Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

As if The Brave and the Bold wasn't bad enough?What's DC trying to do to Batman? Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

The only song that rings a bell is "Brandy." It's sweet and in that folksong vein I prefer; but I only ever heard it once. It got stuck in my head for a few days after that. However, that was years ago, and I can only remember the words of the title. XD Lately I've just been listening to Celtic Thunder, various seashore soundtracks, and ever fondly Simple and Clean. Beautiful song. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Is it your purpose to express yourself? Do you want to bring form to thought? Or are you just bored? Then why not pit your pencil against your fellow writers (or become a fellow writer if you are not!) and join the second Ambage Fortnightly Flash Fiction Contest? Come create with us, and discover meaning in experience! To dispense with the infomercial talk, the theme is "Pathfinding." Personally I have several ideas, and one of them may just involve a young boy wandering in the woods with a stuffed tiger. But don't worry, the other is deeper. Given that the entry limit is three stories, I might just write both. And if you ask me, it's almost too easy to connect Pathfinding to Nighthawks. But personally I prefer my other story concepts. What are yours? Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Thank you very much, Sonis! I'm glad you enjoyed it so. If you want to know what happens next, you can read Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens, a not-so-short story that continues and I'm sorry to say rather inconclusively concludes the story. I have absolutely no plans to continue Stellar Quest, and I will in fact say positively that I will not. I enjoyed it, but my writing time is taken up now by works of grater precedence.But I do hope you will read it and, if you do, perhaps afterward I can tell you a little bit about where the story might have gone and at least satisfy your curiosity.Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Congratulations to the winners, and thanks to you all for entering. There were a lot of great stories and judging wasn't easy; and that's what I like to see!This time around though, in the first COT contest, I'll be entering. Why don't you join me? Let's give the judges an even harder time, what? ;D Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

There's 55555's Speed Written Short Stories and Grant-Sud's Weeping Stars, reviewed. I thought I saw that coming. Congratulations, Tolkien; I look forward to working for you. I'm sure you'll be a worthy successor to Cederak.Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Nuile checking in for duty, bestowing an official SSCC review as requested.This is exactly what I was dreading when I heard about the Red Star. A physical, tangible "afterlife" in the BIONICLE Universe was the bleakest, blandest idea Greg ever came up with.But you pulled it off.You gave it a magic and mysticism and a romance that was touching. You took a machine that resurrects the "data" of dead beings and turned it into something allegorically beautiful.I do have to say that I can't stand excessively anthropomorphized biomechanical beings. Marriage and cookies--these things don't exist. But it's only my personal opinion, and the story was otherwise so good that I'll overlook it.I'll also add that the way you wove detail and backstory in and around the story as it transpired was very skilfully executed. It wasn't so much as to drown the scene you were showing, but it was enough to make the scene more significant.Beyond that, I have nothing further to say. You wrote a very sweet story here, and I enjoyed it very much. Great work, Keep writing, Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Nuile reporting with a Short Story Critics Club Charity Review. Or rather, reviews.I had a good time reading and critiquing all of these. It looks like you had a good time writing them, too. Let's begin:The ForestThe first thing that strikes me me is style. While it's a little tongue-in-cheek, it's a very elegant, not to mention eloquent, style and I enjoy reading it. That's a very important thing; you don't just need a good story, you need the words to tell it.Usually in a story of this length it's difficult for anything but style to strike one. Yet you had a tantalizing sample here of what could be a very good story. It's certainly an intriguing concept. That said, that's the problem here; it's not a story, but a concept. It's the synopsis on the back of the book, but it's not the book.One could argue that a truly good story can't be told in 500 words; I could argue that it can, and often is.The CodeSometimes I feel that if you're not going to tell a story, then don't bother writing it. Again you have a creative premise here, but you don't go anywhere with it. There's some "Bureau" and this guy's trying to crack a code for them. Well good for him, but you didn't give me a reason to care. He sounds like a character who could be worth reading about, but you're not giving me a chance to read about him.Where did the code come from? Why is he trying to crack it? Who is this Bureau? Where is