hovoki. I'm sure I'll get along with Gravity just fine. And MT will prove me wrong on that.As for the chapter, I thought Tahu and Ghirardelli's fight was pretty cool, and I didn't anyone still knew/cared about the JBs. Now it's JB who's all the rage. And now that Spnu has his life back, it'll be interesting to see how his dark side plays out. (Although I think it should be something he should be struggling against, and not turn against us willingly.)Bueno etapa, Mi Taco.-Zehvor Brenmac

This was a great story arc. And really fun and epic too. Too bad I disappeared or died. Ah, well. I already know I'll came back at one point.Tahu vs Ghirardelli, Assassin vs The Dark Lord Himself. Next arc is gonna be sweet.Great Chapter MT.-Zehvor Brenmac

Funny how Evil Tahu's came back to bite him, or in this case, hit him on the head. Assassin had a half coming to him, half noble death. Great ending to the fight. Hakann trying to eat the drain because it looked like a cookie. Again, why am I not that surprised? And what happened to me I wonder?Even though I am not a fan of football (or as a couple of you guys are calling it, handegg/eggball), I too hope the patriots win. I want New England to look like Philadelphia the night after the Phillies won for the first time in over 25 years. -Zehvor Brenmac

Who said I was dead, PB?Epic chapter. You vs. Assassin was the best part. And I would never let Levacius take control of my Bohrok, especially since I didn't so much "set them free" as much I "had them migrate to the deep underground of the house in Massachusetts where Bionicle: The House Chronicles will take place". And what a surprise. Ghirardelli works for Evil Tahu. Well, the plot is really moving at this point.And you haven't linked to AT:TC in your sig yet like you said...Edit: Thanks man.-Zehvor Brenmac

Another cool entry.But I'm going to have to hurt JL and Levacius when I meet up with them again for ditching me. And I knew that Tahu would never make a deal with Ghirardelli. Lastly, great epic ending and cool cliffhanger.With the utmost un-fortune, though, I have a busy night tonight so no new AT until tomorrow. -Zehvor Brenmac