Bitter Cold

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Oh my, the weirdness expands. =O The narration seems less formal (or something) this time around - "you see," "I'm fairly certain," and later on it says "yeah" a few times. The previous one struck me as more by-the-book, which added to the comedy for me because of the ridiculous situation it was describing. Just a proofreading thing. =] Twilight reference? This strikes me as less of a writer thing to do and more of what my friend Brian does when he describes to me a world he created for D&D or something. Maybe try to describe what's going on spatially, or by giving details of what the characters are seeing, instead of describing the concepts of the world you've made. Sounds weird. Anywho, it took me a bit to wrap my head around the total disconnect from the previous part. I'm still not sure what to think of it. I was certainly not expecting wizards to come into this. I just hope he doesn't have a bag full of deus ex machinas. =P I'll still stick around though, the first installment got me hooked well enough to be interested in how this plays out. Is there a purpose to the LORE? Because he seems to disappear pretty quickly and I'm not sure why you would create an acronym for such a minor character. But if not, it might be nice to have just a bit more focus on him so we'll remember him next time he shows up. I sound like all criticism but I did find it enjoyable. =P

Mine's a camera. Without an SD card. Or batteries! D:

I liked the joke about how Hipster Kitty used to be cool. Until everyone started doing it.

pics and i'll judge

Of course we don't expect that. You have to have a wide range of baseball-related attacks! You have to know pressure points! But most importantly, you have to make awful baseball-related and throwing-related puns! "I'm having a ball fighting crime!"

That's neat. So if we hook it up to like ten thousand batteries can we use it to move people? =P

I inferred that he breathed it out. From the icicles on his face. I love your writing style. It excites me that you've started something new~ I dig it. It's...pretty cool. B)

Tell me, did you sail across the sun? Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights all faded, and that Heaven is overrated?

MAYBE I DID IT

That show's awesome! What are you guys talking about? XP I don't even get a lot of the references but somehow it's still pretty funny.

I am in support

Haha you're pretty rad at drawing, actually. I find that my skills are limited to a pretty small range of things I can draw (namely robots and really creepy people XD). Not to let this turn into a "DRAW THIS LOL" entry, do you have a phone? And if so, does it have lots of superfluous features?

haha, good job there, beefy

How much wood would a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood?

What do you think of Ejector, the Transformer whose alt-mode is a toaster?

Muse > everything okay that's a slight exaggeration perhaps but yeah I too need more money to buy Muse

hahaha, Click and Klakk click clack clicklacklicklacklicklack

That's awfully awesome.

I like how the weapons are molded to fit on her arms perfectly. And how it totally doesn't mention it anywhere in the packaging or instructions. B)

Is Steve Witt a BZPer? I keep hearing his name now and I don't know who he is exactly.

Haha! That's great! I didn't expect him to be at Brickfair. I'm jealous. XP

the obvious memetastic songs i also suggest looking for some unexpected covers, i found Crazy in Love by Snow Patrol; perhaps Lollipop by Framing Hanley, umm what else play some Flight Of The Conchords

Totes gonna be my new phrase. Consider it done. B) XD