this even set? These are the questions that would draw me into reading a novel, but leave me unsatisfied with a stand-alone short story.One typographical error I noticed: The ExchangeWell at least this time there's a story being told. There's untold information out of sight, but this tale was also, in itself, worth telling. It was exciting and mysterious, but not so much the latter that it frustrated me. It was balanced nicely. Something actually happened and the story came to a conclusion, and all again in your artful language.Another error: FireAgain, pointless. To be a story, there has to be a beginning and an end. There was neither. And the concept wasn't even creative or original this time.I can only be impressed by the compelling manner in which you write nothing. I'll commend that.Four errors this time: FlightThere are a few superfluous details that give the reader the feeling that you know something you're not telling them. As I've already said, this can serve the purpose of pique your reader's curiosity; but if you can't satisfy that curiosity, you're just piquing your readers. Never a wise practise.Yet this was not devoid of meaning. The characters were given a bit of vitality, which is a hard thing to give in a story this short. You didn't give much, but you gave a little with the brief backstories, very deftly applied. It wasn't disappointing because it was enough: these two ace pilots were protecting a fleet of bombers, they were attacked, and they engaged in battle. These characters are made people, so I can be interested in their doings. The untold details feel irrelevant. I think the only disappointment would have been if you had continued it or elaborated too much on what you're not telling, for then it would have detracted from the simplicity of this scene. And in its simplicity it was enough.There's the point: A story this short is meant to be simple. Here, you came closer to letting it be.Grammatical mistakes: The latter I would have ended with an em dash, personally.StuckIf he had two thousand brains, wouldn't he have had two thousand eyes, unless he had a thousand eye patches as well?In all seriousness . . . this was the most inane yet. It didn't even leave much to wonder about. That, or I'm getting numb. Maybe that's it; the narrator has a thousand bodies, which is certainly strange, but if you're not going to explain I no longer bother to concern myself. The end was dramatic, but without a story to conclude it was worthless. TimeThis is easily your best work here. It's philosophical and deep. It really complements your style. The only problem is that it's a monologue rather than a story, but that's not at all against my personal taste.Oh, and I love your vocabulary. Nonce, thrall; meritorious! I think a preposition such as however would have been apt there.PreparationNow that I am accustomed to your method of telling stories of this length, I actually enjoyed this one. It's dramatic and it presages a thrilling tale. Again it's just a concept, but in its vagueness it doesn't leave me begging for answers and thus becomes tolerable and, as I said, enjoyable.And no mistakes; felicitations!BeaconAnd this claims the title of the best story here. It had a beginning, a middle, and an end; very literally, which can be considered a good or a bad thing, dependent upon the instance or upon who you ask.Very truly this is a splendid exemplar of what a story of this length should be; what a story of any length should be! A beginning that draws the reader in; a middle that's exciting; and an ending that leaves the reader surprised and mystified but not confused or vexed.I have to admit, though, that you drooped a little bit in the middle. Yet with so little string, pulling it taut should be easy. It was a bit dull; you needed more action and suspense. I didn't feel the sailor's fear, my breath was not bated like theirs; you didn't even as much as tell me what they were feeling. You just told what was happening. That first should be possessive. That's one word.PowerI've run out of comments. Structurally it has the same problem; no structure! Yet there are no enigmatic details that demand elucidation, and the final note is somewhat discordant but only by effective design, rendering it neither strident nor abrupt.Overall, I think it is a rule of writing to choose a form appropriate for the story you're trying to tell. Or to choose a story appropriate for the form you're trying to suit. Most of these did not follow that rule, but those that did were excellent, which shows what you can do when you try. Moreover I laud your style.I know these were written idly and without much purpose, pieces written merely for the pleasure of writing; and I know I'm being unfairly critical of them given that, but that's what the SSCC does: critique. And with the new charity reviews, there's nowhere you can hide. ;DBut why would you want to? For fifteen-minute shorts, these were great.Keep writing, Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Vivid, very vivid. For a short while it was my misfortune to march along with those slaves and to feel and see everything they experienced. It's a compliment to your writing to say I was glad when it was over, but is that necessarily how you want your reader to feel? I admit, though, that there are a lot of people who enjoy this type of story. I'm just not one of them. There wasn't any plot to it, but it was obviously meant to be a description of Odina's pitiable slaves, and that it was. Like I said, it wasn't my thing, but you did a good job. And I commend your choice of narration. First person, in my opinion, puts us right in the story alongside the characters, and in this case it rendered a name, which would have taken away from the story, unnecessary. Grammatically, there were too many mistakes for my tastes. Most of them were simple, mere typographical errors, and I suggest you watch out for those in future. Proofread more carefully. Here are a few I noticed: Get would be the proper tense in this instance. When speaking generally, First off, two instances of awkward sentence structure. Commas in such places don't sound quite natural. Second, Matoran is a proper noun in BIONICLE grammar. Third, Matoran have little flesh and their bones are made of metal. Fourth, those thousands should be pluralized. Periods always go inside quotation marks. I couldn't quite tell if the whole quote was supposed to be one sentence or not. If so, then the you should not have been capitalized. If not, then that comma should be replaced with a period.Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Souvenirs, reviewed.And to our erstwhile co-curator, farewell, and thanks; for all your work in the Critic Clubs and otherwise, the BZPower library owes you a great debt, and I can but offer you my gratitude. Vale! Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Nuile reporting for an official SSCC charity review!It sounds like a lot of time and consideration went into the planning process of this story, and right off the bat I'll say that it shows. Excellent work here.Your plot was--well, it's really hard to call it a plot. And yet there was a backstory and the story itself. The former, I appreciate, was spare on details; the latter was short, sweet, and touching.Your characters were surprisingly realistic. The father and the girl had sufficient personality. Only I thought the mother was a bit lacking, and more of a placeholder than anything else. She only spoke. And yet I admire the artifice of giving the daugher her mother's name as a middle name. It added a flavor to the mother and the father's feelings for her, which gave her something. In some arguably illogical way it even suggests that the daughter resembles her mother in personality, which gives the mother a second reflection of character.If you're going to write future post-apocalyptic fiction or whatever this is, this is the way I prefer it, with that theme as an undertone, serving the story but without being its center. I like how the story wasn't about the setting, the setting was about the story. Your descriptions, I might add, are vivid and saporous. I do think, however, that at times your detail grew too great and superfluous. A prime example was the description of the rat. I commend that you revealed the fur color by action rather than a narrative statement, but it was highly irrelevant. And what about his tail? Was it a whiter tan, or more of a dirty brown? No, sorry, that's sarcasm. =P There are times when extra detail serves your purpose, however, as it did at the end. Instead of coming to an abrupt halt, you eased into it with a little detail. That was a prime example of how that description, besides the obvious importance of pulling a reader into the story's environment, can otherwise serve your purposes.I offer you, overall, my commendations. Great work, Keep writing, Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Correct. Fourty points more and you'll be at the next rank. It'll be torment, but we'll endure your participation. ;P Welcome to the Ambage. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

And we should wait for AZBlue anyway, so until he shows up there's no hurry. The puzzles really aren't much. As for the novel, don't worry; you'll be hearing about that soon. ;D Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Absolutely. One story can qualify for separate achievements that it suits. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

I compiled a list to keep me on track of all my projects that pertain to writing, and I thought I'd share it. On BZP: - Co-host the Ambage - Keep up with SSCC reviews - A long list of "to-reads" - Plan and write Nothing Destined with AZBlue and Tekulo - Post The Last Avatar Elsewhere: - Write a series of mystery puzzles - Script a comic series for an artist - Collaborate on a tongue-in-cheek article on gaming - Write an article on detective fiction - Coordinate a writing club In Life: - Revise my recently finished mystery novel - Maintain an 800-words-a-day minimum writing the sequel to the aforementioned - Convince a friend to let me read her creative writing class works - Critique same - Otherwise continue convincing said friend to embrace the gift I have noticed previously in her writings And by the way, Tekulo, sorry for the delay in my brainstorming response. But here you have my list of excuses. XD I'll reply soon, I prom--well, hope. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Crummy pictures, man. I can't read all of the titles on the spines. Honestly now, do you ever bother leaving a room like that? XD That's awesome. I want that reading chair. And all the bookshelves. Yes, especially the bookshelves. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Velox voices my thoughts exactly. It was the first Agatha Christie I read, and I can think of no better introduction to her brilliance. It's still my favorite. And I know what you mean about Don Quixote himself. His goals are great, but in his madness he's not very good at accomplishing them, and when he tries he goes about it the wrong way. But I'm hoping he'll learn as the story progresses. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Yes, that will be permitted. But we're limiting that at three entries per person. So by all means, if you have more than one idea, write up to three of them; or write all of them and pick three. As you wish. Just remember that no story posted before the start of each contest may be entered. It can have been written prior to the contest, but it must be new to BZP.Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Depression reviewed. An excellent read. Hey, now, that was my cleverly-reversed slogan. But I will forgive your usage as a parting gift.I'm sorry to hear that you're leaving. You'll be missed. Best of luck in your future endeavors, literary and otherwise!Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Words are failing me. I can't find just the right way to express how I feel about this story; it's difficult to find the right way to praise it. Beautiful, poetic, emotional, heartrending; all this and more. Your descriptions are vivid in their monochromaticity. I can clearly see this poor girl alone in her room, so far from the only warmth in her heart. I can feel her pain, I can almost cry with her. I want to take her in my arms and offer her all my sympathy, to do anything I can for her--but what can I do? What can anyone do? Only he can help her; but what can he do? He is there, a lifetime away, in a different world; and she is here in hers, alone. She knows this guy, I presume, over the internet. You never stated it explicity yet you made it abundantly clear. It's a tragedy, really, that we have become so absorbed in our technology, so enslaved by it that we can care this much for a person we have never met. It can cause us, even, to ignore the real world. It is a haven to which we can retreat in peace and serenity, and yet it is a prison, bars and all. It is both relief and anguish. But I suppose it has always been that people will seek an imaginary world to escape to. A timeless example is reading, and even more so, writing. But writing is different in that, while technology carries us away into the clouds beyond the real world, tied to it still only by the hearts behind the lines of text on the computer screen; while literature takes us into the secluded depths of the world, where reality is at its fullest yet we are most alone. I hope you'll forgive the digression. But it's your fault for writing such a great story with such a profundity as could suck one into its depths, which it did to me. To go on with my analysis, I applaud your choice of narration. First person has always been my favorite for its engaging style. Only it can so easily be imbued with personality and character and sapidity. And it makes it far easier in a case like this, when you want to leave your characters anonymous. That, too, I commend. We have "me," who would have been dull in third person; and we have "him," who would have been cheapened by a name. Names for either of them would have been superfluities that would have lent a vulgar and tasteless quality to your story. That said, there's not much more to say. It was short, but not too much so; you gave all the necessary details, but you didn't overwhelm your readers with information. Your plot was beauitful and touching, and I commend you for a job very well done. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

My achievements are logged here.Point Total: 160 points (Novice Novelist); One Review Token Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

Here I've compiled my list of achievements: Into the Sky(pe)! - Participate in a Skype Write Off (5 Points) Passion Manuscript Kiddie Pool - Post a short story. (10 Points) In the Jungle I Bet You Think You're Funny - Post a comedy. (10 Points) A Game of Ponies The Typewriter is Dead - Post a compiled total of 10 works across all forums. (25 Points) In the Jungle, Karzahni's Locker, Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens, Gold and Silver Remembrances, Jungle Beauty, Jungle Rhythm, Lhii and the Hunters of the Dark, The Necrofinch, Mirror, Heritable Honor. Lyrical Genius - Write a substantial songfic. (10 Points) Gold and Silver Remembrances Heartbreaker - Write a substantial romance. (10 Points) Lighthearted Vague Subject Matter - Post a story in Completely Off Topic. (10 Points) Broad Focus Lens - Post 5 stories in Completely Off Topic (30 Points) Forget-Me-Not Hill, The Right Path, Doctor Who?, The Chimera, Feel Good Critical Thinking - Substantially review a short story. (10 Points) The Golden Age Generalized Words - Review a story in Completely Off Topic. (10 Points) Inside Bring in the Specialists - Make a request from the SSCC. (5 Points) Repeat Customer - Make more than one request from the ECC or SSCC. (15 Points) Gold and Silver Remembrances, I am the Jungle A Lovely Contestant - Participate in an official BZP Writing contest. (10 Points) The Twilight Game Point Total: 160 points (Novice Novelist) One Review Token Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

It started out slowly and gained speed as it went along, becoming an exciting tale of espionage. It follows the adventures of one Peter Gudge, whom I can describe as nothing more than a bum, as he by happenstance becomes a spy for big business in "American City" in an attempt to root out Communism. I don't particularly care for the style of Mr. Sinclair, and though it is an interesting story, I personally cannot stand that knavish poltroon the writer calls his protagonist. If my words have not served enough already to sufficiently describe him, I will add to his squalor and pusillanimity that he is caddish, cavalier, greedy, and insufferably stupid. I personally enjoyed the book for the reason that I was interested in reading of the Red Scare of 1917-1920. If that is your curiosity, this is a great read. If you have no regard for the subject, I suggest you withhold your regard from this novel. What do you get when you cross a yellow teddy bear with a bullet in the head? . . . You get A. A. Milne. In the days before Winnie-the-Pooh, the creator of the iconic character of children's literature wrote a detective story of the most classical caliber. Written 1922, it followed all the rules and traditions of the genre--the rules, at least, of that particular period--in a most tasteful murder mystery. He created a very pleasant character in his sleuth, Tony Gillingham, a sort of knight-errant in his own right. The mystery was clever but a little simple; but my greatest complaint is not toward the author, rather toward the time. This was written just before the dawn of the Golden Era, during a period when it was not altogether uncommon for a mystery to supply only one suspect who, lo and behold! turns out to be guilty. In spite of this, Milne successfully supplied us with a good twist at the end and a most entertaining and amusing read that makes the novel well worth reading. I don't want to tell you what it's about, because that would spoil part of the fun of reading it. The plot is intentionally left a mystery for some chapters and therefore I will tell you only that it centers around four children who, in passing a series of strange tests, are chosen for a special task. In style, tone, and even some ways in story does the author much resemble Lemony Snicket. The difference, however, lies in that while Snicket was a cynical, melancholy drudge who wrote meaningless stories that ultimately left the reader wishing he hadn't read them, yet (in my case) mysteriously tempted to read them again; Stewart writes to the same level of plot complexity and characterization without the unexplained enigmas, profuse ambiguities, and pointless woes. There is, indeed, a happy, conclusive ending that left me very much sated and content and eager to read more. I will observe, if it was not already rendered clear, that this is a children's book; yet if you feel that matters, I refer you to that literary genius, C.S Lewis: "No reader worth his or her salt trots along in obedience to a time-table." For what audience a book was written cannot encumber my enjoyment of a very well-written tale. This is a classic story of love, music, mystery, adventure and a little madness. Not an uncommon thing in older works it starts out slowly with too great an emphasis on information, but soon picks up and brings us an exciting and heart-twisting tale about the Viscount Raoul de Chagny and the singer for whom his own heart croons dulcet ballads. I expected a mystery; but I got, and not to my disappointment, a very sweet romance. Have I not said before that this estimable woman is the only and only true Queen of Crime? Maybe I have not; but I affirm it now. The goings-on at the Meadowbank girls' school were enough to keep me constantly turning pages, but when you integrate with surprising incongruity a revolution in a Middle Eastern country and the activities of British espionage, you get the type of imbroglio that makes Agatha Christie famous. This, however, does not earn a rank, in my opinion, among her best novels. The ending--I will say nothing more!--disappointed me in some ways, though in others I was shocked and thoroughly satisfied by the brilliance of the authoress. I shall merely say that any Agatha Christie is worth reading, and that you must judge the denouement in your own opinion. Last but not least, the current quest upon which I have embarked: Most people--especially these days!--would look at a book of this length and this antiquity and suspect it of being dry and vapid. Especially after reading Phantom of the Opera, this is rather what I was inclined to expect. But I have been proved very tidily wrong. Cervantes's language (as translated into ours) is brilliantly colorful, and though there are touches of blandness and prolix digression to his storytelling, he has a style so engaging, a mind so clever, and a story so well worth telling that it does not matter. Ormbsy I have heard criticized on count of adhering too closely to the words of Cervantes. That is precisely what I wanted, and that is why I chose his translation over others, never mind its status of being the classic and most renowned. As I write I have only worked my way up to the tenth or eleventh chapter. I am enjoying it eminently thus far, and I will give you my overall thoughts when the time comes that I have done with the novel. Now let me tell you a little of the long-time desire I have had to read this book. I was first struck most starkly by this urge very near to a year ago, very probably in the early weeks of the month of September, if not the late ones of August. It has been a mere matter of procrastination that has kept me from its pages this long, and there would be no interest in the telling of that portion of the story. But for years, before I had ever even heard of the illustrious Don Quixote, I have had a high admiration for him. This esteem comes from those beautiful words immortalized for ever in the lyrics of To Dream the Impossible Dream. Since I first heard it the song has held a special place in my heart, and especially in the past year has it become a source of great inspiration to me. I have, in fact, used these words and this song as the base for two novellas: Stellar Quest and a piece of Neopets fan fiction, The Gestes of Donovan Kachote. No song has ever meant quite as much to me as this one; no words more than these--and I hope that, have you not heard the song before, that you will look it up now, and that the lyrics may touch you as they have touched me: To dream the impossible dream To fight the unbeatable foe To bear with unbearable sorrow To run where the brave dare not go To right the unrightable wrong To love pure and chaste from afar To try when your arms are too weary To reach the unreachable star . . . Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

The updates are here! We've got a lot of additions and changes, which I hope you find as exciting as I; but in case you're a little confused on certain points, allow me to offer explanations of what's new.The Fortnightly Flash-Fiction Contest is our first and most prominent new feature. It's a conglomeration of the fortnightly challenges and the write-offs, with steroids thrown into the mix. In essence, it's a perpetual version of the Flash-Fiction Marathon of June 2012 with a longer entry period. Most of the themes will be in the same style, while others will be more similar to the obsolete challenges.While this feature will be open to any and all members of BZPower with a pencil in their hand, Ambage members who win will receive their due perks: a review from our judge panel, and a spotlight in this topic.The monthly prompt will be a feature for any who desire a little inspiration. Like the "story starters" of the challenges, it will be a simple few words, the beginning of a sentence from which you can stem your ideas. There are achievements, and thus points, that can be gained through these; but on the whole, they're for your enjoyment. Take them and have fun writing your creative interpretation!Among the sustained features, the Review Passes will still be around. As always, any time you want a story reviewed you can take it there. Just read the most recent story requesting a review, offer your critique in its topic, then post your own request in the blog entry.Also continuing, the achievement and ranking system, which has been revised. Now, unless you want a dismal cipher beside your name, you are encouraged to claim the achievements for which you qualify, which you may do here in this topic.A new addition to that system are review tokens. For the first 100 points you earn, you will be awarded one; for every additional hundred, you will be awarded an additional token (e.g. two tokens for 200 points, three for 300). for every 100 points you earn you will be rewarded with one review token. You may redeem this at your leisure to receive one review for one story of your choice. These critiques will be given by our elite panel of contest judges.The Write-offs are to go on as usual, naturally. But they, too, are to receive a new feature: Workshops. These will be meetings held afterward for writers to get together and join forces to help, encourage and improve one another. The details of the events are still a little sketchy and this is not ready to be implemented today. But, after all, we don't want to overwhelm you guys all at once; we'll leave you something to look forward to.For all these great new features I'd like to thank all my fellow hosts: Cederak, 55555, Tolkien, and especially Velox. They've all done a lot for the Ambage, and they deserve all our gratitude for it. Thanks, guys!Any questions you may have are welcome here, or if you prefer your inquiries to remain unknown to the general populace, you may PM me or Velox. Never stop writing, friends, Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith

She reported this herself? Now that's what I call advertising.;P I jest. That's awesome! Felicitations! Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith